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Reviewer: Quirky_Girl (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, that was amazing. It seemed really believable, like Bella actually could have made up the entire vampire/werewolf world in her head. It'd be interesting to see how she explained the Volturi.

After so many of the same-old, same-old, this story really stood out.

Great job.

Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I am glad that you enjoyed the story and could really see how it was possible for Bella to have created the whole Twilight saga in her head.

I am glad that this story stood out so much for you.

Aerialla

Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

REminds me of that Buffy episode in season 6 - "Normal again" :)

Author's Response:
That episode was my inspiration. It is one of my favorites of that season. I hope that you liked the story.

Aerialla

Reviewer: OrangeBlossom (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow.

That really packs a punch.

Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the story and thanks for the review. I had a lot of fun writing this story.

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well I told you I would keep an eye out for your next story, I will tell you I was surprised that it was not a 2nd part to your Jasper story, but it was a pleasant surprise.

This is actually very good and would really make a good long story about when Bella is first admitted and her interactions with Edward and the rest of the patients and how she pulls them all into her delusion.

Since I work for a psychiatric hospital in Tennessee I can tell you this is really well written and I would love for you to consider writting as a long story. Actually I would love to read both of your stories as longer ones, you have a very good "what if" thought process and I'm sure you can do it. I will continue to look for more. Thanks

Author's Response:
OMG! Thank you so much for this review. I wanted this to really sound like Carlisle even though I knew it would be hard for some to read. Whenever a doctor speaks about patients to anyone they tend to be rather vague and wordy at the same time. I really do believe they teach classes in "doctor speak" in med. school.

At the present I am working on the continuation to One Drop called Second Chances. The first chapter is awaiting validation here but the first three will be posted to ff.net very soon. I hope you will read and enjoy it as well.

Somewhere down the line I might make Patient 239B more than a one shot but with starting a new job and Second Chances it will quite possibly be a ways off.

I am really glad that you are enjoying my work. I hope that the new story will hold your interest with the same enthusiasm.

Aerialla

Reviewer: rockstarvampire (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

I liked it! It was kinda strange but makes sense after reading your note. Very creative.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I'm actually really proud of this story. I wanted something that made the reader think and question. I added the note because I wanted them to get it instead of just going Huh. I knew in writing this story that it probably would not get a lot of reviews because it is a little harder to read.

Thanks again and I am very glad that you liked it.

Aerialla

Reviewer: Emerald_Rosalie (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Seriously, you are such a talented writer! This is fantastic! You captured everything so well!

It worked so well, and flowed effortlessly, and it was flawless.

Excellent work as always!

Speak to you soon!

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and for the amazing words. I wasn't sure how this story would turn out but I am really glad that the flow worked.

Flawless you say, now you are really making me blush.

Talk to you soon.

Aerialla

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