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Reviews For A Better Place, A Better Time

Reviewer: rockstarbabe (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 05:40 AM · On: 1. Shells

The beginning is really interesting, it could use a little bit more detail but its really good so far, please update soon as the story seems interesting and you write very well xx

Reviewer: T Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 08:04 AM · On: 1. Shells

Please keep writeing! I like the idea so far, but you should at more to your chapters; not words, but details and to and from scene.

Reviewer: Isabelli_mari (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 01:01 PM · On: 1. Shells

when you are going to update? i really want to know :o..

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 11:14 PM · On: 1. Shells

This story has a great beginning.......what name are the other chapters under??

Reviewer: lilithhime (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 06:32 AM · On: 1. Shells

I would love to read more soon. Great start!

Reviewer: Yvi-sama (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 06:37 AM · On: 1. Shells

Hey! Why don't you update?! This is so good already! Please UPDATE! *whine* You just can't do this to me/us!

Reviewer: IluvRobandEdward (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 06:15 AM · On: 1. Shells

please update. this fanfic sounds good

Reviewer: kosovare (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:52 PM · On: 1. Shells

when will you post next? this was really great writing! cant wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: kosovare (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:52 PM · On: 1. Shells

when will you post next? this was really great writing! cant wait for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: IluvRobandEdward (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:14 PM · On: 1. Shells

very good write more please

Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:50 AM · On: 1. Shells

This is a very well written story, I hope you post the rest of it up...

Reviewer: ReneeSue (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 05:43 PM · On: 1. Shells

oooh I think i like it!

Reviewer: Ceolmhor (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2008 02:00 PM · On: 1. Shells

Hurry up with Ch. 2! This one looks to be quite fun. Sort of a "Somewhere in Time" type story.

Reviewer: Ceolmhor (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2008 02:00 PM · On: 1. Shells

Hurry up with Ch. 2! This one looks to be quite fun. Sort of a "Somewhere in Time" type story.

Reviewer: MrsMcCoy (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2008 08:06 AM · On: 1. Shells

More!! Very good descriptions, can't wait to hear about the time travel.

Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2008 09:37 PM · On: 1. Shells

Nice start! Can't wait to see what else you have in store... ; )

Reviewer: gee3195 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2008 05:30 PM · On: 1. Shells

Can you please upload the next chapter? I love this fic! I can't wait to read the next part!

Reviewer: Lovebugs (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2008 12:53 PM · On: 1. Shells

I like the story I can't wait to find out what happens!

Reviewer: potterfriendz (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2008 03:16 PM · On: 1. Shells

I can't wait to read more. You have me intrigued and I'll patiently be waiting for the next chapter.

Reviewer: emm (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2008 11:53 AM · On: 1. Shells

I have always enjoyed time travel stories - one of my favorite series is the Time series by Caroline B. Cooney. I'm looking forward to seeing where you are going with this and can't wait for future chapters.

Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2008 12:56 AM · On: 1. Shells

I like the idea of this story, its going to be interesting. Can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: TeamEmbry (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2008 12:53 AM · On: 1. Shells

Hmm...interesting. VERY interesting. I don't knoow quite where you're going with this - and I like that! Very original, so far it seems well-written, and...intriguing. Keep going! I really want to know what happens next!! =)

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