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Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

Much happiness! More happiness in the next installment ( I hope ). I would love a sequel. Jakey goodness for all. Happy Holidays. Thanks for posting and cheering me up in my xmas frenzy.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: melonhead25 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

This was really good. I loved the ending! It was so sweet!


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Thank you!

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

Poor Jacob. So insecure. I enjoyed this but still wonder if there is going to be an Edward show down.

Author's Response: Edward showdown.  I actually haven't worked out all the details yet.  I know when Edward will come back, what the circumstances will be, and how people will react, but that's it.  I expect he and Jake will certainly have words at some point. but they haven't told me yet exactly how that would go.  It sounds nuts, but I usually start out writing a chapter with just a main idea in mind, and then the characters end up saying and doing all sorts of things on their own.

Reviewer: momof4luvntwisaga (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

Yeah- they back to being Jake/Bella!  Can't wait to see what happens when Edward gets back!  

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Thank you!

Reviewer: nemesisstar (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

Yay!  Oh I love Jake...I just love him SO much.  Especially your Jake.  He is so refreshing HUMAN and he makes mistakes then makes us fall in love with him all over again.  So glad your Bella has some common sense too.  Keep up the great work!

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Thank you!

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

Great chapter.... I am so glad Jacob came to his senses... but I love the way Bella helped put everything into perpective for Jake..and shes rite she should've still mentioned that she was seeing someone..without devulging alot of detail...simply saying its new and shes happy.. is more then enough...with the option to tell more later for Alice's Update soon..

Happy Holidays

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: cdettmann (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

Wahoooo! I'm so happy Jake feels better :) I love the how Bella made everything makes sense! I can't wait to see what happens when they meet up after work! Oooo I heart this story. Thank you for updating...

P.S.... Funny story, I was out to dinner tonight with my mother in law and husband and 2 kids and my mother in law was discussing Christmas present with my 2 and 3 year old...and she says " I wonder what mummy's getting for Christmas" and my 3 year old says "Mummy wants Jacob for Christmas!"... hahaha I laughed so hard (Busted) then my 2 year old says "yeah Mummy loves Jacob" ( talk about brainwashed)...haha It took a bit of smooth talking to my 60 year old mother in law to explain who Jacob was and that he was just a character in a book... haha oh man if only I could have Jacob for Christmas!!! haha

Author's Response:

I think I would die if that happened to me!

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

Thanks for the info on the sequel.  I can so appreciate the desire for a less rigid format!  Bravo to sticking to it so well for this one!

Have I told you that I love how your characters have amazing depth genereated with an economy of language that I find quite impressive and makes me rather envious! lol  :D

Gonna go make sure I fav authored you already just in case I had brain death!

Thanks for writing!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you! And yeah, I'll be happy to get rid of this constant dual-POV.  It was great for what I originally intended, but when the story grew, I got stuck in it.  Oh well, at least we got the full story from both sides, right?

Reviewer: wolvesrmyhomeboys (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV



Wolfy Fan Girl Squeal is back with a vengence!  all that Jakie heartfail was bad for my vocal chords.

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Thank you!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

another awesome chapter and I am just giddy at the thought of a sequel. Hooray!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: leebell (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

Great chapter as always I'm glad that Bella didn't get freaked out that Jake was worried that she would leave him and accuse him of not trusting her or something like that. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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Thank you!

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV


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Reviewer: novelista26 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

omg this chapter was awesome!! i'm so glad they talked!!! can't wait for more!!!!! please update super soon!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

They have made great progress. They were able to talk things out without flying off the handle. It shows just how far their relationship has come. :)

Great job on the chapter. Absolutely CANNOT wait for the sequel. ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: msnettie (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

so this story is coming to an end? great update! glad they are happy again!!! Work? I thought the place was mostly burned? anyway thanks for updating you are very good at updating regularly! I apreciate that!

Author's Response:

Ah, yes, a good portion of Newton's was damaged, but a few chapters back it was explained that part of the store was still useable.  It won't be business as usual, but it will still be business.  Bella's actually going to mention some of that in her next chapter.

Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

Aww, Jake, see?  If you'd just stop overreacting and calm down, you'd freak out less!  This was a very sweet chapter.  :)  I'm surprised at how quicky you're able to update!  How many drafts do you usually write before you post?

Author's Response:

I don't actually write drafts for this story.  I made an very vague outline that most people would say looks like nonsense, and it listed what the major plot points in the story would be.  If I had an idea about how a certain thought or conversation would go, I just wrote it out in the middle of the outline while it was fresh in my mind.  And then when it comes time to do the chapter, I just write the whole thing out, check for typos, and post.  I've never really had the need to write out drafts & polish them up---at least not in the way most writers do.  I think it's just that I'm really anal retentive about writing.  When I was in high school, we were required to turn in notes and a rough draft along with all our essays.  I just wrote the finished essay first, then fabricated a rough draft & notes.  My problem is that I can't make myself write something that I don't think is perfect to begin with.  As much as I try to draft things out, I end up writing the finished product as I go.

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV

Well, it was another wonderful chapter, of course. I'm so glad Jacob didn't let this fester into some horrible scenario. Can't wait for the next installment and of course, THE SEQUEL!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: kochanski (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Closure: Jacob's POV

Thank God for Emily, what would we do without her? ...probably still be watching Jake toss his cookies in some bathroom. Now let's hope he doesn't open his dumb mouth and tell Bella he thought she was leaving him for Edward, because I don't think we need to watch THAT train-wreck again.

Reviewer: kelly95 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 03:12 AM · On: Closure: Jacob's POV

I have spent forever reading your story and now im finally up to date :)

Pleeease update soon! Im totally addicted!

And I totally get your Edward in South America question! Everytime i read New Moon  i think that!


Reviewer: Jennae (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Closure: Jacob's POV

pleaseee post more. omg i cant take it when you leave it as them not being together!!!

Reviewer: twi-nighter (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Closure: Jacob's POV

That's nice to see Jake so... human and emotional. It will be interesting to see how Jake and Bella will interact when they get back together. I totally understand the a/n and can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: twi-nighter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV

Wow, great chapter. I really liked the way you wrote Emmet. I really liked Emmet and it was nice seeing him so caring and sincere. I can't believe that Bella didn't tell about Victoria! I mean the explanation was real enough but I really thought that she would have said something. I can't believe they left like that but it makes for an interesting twist to Jake's part of the story! Great chapter!

Reviewer: twi-nighter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV

This is sad...I knew that Jake would be miserable! I vaguely remember you saying that Edward would be back but I got caught up in your storyline that I didn't believe that this would happen! I know that Edward is not back yet but I'm with Jake... its over for him and Bella... I think... Anyway I have 2 more chapters to read so...

Reviewer: twi-nighter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV

Oh no... I knew that the Cullens were coming backinto the picture but I just wasn't ready for it!!! How is Jake going to make it through this?!? And the cliffie... is it Alice or Edward... I need to know! Great chapter... reading on now!

Reviewer: quirkyquad (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Closure: Jacob's POV

Loving it!  I think I like your story better than the original (shh!)

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