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Reviewer: miah wolfe (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
omg, my... person from school (not sure what to call her) told me about this site and all your awesome work. i agree with her.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
Great chapter! Stumbled across!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I started reading this fic because I was searching for Jake and Bella fics. I found the Jake and Bella Chronicles, and this story. I like it, and if there will be a sequal, I will read it too.
Author's Response: There will definitely be a sequel---and maybe a couple of extra one-shots. Wow, when it finally ends I'll have a hard time letting go!
Reviewer: blondieja (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
Great chapter. I read the summary while browsing through the Storiesw under the New Moon section of this site. As I said before, I am hardcore E/B but in all honesty it was the depth of emotion that you showed in Jacob. He was no longer the home wrecker in this story, he was real and so were his feelings. I'm still E/B, but I love this story. Thanks so much for sharing and have a Merry Christmas.
Reviewer: grneyedhulagrl (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I saw the banner for Breathe Again while looking at other New Moon stories. The banner caught my eye immediately. It was honestly the reason I signed up to this site and I can't believe it's turned out to be such a good story.
Reviewer: Much2shy142 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I stumbled upon this story while looking for J/B fic a awile ago. Thanks for writing cause I love reading it.
Reviewer: twilifecrisis (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
You did it again! Jake's perspective always completes the picture, yet each one is perfect all by itself. I hope this story never ends! Enjoy the tamales!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
Hey! JUst got back from NY! Sorry i haven't reviewed, i can review like 8 times if you want!
I got into breathe again when i just started fanfic and my first chapter of my first story was up and i was so excited when it was on there, and right below it was breathe again... i saw the amount of reviews and thought My God, it must be amazing, and you did not disapoint. At first i was like, you can't... don't read a Jake fic, don't... but my curiosity got the better of me and here i am, hanging on every word
Reviewer: mizkim345 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Dilemma: Bella's POV
nice chapter,but i think that u should add more in the beginning on how bella got in the truck
Reviewer: mmeyer323 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I am not sure how I started reading it, I probably went to the most recent and started from there. Now I look forward to my favorite word in my email.....update.......I cross my fingers and get so excited when I read breathe again. This is my favorite story of them all and I can't wait for another update. I don't know what i'm going to do when the story is complete.
I love it.
Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I was tired of Edward being such a control freak so I specifically searched for Jacob-centric stories. This was the first I found and I think you were only on chapter 2 or 3 when I started following along.
Reviewer: cdettmann (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
Well my Team Jacob buddy found the Twilighted website and told me I had to read it! So I thought yeah yeah ok I'll see what she talking about and seriously was HOOKED from the 1st chapter! U r freaken awesome and deserve a medal! lol..I started reading it and stayed up all night and didn't stop till I got up until your most recent post and only then could I carry on with my normal life :P
Loved Jacob POV... *sigh* He is just too adorable! If loving him is wrong, then I don't want to be right..lol It.s 10.30am Christmas morning here is Australia so thank you for an awesome Christmas present!
Reviewer: Ruka (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV
Oh, good, I'm so glad you won't be doing the dual POV. Reading the same stuff twice gets on my nerves. I love varying POV's, but only on the good parts, lol. Overlapping is great for some, but for ALL it gets a little boring. =P Hope you have fun writing the sequel =D I know I'll have fun reading it ^_^ I can't wait until it's up!
Reviewer: DazedNCnfused (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
I love how Jake has kept better control of his emotions without flying off the handle as his first reaction. Bella's not the only one who has grown in their relationship, and is shows beautifully here. :)
Keep up the great work and can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: Kyriada (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
How awesome/sad/obsessed am I? Seeing a new chapter of Breathe Again seriously counted as an early Christmas present for me.
Soooo
I stumbled across this story because I am a hardcore Jacob lover. I mean, I'll read some E/B, but only if Jake is treated with respect. I hate evil Jake fics or fics were he is just written off with some random imprint. Yours is seriously one of the best and most believable J/B stories I have ever written. How many more chapters do we get? Do you know what the sequel is going to be called?
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
Jake really got off easy. lol You were AWFULLY nice to him. But then, he did engage in copious amounts of self-flagellation before compelling himself to actually talk to Bells.
I started reading BA shortly after I joined this site, because I had written a J/B fic before I knew there was a fandom (wrote a lot before I knew there was a fandom, lol) and wondered what was already out there. I think BA was on the recent updates page and I dove in. :) It's still (for me) the epitome of the Jake/Bella pairing. Which is why I never did post mine. Truth!
I am very curious as to the next vampire appearance (reg or vegetarian) and how Victoria stages her next effort.
I hope that 2010 brings you all the best of good things!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Honesty: Jacob's POV
hmm what is jake up to and will alice call?
Author's Response: Well, Jake's got some business stuff and some personal stuff to take care of. And Alice will call. Probably not before this story ends, but definitely before & during the sequel.
Reviewer: lilithhime (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV
Wow, allot has happened since I last read this. I am as always still very much enjoying your story. And I for one actually see your point in your answers for the reviewers at the begining.
And as for your question... On Charlie's behalf, I think he's just happy as all get out that Edward is off in another continant..or probably would be even happier to find out that Edward joined the space program and is on the moon (We all know that's what Charlie secretly wishes). lmao
Author's Response: Thank you! And I think you're right. Charlie's got too much of a grudge against Edward now to really care where he is.
Reviewer: justmallory (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Honesty: Bella's POV
Good for her, speaking up like that! And good for Jake for just confessing he's a moron sometimes. I mean, what boy isn't?
Reviewer: justmallory (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Closure: Jacob's POV
Your A/Ns rock.
Reviewer: justmallory (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Closure: Bella's POV
Glad to see her working things out with the Cullens---well, two of them at least. She's right to be mad, but they mean too much to her to just be gone forever.
Reviewer: justmallory (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Unexpected: Jacob's POV
Dammit Jake! You know better than that! Now go home and fix it!
p.s. You should totally kill Jake just to see how many flames you get.
Reviewer: justmallory (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Unexpected: Bella's POV
I just hated them for having normal, uncomplicated lives.
Been there!
Reviewer: justmallory (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Separation: Jacob's POV
Jake shouldn't have to go. He should always stay with Bella. All the time. Please tell Sam that for me. K?
Reviewer: justmallory (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Separation: Bella's POV
Yay! Mike's gonna be her friend! And if I know you, he's actually gonna be a pretty good guy, isn't he?
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