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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 125: Bella

lol

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 140: Edward

gotta love naughty sarge, i dont think i would be able to stay quiet if it was me in that elevator.. lol

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 139: Bella

sarge is so sweet, cant wait to see what else he does

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 140: Edward

OMG...as I take a deep breath..hehe:)  So sad to see that the end of their time together is coming, but it won't be long and they will be together forever!!

Reviewer: marissa64 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 140: Edward

I am SO going to miss this story when it's finished.  I just love it and I look forward to every update.  Thanks for the great story!

Reviewer: IANticipate (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 140: Edward

Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2012 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 140: Edward

holy mother of sex! Edward you devil, Bella, you seducer, no panties, in an elevator, up against a glass wall! I need an extra sham wow

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

FYI, the water described above is actually not the Pacific Ocean. I lived half my life in the Seattle suburbs and spent a lot of that time at the waterfront and downtown Seattle. I've been up in the Space Needle many times since it opened in 1962 for the 1962 World's Fair. Anyway, back to the water. What you described is actually the Puget Sound. From the Seattle Waterfront, you can see the many island in it. Beyond that, you are able to see the Olympic Mountains and Mt Olympus on the Olympic Peninsula. The Pacific Ocean is beyond the mountains toward the west. If you follow the Puget Sound north, eventually you come to the Straits of Juan de Fuca and the San Juan Islands and then the Pacific Ocean. The sight from the Waterfront along all the piers is beautiful. A better view can be found while riding one of the Ferries to Bremerton which departs from the waterfront, near a very famous restaurant, Ivar's Acre's of Clams and a tourist shop called Ye Olde Curiosity Shoppe that has a mummified man that was killed by a gunshot to the stomach. The view even more so from the Observation Deck on the Space Needle at the Seattle City Center. In fact, from the Observation Deck looking southeast, you can see Mt. Rainier if there isn't too much clouds. To the southwest, Tacoma and Commencement Bay. The Seattle Underground Tour is very enlightening and yes the first flushing toilet was installed in Seattle by a man named John Crapper and emptied from the hills of Seattle into the Sound. The guide who escorted my group said that when the tide came it, the water rose back up the pipes and flooded people's homes with sewage. Your description of places in Seattle, makes me homesick as I now live in Vancouver WA and don't get much time to go back to visit Seattle. Where else can one drive one or two hours from Seattle and reach the mountains, rivers, lakes, the Sound and the Ocean? I really loved this chapter. Thanks   DJ

Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 37: Bella

I figured I would stop by before I keep going through the MANY chapters I've fallen behind with. Stupid work and college are counterproductive to
Sarge reading, sigh. I think he's either gonna get deployed for a while, or gonna get promoted... or something even worse... Ah, this is awesome! Ok, I'm off to keep obsessing over how hot Sarge is and how funny and ballsy Bella is.

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

Aww yay! I can't wait to see them on a date :) 

That'll be so cute! Love the sight-seeing bits too. Love the sexy times but it's good to see them enjoying each other in person outside the bedroom too ;)

Reviewer: lizde (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

I was in Seattle for a conference earlier this year. I had dinner at this little French place called Le Pichet near Pike Place market. It was quite possibly the best meal I've ever had in my life. Sarge should take her there. I'm just sayin';).

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

cant wait to see what else sarge has planned for bella

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 137: Bella

gotta love sexy bath time with sarge..

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 124: Edward

Swww swoon so sweet and hot perfect!!!

Reviewer: allypop (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

How sweet would it be if he purposed at dinner?!? Love this story spool much!

Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

thank you for another fabulous chapter to this story and cant wait for tomorrow.

Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 137: Bella

hmmmmm a bath with the Sarge, you are spoiling me........but i must read on :)

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

Thank you!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

YAY:)  I loved these two chapters!!  And I agree with Bella..I will miss their emails.  But 3 weeks is nothing..and then they will be back together again!

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

Love you girls!

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 137: Bella

hmm...

Talking point about living with a military man after you have not. It is different. My step father was a First Sgt. He was so picky about so many things. We as a family were always prepared for evacuation. All hangers were placed on rod going one direction. Shoes shined before placing in closet. Socks folded a certain way as well as other items. Making a bed? Well let me say this it better be neat and only military style. He was loving and kind and had so many stories. He died when I was 17 years old of his service connected disability. I loved him and missed him for so many years.  SGT Mac or Red were his nicknames.  When Korea broke out he was not able to go and his guys came and told him good bye before they deployed. He cried he said he raised those guys and worried for their safety.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 123: Bella

Sham WOW!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 138: Edward

Adore the room service idea, and Edward being naked, might have been a shock........! LOL!!!! Love the teasing, about all of the attention from the tour guide and the waitress. LOL! Got to love some teasing!!!! It is perfect that neither one of them had been to the Space Needle before! One of many first times for these two!!! Cannot wait for them to have a special dinner. I'm sure it will be a tearful goodbye again, but they know it is three weeks until they have forever together, never being separated for long periods of time again! Such a great story! lobe it all!!!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 137: Bella

The love they share is so so so adorable. The way you write the scene, really does make us see the love between these two. The look in his eyes, the sounds she makes.....wow! Truly adore it! Love it all......can't wait for more!!! The clothes they wear, everything, just brings your story to life! Reading on!!!! Xoxo

Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2012 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 136: Edward

love the story, and i loved the birthday surprise....i have to ask ...where can i get my very own Sarge???? waiting patiently for the next update......

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