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Reviewer: penstoph5 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

I AM SAD TO SEE THIS STORY END. I LOOKED FORWARD EVERY MORNING TO READING THEM. I HAVE A SON IN THE MILITARY AND CAN RELATE TO THIS. PLEASE LET US ALL KNOW WHEN YOU TWO HAVE NEW STORIES FOR ALL OF US, IT WOULD BE SAD IF U BOTH DIDN'T ENTERTAIN US AGAIN WITH THE WONDERFUL STORIES WE ALL KNOW YOU TWO CAN WRITE. WOWWWWWWWW AND THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: pyroprincess89 (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2012 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 171: Bella

Cookie is definitely fitting for Sarge's first kitten. And totally random, but I had a imaginary friend named Cookie growing up. Her name was Cookie Moore and she always wanted more cookies.

Reviewer: mada (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

well, that certainly hit my fanfiction spot - thanks girls . a truly lovely funny story - hope you can find it in you to do another !!

Reviewer: hughug (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 171: Bella

I think cookie was a perfect name :)

Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

How lovely I looked forward to your updates every day and was thrilled to see them you guys did an awesome job and I can't wait to see anything else you put out there thanks

Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 134: Edward

That was the cutest thing ever!!! I absolutely LOVED this chapter and the kids were priceless... Ryan was so cute. I'm really glad I'm playing catch up because reading this post by post would probably have killed me! I do t even want to go to work because it takes time away from reading this but unfortunately, I was not born rich so I must...
P.S. That better not be the only red bow he has on..... ;)

Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

Omg!!! I love it! Sorry I haven't commented but I just wanted to get to this point! You and Jenny have made my day with this story! Sad to see it end! But will be in my favorites forever.

Reviewer: karemay (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

I'm VERY sad to see this story end. It's one of the best story's I've read. The people in this story are so real, and it's like things in life can and do happen like this. I want to thank you 2 for a fantastic beautifully written story. I just can't say enough about this. I just freak'en loved it!! Thank you again.....

 

Kare

 

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

So, so sad that it's actually over! But what an amazing journey and the ending was perfect. It's very "them". Can't wait for the epilogue and outtakes, and anything else y'all write in the future :)

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

AWWW perfect beginning to their life, two new fur babies and a beautiful ending.........sniff sniff
sequel sequel sequel would love that

Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 171: Bella

great name for the kitten! how appropriate :)

Reviewer: Red Koolaid (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

Ahhh, what a great ending! I truly enjoyed this story--seeing it every day just waiting for me. And yes, I did read it at work on my iPad, but don't tell anyone. It was a great way to start the day.

Looking foward to your next adventure! This one was classic. Thanks so much.

Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

This was a wonderful story and I'm sad that it is ending. You two kept me captivated and I was always happy to see the updates in my email. Great work you two!!!! 

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

thanks for a bright and happy story at a time we needed it.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 172: Edward

lol

Reviewer: krissieli (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

I can't believe it's over.... Every word of it was wonderful and I so enjoyed having something so well written to look forward to on a daily basis. You girls NEVER disappointed. Thank you.

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 173: Bella

I can't believe I'm crying because its the end of a story..that's a first for me:)  I will be looking foward to the outtakes and the epilouge. 

I have been gettting up every morning and the first thing I have done was get on the computer log into facebook and then check to see if you had added chapters..its gonna be weird not reading about Sarge and Bella:)

But I will be checking back in a week or so to see if you have added anything..can't wait!!!!

 

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 172: Edward

I'm sitting here trying not to tear up..he is so wonderful!

 

Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

OMG I can't believe that I won't be able to get my daily fix of Sargeward after tomorrow - my life will no longer be complete - I guess I will have to continue with your finished fics on ffn...lol;;;; :0)

Reviewer: sunshine_yellow (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

thanks for a good story make some please

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

Thank you!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

Awww, no no no. Just like Edward running out of Bella's cookies!!!! Thinking of running out of your chapters is just too hard to think of right now! Damn!! Loved this chapter so much! Such an amazing first holiday together! Adored their gifts, and have yo agree with Bella on her book!! Not a pop up book for kids, well maybe a POP UP book for Edward, haha!! Loved the composition paper too! Love this damn story!!! Xoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 169: Bella

Such a picturesque scene. Snow, fireplace, Edward, kisses, loveeee it! Can't wait for more, so I am reading on! Xoxo

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

Loved Loved Loved these two chapters:)  Two of my favorite things...Christmas and Twilight!  Can't wait for the next two:)

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2012 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 170: Edward

loved their presents to each other but so sad the story is almost over!

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