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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 23: Bella
Are you serious? I'm gnawing on my finger nails a bit, waiting to see if the guys are all three okay! It's great that Bella, Rose and Alice have each other for support. It has to help to have close friends in the same boat , so they understand what you're feeling.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 22: Edward
I knew it was going to be back to Kandahar for the squad, but what the hell can you do about it? Now he has to concentrate on his men and staying alive, and Bella has to worry herself to a frazzle until she hears from him again. I get a smile on my face as they draw closer and learn more about each other, just can't help it!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 21: Bella
Just the right touch to have Jazz and Emm show up and horn in on the conversation! I too think the meet with the C.O. won't be a good thing. It's 2:30 a.m. here, so I'd best get my old bones to bed before it's daylight!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 20: Edward
Can't say snickerdoodles are what I would want to shove in his mouth, but that's just me! I knew they would knock each other's socks off! Just had a feeling!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 19: Bella
What good friends Bella has! We all need at least one, and some have none! It helps so much to bounce things off people who have your back, that you trust implicitly.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 18: Edward
I would be very surprised if the both of them weren't a little nervous. This is getting real serious, real fast!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 17: Bella
I have only one thing to say here. Why the hell wouldn't she love him? He's damn near perfect!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 16: Edward
Could this guy get any better than he obviously is? I doubt it, seriously, but am more than willing to keep trying to find out! I also want to wrap him up and take him home and hide him! Does this make me a bad old woman?
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 15: Bella
After Bella admitted to wanting hot sex, and it had been a while, can't help hearing the gears meshing in Edward's head! Spinning out of control , you might say! These email exchanges are getting better all the time!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 14: Edward
Great questions, too. Hate to think of the guys having to go back to Kandahar, but they have to do their jobs. What a revelation , when Edward told Bella of his fears for his men, that he wouldn't get them all home safely!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella
It's kind of sweet that Bella thinks she has a lot of flaws. I'll bet Edward doesn't agree! The twenty questions thing may prove quite interesting.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 12: Edward
Maybe there's a way to introduce Mike and Tanya, sounds like they deserve each other! Still loving the way Bella and Edward are so open and honest with each other. Looking forward to the Skype session on Saturday!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 11: Bella
Seeing the flirty thing going on is fun and I hope it only gets more so. These two really like each other! What's not to like? They have lots in common, especially their sense of humor. If you can laugh together, you've got it made, trust me!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 10: Edward
Definitely a mutual admiration society going on here. As long as Sarge and Emmett and Jasper stay out of harm's way and get back home, I'll be thrilled. They all would have a good time together! It's so nice that Bella and Edward worry about each other, must mean they care!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella
Love that Bella told Edward how hot he is! Way to go, girl! These two are getting so comfortable with each other, Skypeing should really be fun! The more they discover about the other, the more they both find to admire. It's cool that she offers advice, too, and always in his best interests.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 8: Edward
Love that Edward opens up to Bella, though he's usually very private. The story of Carlos is pretty damn sad, and I'm sure some of the guys wonder, why him and not me? Can't wait to see Bella's reaction to his picture and vice versa.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 7: Bella
Totally agree with you about meeting, falling in love and marrying! Met my husband through a friend, went to a Halloween party with him, and we've been together ever since. From Ocober to March, then we married, and it will soon be fifty-two years! Can't believe how time flies when you're having fun! Bella and Edward have a lot in common already, they both care very much for others, her students and his men. No surprise that she was touched by his losing his parents, or that she volunteered to be his pretend family.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 09:55 PM · On: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward
Guys, most guys, love peanutbutter cookies! The back and forth between them is better and better. I agree that the getting to know you phase is working well. It sounds to me like what any of us would want to discover about someone we liked.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 09:44 PM · On: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward
The emails are going to be a lot easier, faster and more fun than letters, though I'm old enough to remember fondly writing to guys in the service in the fifties. It's cute how Edward called Bella Cookie Thief, at least she knows he loves them, and coffee, of course. I like that he actually tells her what he would like her to send him.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 09:33 PM · On: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
I can tell his mama raised him right, as evidenced in his reply to Bella's package and letter. It's good to know that what you do is appreciated and welcomed! I feel a friendship will develop between two very nice people.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 09:04 PM · On: Coming Home Prequel: Bella
Yay, Bella! I like this caring girl, and think it's so neat that she has sympathy for a soldier dumped by his worthless girlfriend. It's really sweet of her to send a care package to him, along with a letter. Hope this will lead to them becoming friends!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2012 08:56 PM · On: Coming Home Prequel: Edward
Ever heard the phrase, good riddance to bad rubbish? Sure seems to fit Tanya's bullshit in this instance! His squad will have sarge fixed up in no time! Serves her right, too!
Reviewer: SheaBunny (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2012 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 7: Bella
This story makes me miss my husband like crazy. I love how it's a bit different for everyone, yet so so similar. Big smiles from this military wife.
Reviewer: Naeyeli (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bella
IM REALLY LIKING THE STORY....BUT...WHY ARE OUR AUTHORS NOTES LONGER THAN THE CHAPTERS????
Reviewer: Naeyeli (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bella
IM REALLY LIKING THE STORY....BUT...WHY ARE OUR AUTHORS NOTES LONGER THAN THE CHAPTERS????
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