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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 72: Edward

I get the feeling Edward will really, really enjoy his birthday this year! Just sayin' !

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 71: Bella

Edward's always saying he would do anything for her, so he might just let her tatoo her ownership on his gorgeous ass! Can't wait to see what Alice and Jasper come up with for a visit to Florida!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 70: Edward

These fortunate young men are blessed with three of the most thoughtful, caring women! How nice to arrive to new linens and cookies! Rest up guys, you'll need all your strength when the girls come to visit!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 69: Bella

I may as well save my breath about Renee, she's never going to really be a proper mom to Bella. Lucky for her she has an understanding husband and a very  smart, adult daughter! Good thing Bella takes after her dad, I always thought!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 68: Edward

Selling Jasper and Emmett's middle names was too funny, not to mention profitable! Chili and grilled meat, what a combo! Heaven forbid a vegetable wanders in there somehow! Well, at least they won't starve!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 67: Bella

I have faith that plans will be worked out to allow some time together, for all three couples.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 66: Edward

All three of the girls are teachers, so they must have some time off during the summer to plot a course to Tampa! Being the smart women they are, I see a Florida vacation looming on the horizon!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 65: Bella

I sure hope that call  has bolstered Bella's faith in herself. Never doubted for a minute that Edward would lay her fears to rest! Too bad they won't let the girls meet the plane, but the military has it's rules!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 65: Bella

I sure hope that call  has bolstered Bella's faith in herself. Never doubted for a minute that Edward would lay her fears to rest! Too bad they won't let the girls meet the plane, but the military has it's rules!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 64: Edward

Worry, hell! I've lived seventy years, and noticed some time ago, worry is just a waste of time and energy! I had faith  in Edward setting his Bella straight on a few things!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 63: Bella

Brave, and selfless to a fault, that's our Bella! She's just too good to be true sometimes, you know? I bet she's about to get an earful of love and commitment, from her Sarge!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2012 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 62: Edward

My best guess would be the green-eyed monster may have reared it's ugly head. Maybe Bella thinks some buxom fraulien will grab a hold of Edward, who knows? I'm certain he wouldn't be the least bit interested if some girl came on to him in the pub!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 61: Bella

Perhaps a bit too much celebration, Miss Swan? The next day is never as much fun as the night before, especially if you get sick. I would rather take a beating than vomit, I absolutely hate to!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 60: Edward

The shirt, the dog tags and music! What could be more Edward? Even better he got cookies and music! I'm surprised he doesn't choke himself, three cookies at once could be dangerous!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 59: Bella

The excitement builds as they get closer to seeing each other in the flesh, so to speak.  Hope time flies by for Bella and Edward, Jasper and Emmett! Oh, the possibilities!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 58: Edward

I'm so wrapped up in this story that I got tears  in my eyes reading about the guys coming to Florida ! How wonderfil is that? I'd bet my last dollar that all three of the girls will be spending some time  near that base and soon!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 57: Bella

Really makes me want to just hug both of them and tell them to hang on, they'll be together soon!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 56: Edward

Then, some of us are just old and slow! It's always fun sending you guys a couple lines and a kind word!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 55: Bella

Thank you! In all the happy dancing about the ILY's, I had forgotten about the care package! Shame on me! I'm glad Alice and Rose kept themselves and Bella busy, so she didn't go crazy waiting for Sunday. That trip to the firing range is going to be a hoot!Bella is always so accepting of her mother's eccenticities. Sometimes I just want to slap her and remind her who's supposed to be the mom in this relationship! Thank God Charlie is so opposite!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 54: Edward

Promise me anything, but get these two together before we all burst into flames! Sunday Skype sounds very promising, by the way! The way they keep pushing each others limits is great!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 53: Bella

I have to share a little secret with you. When I saw how many chapters there were(175 !) I almost didnt give this a shot! I'm sure glad I didn't listen to myself, this is a wonderful story!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 52: Edward

Talk about perfectly proportioned! Be stil my heart! That was so funny , asking the doctor to measure for accuracy! The questions they ask each other are amazing. It's the crash course on getting to know someone.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 51: Bella

I have a feeling that a bunch of readers would love to give Sarge a checkup, at the very least! Bella told him if she wanted to know, she would ask, and by golly, she asked! I wait with bated breath for his answer! This is bound to be really good!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 50: Edward

Reality shows and Once Upon a Time! Who would have thought? I love them beginning to make plans for the future. That is the best part of life, I think, making plans, dreaming together.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2012 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 49: Bella

Between the writing of this story and the author's notes, you two seem to be having as much fun writing as all of us are having reading! Those naughty girls! I'll bet the guys can hardly wait for those pictures! Anything to help pas the time. Glad Edward gets a few days to recuperate, poor baby!

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