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Reviews For Coming Home
Reviewer: alaskancoppertop (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

I LOVE DOUBLE POSTINGS!!!!! My husband is in Afgan right now and he only reads certain stories or chapters of stories that I convince him to read after bullying him for four days, and I managed to convince him that he needs to read THIS story!! WHILE DEPLOYED!!

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

Oh hell yeah!!! Finally..and a double posting??  you have made my weekend!  And something that is going to make me need a fan sitting right next to me..haha!!  I can't wait:)

Reviewer: BeccaBoo (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

Oh I love love love this story...  And a another double post tomorrow ??!! I don't think my little heart can take it!!! 

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 10:59 AM · On: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

Love love love their interaction so far!! Pushing "next" now to read more :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

I don't even have words.  My family thinks I'm nuts I'm smiling like an idiot with tears running down my face...big *sigh* I can't wait for Sunday and I will bring my ShamWow! lol

Thank you for the double postings!!!!!!!  Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 86: Edward

Edward is so sweet,,,And Emmett quit trying to get the guys in trouble! lol

Reviewer: sparkle24 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

Yeah, I am so happy they finally met, honestly it was really beautiful.  I enjoy this story very much and look forward to reading it everyday, yes at work too, LOL.  Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.  Looking forward to tomorrow.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 85: Bella

I can't imagine how nervious she must be.....I'd be peeing myself! lol

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

SQUEEEEEEEEEE  OMG OMG OMG I am so excited that my hubby is cominghome soon!!!  With him coming home your promise of lemons and all that no cold showers for me and no stock pile of batteries teehee sorry one of my gf's made the joke and I just thought of her sparkly little friend teehee!!!  I just can't wait I love teh story I love your bater you guys just made tehmost perfect story ever!  I wonder how long you will take it will we see him move in wil we see them get married will we see them have little privates teehee!  Just wow totaly swoon wow!!!!

Reviewer: WolfREADERgypsy (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

Love it! Great great great job! I could see every single emotion in my mind as you both explained them. Can't wait for tomorrow! 

Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

I'll have you two know that after all the publicity I bought the ShamWows...was this story just a publicity stunt? LOL

How is it possible that 4 chapters feelt like 4 paragraphs? it wasnt nearly long enough! You should REALLY surprise us and post 2more chapters this evening...that would be truly unexpected LOL

all I can say is: well done :)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 87: Bella

SQUEEE!!! OMG OMG OMG

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 86: Edward

Hes such an amazing man!  My hubby comes home Monday so excited squeee your story and timing are perfect!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 85: Bella

sniffle omg omg I can see why she would be scared but she has to have faith sniffle

Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

Yes! Hee Hee!

Thankxxx so much for the double posting! Can't wait for the one tomorrow! I practically Alice bounced all the way through this chapter. Great job!

Take care!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 88: Edward

Best birthday ever.  Does Bella have a keyboard waiting for Sarge at the house?

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 06:02 AM · On: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

I really like your writing style and can't wait to read more! There's a M*A*S*H episode that has the same bit from this chapter in it. Guy got shot, gets a "Dear John" letter saying she wants her picture back since they've broken up and she's re-engaged and the doctors make the same letter saying "I'm not sure which picture is yours so pick yours out and send the rest back." although I think if it were me, I'd conveniently forget to include HER picture and just throw it away. Especially with her modeling aspirations. But I can be a heartless bitch when I want to be :)

Can't wait to see how Bella and Edward get to interact! You go girls :)

Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 05:20 PM · On: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

Have set my alarm. Can. Not. Wait!!!

Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 84: Edward

Squee - can't wait!!!!

Reviewer: Spunkyrancid (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 84: Edward

I CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT TWO CHAPTERS! POST THEM TONIGHT!! LOL PLEASE! 

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 14: Edward

Hi! I just decided to give your story a try and am HOOKED! Sorry I haven't commented before, I'm just one of the "quiet, background types" apparently.
I just couldn't resist that whole "biggest fear" thing. I'm right there with you on the whole creepy clown thing, Deb. I think part of the reason is because when I'm about to fall asleep, my brain suddenly mixes the words "Chuckie", "clown", "darkness", and "no one around to hear you scream". Yeah, I need to stop watching all those horror movies and murder mysteries before bed. The other reason is because when I was little, I saw a clown try and flirt with my dad. My mom was right beside me. Yeah, not something I want to see again anytime soon. I also have some twisted case of claustraphobia mixed with a fear of of being alone. where I actually like small spaces as long as I'm the only one there. If there are other people with me, I freak. I even freak when I roam the mall by myself. If I have a friend, though, I'm cool. I don't care if it's my mom, my best friend, or one of the little 3 year olds that I babysit, so long as I'm not alone. That's about it. ~RPW

Reviewer: bettyfan (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 84: Edward

SQUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol wow finally they are going to meet in person.............just the prize i shall recieve for following this story........thank you so much for the daily updates. cant wait for tomorrows update......muah

 

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 84: Edward

Really can't wait for thenext update.  I'm very curious about that delivery Bella spoke of in her chapter

Reviewer: apriln (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 84: Edward

yay!! its almost time for all that sexual tension to explode!

Reviewer: Rie (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 84: Edward

Is it update time yet?

No..? k

How about now?? :D

 

Yay...can't wait!

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