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Reviewer: lapush-limitato (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2012 02:17 PM · On: The Fireball

It is not a terrible move with the Cullens because that was their original move, to fake her death. It works. I am really enjoying this and can't wait to read the rest, but I am working on my own too so I am inbetween that and coursework as well. But knowing me I will drop everything to read this.

Reviewer: lapush-limitato (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2012 11:11 AM · On: A Visit to La Push

JAKE LOVES BELLA!!!!!!!!!!!! hehehehehhe

Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 03:30 AM · On: Epilogue

Brava! Great ending

Reviewer: Itgirl94 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 04:23 PM · On: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

I love love love this story. I hope you make a continuation for it :)

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Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2012 01:28 AM · On: Hybrid

Iiiiinteresting. "Biology" mixes, and *poof*.


Author's Response:

Thanks.. it did seem like an interesting concept. ;)

Reviewer: ClariCullen (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2012 12:31 AM · On: An Unexplainable Moment

hurry and submit more chapters, MORE MORE MORE : ) 

Author's Response:

That's what I'm doing now. :) Glad you're enjoying it.. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2012 12:45 PM · On: An Unexplainable Moment

So is she having twins...One Edwards and one Jakes????  They are both making her change to protect her and themselves.

Author's Response:

Well, I'm posting the new chapter soon! And what's going on will be revealed. :) It'll be a surprise, I'm sure... and hopefully a good one. heh. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 09:21 PM · On: Phases

So, my guess is that Bella is pregnant with Jake's baby and the baby is responding to the vampires because he (don't like to call a baby it) will be the next Alpha.

Good baby, protect Mommy!

Thanks - Xanath

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! :) And hey, not a bad guess! I am posting the next chapter very soon, so more will be revealed. ;) 

Reviewer: jlove34 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2012 02:17 AM · On: Revealed

This rocks! I'm not a "lemon" fan, but I do like how this story is progressing. I just skip over the sex bits! Haha

Author's Response:

Thank you! :D Even if you're not a lemon fan (hey not everyone is), I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: jlee91587 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 04:28 PM · On: Back Home

I love this story! Honestly, I'm not even a Jacob fan, but I CANNOT put this down. As soon as I get an email that you've updated, I have to read it. Please keep the chapters coming, I yearn for more.

Author's Response:

I always love hearing that... someone who may not be a J or J/B fan that gives it a chance and enjoys it. Always makes me happy! :) I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: legnalive (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2012 03:49 AM · On: Halloween

This is great! Please write more :)

Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying. :)

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 04:59 PM · On: Destinations

Oooooooomg. That's a hell of a twist I haven't seen before. Let's see where this goes!!


Author's Response:

:) I try to throw a little something surprising into the mix now and again! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Themaddogrules (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2012 10:47 PM · On: Back Home

I really enjoy this story. I kinda feel like its becoming too much of the same. I wish you would throw in something really unexpected. And please update soon!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it! As for something different, there is a bit of something unexpected coming up within the next few chapters actually. Not too much longer. :)

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2012 10:41 PM · On: Temptations

Well. My goodness.

Author's Response:

I hope that's a good response? :) Thanks for reading, though!

Reviewer: bkhchica (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2012 02:42 AM · On: Temptations

Bloody hell.... What a horrid place to leave a person hanging... Literally on the edge, lol! It's all good though. I wouldn't have minded a looooooong chapter for this story to get a nice juicy lemon out of it, lol ;) See you next update! :)

Author's Response:

lol Sorry again! And no worries, lemons coming up. ;) Glad you enjoyed it, though, even if I like cliffies. haha Thanks!

Reviewer: bkhchica (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 11:38 AM · On: Birthday Surprises

There is still a lot unsiad... She still needs to explain her comment about almost cheating on Edward. I have to wonder- she's been awfully secretive about the past- is she still carrying her V-card? If Edward was always so careful of her, it would make sense if they never did. I love that she's finally told Jake that she is in love with him.... Can't wait to see what happens after this cliffie... btw- you're evil for leaving it there! Lol!! ;)

Author's Response:

hehe I know, sorry ;) I like the occasional cliffie! But you're right, she needs to talk more to him yet. They get there, bit by bit! She's opening up a bit more, though. More to come, to hopefully start to answer more questions! Thanks for the R&R :)

Reviewer: bkhchica (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2012 10:17 AM · On: Progress

The pacing of this is true to life! I'm loving this story! I'm ready for her confess all to Jake though :)

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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2012 04:08 PM · On: A Difficult Discussion

I loved the fireworks!  Jake and Bella have a lot of stuff to work through...the kiss was hot! lol  Obviously the attraction is still there for Jake and Bella!


Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you liked the kiss ;) There is definitely attraction there which is good.. and which can be explosive, too. haha

Reviewer: bkhchica (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2012 03:39 PM · On: A Difficult Discussion

They have a long row to hoe... Lots of issues to hash out. You are doing a great job describing emotions so that we feel them too. Thanks! I love this more than I thought I would ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you! That makes me happy to hear. :D And yes, they have a ways to go yet! I'm also glad you like the emotions.. that's usually a big thing for me. I like to try and make people feel it. :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2012 09:50 PM · On: A Decision is Made

I loved the back ground information!  I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!   I'm really more a Jake and Ness fan (I never thought Bella was good enough for Jake) But I'm really liking the story.  I can't wait for more!

Take care, Dixie

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. :) I'm not a J/N fan, but I totally agree with you that Bella didn't deserve Jake. I write solely J/B to give him what he wanted from the beginning, and I like to make a better, stronger, more mature Bella than the original!

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2012 03:37 AM · On: The Night Out

Checking in. I was starting to get frustrated about the death misunderstanding until this chapter, but apparently I misinterpreted what I was reading. I get it now. Enjoying the story so far.


Author's Response:

Thank you! And I'm not sure what was misinterpreted, but I'm glad you know what's going on now. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2012 10:16 PM · On: The Night Out

I'm glad he didn't do anything with Lila or Bella.....Jake really is a good guy and always trying to do the right thing.  I have a weird question....did Bella and Edward have sex while they were married?  Or did Edward still struggle with his fear of hurting her?  In some weird way I kind of hope that they didn't sort of for jake sake.

I love the quick updates!  Take care, Dixie

Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, it didn't seem like Jake to do something like that; shows he has a good head on his shoulders! And that's not a weird question.. I know what you mean by hoping they didn't for Jake's sake, but they did. There will be a little more to come about that, too, in regards to the worry. And yeah, updates are quick right now because I'm updated further along elsewhere.. someone suggested posting here, and I thought it was a good idea. :) So, got some more that will update soon and then it'll go to about a week and a half! Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2012 05:01 PM · On: The Confrontation

Leah is interesting.  I'm looking forward to their girls' night out

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Reviewer: bkhchica (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2012 04:47 PM · On: The Confrontation

I was never a fan of jake/bella pairings, but I like this story... It has serious potential to be kick-ass awesome :) Where's this going now?

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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2012 12:31 PM · On: The Confrontation

I like that Lila stood up for Jake, she has reason to worry.  I like knowing Jake isn't in love with her I hope she's not there yet either so when and if they break off everyone will be ok.  Quil sutprised me with his snarky comments...

I hope Billy & Charlie can be friends again...I can't wait for more!


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