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Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2012 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 35
oh damn, this is freaking amazing! I so love this Edward! hehe!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dawningbeauty (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 34
This is amazing. All of the reactions are so genuine and believable, and I am absolutely hooked on this story of yours. Please hurry and post the next chapter!
Author's Response: The next chapter is back from my betas, as soon as I go through all their comments, I'll get it in the validation queue.
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2012 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 34
You make us rally see how Bella's mind tries to process this new revelation and how the puzzle-pieces come together. I'm glad she doesn't blame Carlisle anymore. Her glee about putting Jessica in her place made me want to high-five her. Edward has to realize by now that Bella knows.
Author's Response: Edward has no idea, but real life will find them soon enough and break their little bubble of happy. I'm so glad you like it. I love that Bella holds her own with Jessica. Under the circumstances, it felt very natural to write her that way.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 34
I think that he should just fess up and tell her . he can read her mind and when she is giving hints that she knows he should man up to her . ireally love your story it is wonderful it is one of my favorite ones . keep up the wonderful work bella1
Author's Response: Typing one handed--holding sleeping baby.
Edward cannot read Bella's mind, just like in canon. Won't be long.
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 33
Bella was so adorable when she thought Tanya was pregnant, too bad there won't be a baby-sister or brother.
Congratulations on the idea to let Bella discover that Edward M. and Edward C. are one and the same by a family-picture. That's better proof than words and I really like how involved his family is in the Bella-Edward-love-story.
Author's Response: Typing one handed--holding sleeping baby.
No babies anywhere. That was the plan all along. I'm not done with the Masens yet.
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ezokar (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 34
Wow i absolutely loved the last two chapters i can't wait for more please don't keep us waiting
Author's Response: Typing one handed--holding sleeping baby.
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 34
That was soo good ! She was so smart to put it all together and fill in the blanks. So much fun to read.
Merrily
Kat
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! She did have a little help with those blanks!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sweet4RPatz (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 34
Wow!!! Thanks for the update! It was such a wonderful surprise to see it in my email...YA! I lived it and I was so happy with Bella's reaction, I think you did an amazing job SO now just to get Edward to open up.....hmmm can't wait for the next update. The story is coming together beautifully, by far one of my favorites, thank you for all the hardwork you put into it and sharing it with us.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! There is a teaser for chapter 35 on the forums page. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 34
Love it! Thank you! Wish Edward was a bit more savvy on the clues Bella dropped, but I know it has to make a good long story too!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I think Edward thought Bella was just saying one of those things people say trying to be nice. It was odd, but I don't think it screamed "I know how you really are!"
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 34
this was a really cute chapter! I'm glad you chose to write it the way you did. I wasn't expecting an angry or outraged Bella. Though to be honest I was looking forward to Edward's reaction to Bella knowing but I love Bella's soft approach to it. As always looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
I think, as someone who has had to keep a secret from the people she loves, Bella understands that sometimes it's necessary. Personally, I see the *how* as secondary to the fact that they're together, which has always been the goal of my story--to bring them together. Bella has her Edward now, which is all she ever wanted--her two Edwards were only ever just the one delivered back to her.
Reviewer: frogiea (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 34
I feel like I'm channeling Alice. Bouncing up and down, Yes yes yes!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 34
That was awesome! I really likedd the way you represented her freak-out. It was a very realistic evolution of thought when learning something so shocking. I think our brains have to digest all the facets before coming to an acceptance. I don't understand why she thinks she needs to hide the knowledge from him though. I long for her to just tell him already!
Author's Response: I did think it was important that she find out when she was alone, so she could have time to process it.
I think, as someone who has had to keep a secret from the people she loves, Bella understands that sometimes it's necessary. Personally, I see the *how* as secondary to the fact that they're together, which has always been the goal of my story--to bring them together. Bella has her Edward now, which is all she ever wanted--her two Edwards were only ever just the one delivered back to her.
The next couple chapters will be their relationship progressing without reality barging in on them, but when it does force Edward's hand, it'll be a doozy!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 34
Excellant chapter
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Hayesmom (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 34
So thorough and well reasoned.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 34
You've done an amazing job of going through Bella's reactions and logic. It makes so much sense. I feel as if I would have gone through exactly the same thought and emotional process.
I'm wondering if Bella needs to have a talk with her dad.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. This chapter was actually one of the easiest to right. I feel like I know my version of Bella well enough that her reactions came easily to me.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 34
OMG. She arrived at the right answer pretty quickly! LOL. You have no idea just how pleasant waking up to see you'd updated was for me! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 34
Most people would have freaked out an ran the opposite direction, but we all know Bella's mind isn't normal! I just want her to hear everything from Edward, so that they can move forward. Is this Edward going to be against Bella being turned? I hope not, they've both been through too much to suffer any more. Fantastic story!
Author's Response: Yes, most people would've. But most people don't have the advantage of having spent four months writing letters to someone living almost 100 years earlier.
I think, as someone who has had to keep a secret from the people she loves, Bella understands that sometimes it's necessary. Personally, I see the *how* as secondary to the fact that they're together, which has always been the goal of my story--to bring them together. Bella has her Edward now, which is all she ever wanted--her two Edwards were only ever just the one delivered back to her. The next couple chapters will be their relationship progressing without reality barging in on them, but when it does force Edward's hand, it'll be a doozy!
He will be very in-canon when the time comes, but....
I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 34
Finding this chapter up so soon was like waking up on Christmas morning!
Thank you. I hope you don't have Bella dance around this too much.
I wonder if the Volturi know about the Quilluete web site? People seem to get the vampire thing rather quickly from that.
Author's Response: I should've put a bow on it!
I think, as someone who has had to keep a secret from the people she loves, Bella understands that sometimes it's necessary. Personally, I see the *how* as secondary to the fact that they're together, which has always been the goal of my story--to bring them together. Bella has her Edward now, which is all she ever wanted--her two Edwards were only ever just the one delivered back to her. The next couple chapters will be their relationship progressing without reality barging in on them, but when it does force Edward's hand, it'll be a doozy!
I don't know if the Volturi know about the Quileute website; I never thought about it. If I had to guess, I'd say no. I can't picture Aro surfing the web. Although with all the thoughts he must've read while feeding off humans, he'd certainly know about the internet, but I can't see him seeing it as a threat. The werewolves he knows of wouldn't have a website.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 34
"It wasn't as if having children had ever been her life's goal, but knowing at seventeen that it would never happen was a blow."
- the author doesn't liikeee chiiildreeeeen...
Author's Response: On the contrary, the author loves children. Grandchildren especially. But there won't be any anywhere in this fic. Well, Rosaliee will get her wish. But no babies.
Reviewer: feel_loved (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
"OMG, BELLA! JUST TELL HIM THAT YOU KNOW!.... Gosh!" That is what I would have said if I was of the age of 13.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2012 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 34
oh she is just too cute, and I kinda wish they could hear and marvel at her thought processes - she's one very smart cookie!! I think she's further ahead here than Edward! :) lovely developments... haha will she start doing an oral examination - for descending fangs of course.
Author's Response: I'm picturing Bella trying to position herself so she can check out Edward's upper teeth anytime he opens his mouth. In my head, she looks like she's trying to look up his nose!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tt495 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2012 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 33
thank you for this very fun story & for posting despite all the adversity in your life. it makes me so happy to read!
Author's Response: Everything is going pretty good, no major adversity to worry about. Had a bit of a shock a few months ago, but he was a good surprise!
Reviewer: amethyst83 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2012 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 34
Oh this is so good, I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope she brings up the issue with Edward soon...glad to see she loves him no matter what though!
Author's Response:
I think, as someone who has had to keep a secret from the people she loves, Bella understands that sometimes it's necessary. Personally, I see the *how* as secondary to the fact that they're together, which has always been the goal of my story--to bring them together. Bella has her Edward now, which is all she ever wanted--her two Edwards were only ever just the one delivered back to her.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2012 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 33
oh my gosh i loved this! her reaction is so bella lol. though i guess after the time travel desk experience its hard to find anything shocking. i'm dying to know how the confrontation will go between edward and bella. update soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! The next chapter is already up and the teaser for #35 is on the forums page under Shameless Plugs.
Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2012 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 33
I really love this story, can't wait for Edward and Bella to finally be together. I have a question, what made Tanya drop the bowl? Vampires don't drop things (normally) and for her to be holding her stomach and her hand over her mouth? It just seemed odd, maybe Charlie has super sperm!! HaHa, that would be a hoot! Look forward to next chapter!
Author's Response:
Tanya's fine. It isn't often that a vampire gets surprised, but I think hearing Bella say to herself (to Edward) that she thought she might be a big sister gave Tanya a bit of a shock. It couldn't have been easy for her--the one thing that she can't give Charlie. She stepped out for a few minutes both to collect herself and to give Edward and Bella some privacy.
I'm so glad you liked it! The next chapter is already in the validation queue. Thanks for reviewing!
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