Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive
Great lemons and loved the chap of course
Reviewer: karenlillie (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive
Hmmm... Think Bella would mind if I stole Edward for my shower that's now needed?!?! Glad you're back but so sorry for why you've been gone! Let's just say I know I'd be busy digging a hole with that situation! As always... Brilliant writing! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Topsy Krett Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive
Umm....WOW! I think I need a smoke lol. Another wonderful chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive
SQUEEE ::FANS SELF:: THAT WAS FUCKING HOT!! Omg just love love love post again soon I can't wait for more so excited for Alice to meet Jasper.. Can't wait for these two to finally come together and so happy that it seems Jacob has backed off...He should just get with Bellas ex roomie and leave her alone pout... Post again soon need more!
Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive
Loved this chapter but can't wait to the next one. Things are heating up.
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive
Who says you can't have fun at the movies? When our oldest daughter was really young, I would sit between her & my husband & give him a handjob in the dark theater so he'd agree to go see the kiddie movies!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive
This is a great story!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive
Damn girl, that's the stuff the best fore play fantasies are made of...lol (im trying to make you laugh cause after $1800 in cell charges , you need to laugh or to drink ...lol) Edward is good at teaching skills ..lol
Author's Response: You succeeded! I'm officially laughing, and I thank you for it!
So glad you enjoyed the chapter!!
xoxo
AG1981
Reviewer: chantiemaya (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive
*lights a cigarette* Not bad, not bad at all. MORE PLEASE!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 3. Truth in Advertising
i find this to be pretty funny! I love this chapter!
Reviewer: talkallthetime (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 13. Staking Claim
I could've sworn I reviewed this one on my phone as well. It is not appearing in my stats though so I reread this in wait for today's update. I love how E makes points and all if their playfulness. I'm looking forward to paintball and meeting your Jasper. I was almost worried Jacob was going the come harass her when Kate left. I'm glad he didn't. Closing scene is was hot. So looking forward to the date!
Reviewer: talkallthetime (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2012 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 12. One Step Closer
I could have sworn I reviewed this when I first read it but my stats page says otherwise. Glad Charlie let Edward live through breakfast. Thanks for not going into detail about football.
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2012 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 13. Staking Claim
ARGH! I loved this chapter! So much tension!
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2012 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 13. Staking Claim
Well. My goodness. And somebody needs to whip Jake's ass. Maybe even Mike... I know it's a B/E story, but I like that Mike kinda redeemed himself a bit in this chap.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 8. Everybody has a Type
Edward is not gay. No. I am sure he is not. ...
I'm glad to know who Rose is. They seem to have a nice working relationship. Now, who is Emmett?
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 7. Let the Interrogation Commence
I loved the interaction between Edward and Bella's parents and her reactions. I'm glad Edward was able to win Charlie over.
Now, as soon as I find out who Rosalie is I will go to bed!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 6. Sometimes, Violence IS the Answer
This would be a good chapter for an outtake, too! Or maybe the next one. I had a feeling that Edward had decked Jake.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 5. The Truth Always Comes Out
I was thinking she called Alice. I didn't expect her to call him! They just met, but the way it played out worked. I love the humor you incorporate into the story. Amusing without being silly.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 4. To a New Beginning
Charlie reacted exactlly the way I expected him to. I'm curious about your little cliffy- just who did she call? I really need to go to bed, but I have to read one more chapter...
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 3. Truth in Advertising
I am really loving this story! I tried to review the second chapter, but it just jumped to the third chapter. I like your writing style.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 1. Just My Luck
First chapter was great!
Reviewer: Karmabites76 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 13. Staking Claim
SQUEEEEEE!!!!!!
Reviewer: Sadie Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 13. Staking Claim
Been reading your story for a couple of days now and I really love it. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Shortcake (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 13. Staking Claim
LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter! I'm so excited for their date, I can't wait to see what they do and how the night ends!!! xoS
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 13. Staking Claim
Hot! Loved it, Jake better watch out, now Edward has even more reason to kick his ass!
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