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Reviewer: mariac (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2013 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
OMG how cute!! But seriously?!!? Why end there? Now were going to have to wait fr weeks for an updat :( im not that patient!
Good job though x
Reviewer: Shazarabbit (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2013 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
Double damn. That was cute. Ofcourse she's going to accept, unless she thinks too much into it!
update soon! I assume we will hear more from Irina soon. Seems to good to be true really.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2013 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
awww, loved it! Masen's gonna have a POV!!! can't wait!
Reviewer: princess bella edward (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2013 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
Phew. I am offically over my original reservvation at the whole baby situation. I know I said that before, but seeing, or reading about, Mason has set it in stone. I'm okay with it. He's adorable and Bella actualy acts like a mother. I guess I just had to go through the same journey she did, hey?
Sad to see the story end, but I feel like it's time. If you went on any longer, it could get..overplotted. Does that even make sense? I've enjoyed the story just as it is.
What an ending! I can't wait to see her reaction. Shocked, most likely. Can't wait until the next update!
Reviewer: AngelOfRosesCullen (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2013 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
You, absolutly suck! Leaving us there is soooo crul!
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2013 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
luv, luv, luv this!!!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2013 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
*big, contented, happy sigh*
Reviewer: drJamJam (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2013 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
so exciting that Masen is here and home. I wonder what Bella's response to Edward will be, I hope it's a big YES. it's sad that we are so close to the end but I also can't wait to see what their future holds. :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2013 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
I loved this chapter! It was so wonderful!
I wonder what Bella's response will be...I imagine she'll yes. Maybe not at this moment, but sometime in the future. :)
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2013 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 36. Nurture vs. Nature
Masen's POV, I suspect :-)
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 15. Waiting . . . with a Side of Worry
Oh my God! Hahahahaha!! Dr Cullen......it could only happen to Bella. Will she bite the bullet and stick with him or will she wait longer for another doctor? I'd have been out of there like a bloody shot, lol. I suppose if you've practiced safe sex you wouldn't automatically think about being tested after someone's cheated on you, but it's always best even for you own peace of mind. I thought Carlisle and Esme took the news of Bella and Edward being together very well. I can't believe Edward waited until that moment to tell them, it really put Bella on the spot, I'd have had words with him about that, lol.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 14. To Give & To Receive
It was good to hear from Edward. Bless him feeling like a sixteen year old boy again. He's fallen hard and fast for Bella. I have to laugh at his mind wandering all the time and just standing in front of things, like doors, day dreaming. Love makes everyday life so hard to carry on with in the beginning, it's a real pain in the arse but wonderful at the same time. Bella's such a little minx getting Edward all worked up in the cinema, lol. I didn't think she was as inexperienced as she is but then Jacob just really used Bella for hs own gratification so I shouldn't really be that surprised. Edward and Bella are going to have a lot of fun playing teacher and student, lol.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 13. Staking Claim
Oh my God! That was so hot, phew! Why is Edward postponing, what does he have planned? That was an amazing orgasm for Bella, she saw stars, lol. Jake's got to be the biggest arsehole and selfish dick ever not to give Bella any orgasms. I bet he didn't even know she never came, he certainly never cared. Bella should change her number and be careful who she gives her new one out to, he's really getting annoying and if he doesn't give up soon he's going to find his face connecting with Edward's fist all over again.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 12. One Step Closer
Poor Bella and her stupid strawberry allergy, allergies spoil all the fun, lol. Brunch wasn't as bad as I thought it might be. I thought Charlie was going to give them a really hard time, but he was pretty good with it all. Alice will be inviting herself to paintballing when she finds out about Jasper, lol.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 11. Bad Timing
Bwahahahahahahaha!! I can only imagine the look on their faces, especially Charlie's. *snort* Lunch is going to be so awkward and possibly cringeworthy. At least now Bella's cleared up the gay question and Edward can stop wondering why she likes Emmett more than him, talk about epic assumptions, they're as bad as each other. God this is soooo funny!
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 10. Liquid Courage
Lol, it was a bit of an unfortunate time for Bella to realise about Edward looking at her, dropping forks and what not whilst she was on a date with Mike but it was very funny. I loved her quip about getting him a participation ribbon, hahaha! So finally the penny's dropped. Will Bella's current lack of a verbal filter make her spill the beans about thinking Edward was gay?
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 9. Overnight Company
Bwahahahahaha!! Poor Edward, in less than twenty four hours he's run the gauntlet of the very short shorts, the braless tank top and now Bella's 'unmentionables', lol, hanging up in the laundry room, bless him, no wonder he didn't follow her straight back upstairs, hahahahaha!! What's he going to do now all his whites are pink? Laugh and wear them with pride *raises eyebrow* lol, bleach them to oblivion or go out and buy new? Hahaha, Bella's been caught with his undies in her hand.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 8. Everybody has a Type
Ahhh, assistant not boss. Now Bella's thinking Edward's gay, hahahahaha, oh my God she just jumps from one conclusion to another. Edward appreciated Bella's very short shorts then and braless tank top, lol. I get the feeling that the conversation he and Rose were having when Bella walked into the kitchen was all about her and how Edward feels about her.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 7. Let the Interrogation Commence
I'm thinking that Rose is Edward's boss. Whatever Edward said to Charlie it had the desired effect. Lol, Bella just can't stop putting her foot in it and making unfortunate remarks 'inhaled and swallowed' hahahahaha!! It seems they're both as bad as each other when it comes to licking fingers and using their imaginations too, bwahahahaha!!
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 6. Sometimes, Violence IS the Answer
Hehehehe!! Edward messed Jake up, good for him, not that I condone violence in any way *cough* but good for Bella too, getting to plant one on Leah, I bet that was satisfying. Renee's mind is working overtime, does she see attraction in Edward's eyes? I think she sees it in Bella's, lol. Dinner could be very interesting.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 5. The Truth Always Comes Out
I'm glad she called Edward, Jake was so jealous and he's such an arsehole to think that he didn't do anything wrong or that Bella's overreacting. I'd love to know what happened between him and Edward and what Leah said and did. Lol, it sounds like Edward has a problem with his words and innuendo as well. So I'm guessing that Bella's going to think Rose is Edward's girlfriend. I think Edward's more interested in Bella than she might think he is.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 4. To a New Beginning
Did she call Edward? I bet she did, he would be perfect to make Jake feel inferior and small, not that Bella should use the gorgeous Edward like that but then it is a favour, lol. Maybe she called her Dad, who better than the gun toting Chief of Police to scare the crap out of Jake, hehehe!! I'm glad Bella asked more questions. I would've asked Edward if he was disappointed at all about not playing football. I think Charlie's going to love him.........eventually, I don't know whether he's going to see Edward's age as being an advantage or disadvantage.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 3. Truth in Advertising
I can't believe she never asked Edward what he does that takes him away so much, but then again she was so blinded by the pretty and low cost of the rent it's a wonder she managed to ask her last question, lol. I'd love to know what Edward's thinking. How old is he? Did he place this add in the hopes of finding himself a girlfriend?
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 2. Classifieds
"Lapin-esque activities." Hahahahaha!! Bella just can't escape the sex can she, she's surrounded by it, well apart from when she's at work. What was Jake thinking about turning up at Bella's work? He must be really stupid if he thinks Bella's going to forgive him. I love that Kate told him Bella was on a date, lol, letting him know that he's easily replaceable. I like Kate, she's a good friend.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1. Just My Luck
Bwahahahahaha!! I can't believe that Bella has walked in on her parents having sex twice......lol, at least she knows they still love each other and there's life beyond kids. Jake is an arsehole "I have needs." What the hell, is he the only one with needs? No I don't think so, but Bella doesn't go whoring her way around campus because he's busy. Leah might as well put a revolving door on her room, it sounds as though she has quite the procession through there. If Jake wants to dip his wick there and risk STD's then that's his look out, Bella should be glad she caught them and go and get herself tested. Being cheated on is the pits and that's putting it mildy, but I think she should look at it that she's had a very lucky escape and she can move on to someone better and more worthy of her.
This has been lurking in my favourites for ages, I thought I'd better get reading it before it disappears on me, lol.
Jane x
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