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Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
I have no clue what you have planned its too soon to propose. I wonder if he would take her on a vacation or something... Hmm thats an idea. Oh well love it and can't wait for more!
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
Ooooh... good boy, I see a Christmas vacation somewhere on the horizon....
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2012 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
What a lovely chapter. Sweet, romantic, hot, charged, sexy and tender all rolled into one.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
Great chapter!
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
I knew it was a Sex Toy party - can't wait for Bella to go to that one. As for the Xmas pressie idea- nope I have no idea. Looking forward to the next chapter as always, Nic :0)
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
Cullen/Swan family Christmas?.....that will probably be the most interesting and entertaining day of the year (right after the sex toy party....lol)
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
The intensity of this chapter...gah!!! Loved it! Can't get enough of your work!! These two together, may combust from rubbing parts together too much, lol! Good thing they were getting into the water, even if it's hot water, hahaha. They need to lubricate anyway they can, and possibly heal, lol! Can't wait to see when they start conversing about their future, about what they mean to one another, gah! So much romance in the air, and now Christmas....yay!!!!! Love it! I think the families would love to get together, just hope they don't discuss Renee's party, or any of the ...ah um...stuff that Bella purchases, hahaha. Maybe Jacob can see Bella at the party, and see what she is purchasing for her "new" boyfriend, hehe. Love it all! Truly! Special story!! xoxoxo
Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
I think his gift is a mini vaca! and wow with the couch.
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
OOOOOOOOOOOO...do I see a ring coming in her future????? :) Thanks for the great update!!!
Reviewer: hayleyann15 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
Write more!!
Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
Love the lovin'
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
Good idea of Edward to take them outside today. Not only would Bella be too sore for any action for a while, but they wouldn't be doing much talking to each other at all. Being alone and close together is leading them to going through that box of condoms quickly. At the rate they were going they would have ran out of them and had to make an emergency drug store run for another box or dozen at the rate they were preceding. I think it was a great idea to have both moms together make Christmas dinner at their place. That way they can spend Christmas together instead of splitting to spend with their parents and getting together afterwards alone. Since both parents seem to get along so well together. A dinner of both parents in the near future for the plans to be dropped into moms' laps. Also Edward didn't fight fair convincing Bella to consider going to her mom's sex toy party. Now that would be a very interesting chapter to read especially what trips Bella's trigger and how she and Edward get to use it together. What Edward gets Bella for Christmas I want it as a complete surprise. Looking forward to future chapters. Have a good week.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
Thank you!
Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 20. Touchdown
Gaw! I am so bad at playing the guessing game,lol! so I have no idea abt the gift. I loved the chappie tho & great, hot lemon. Can't wait 4 the next chappie.
Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
WHoly fuck! LMAO! I don't really know if I should be angry laughing or have seen it comming. I had absolutely no time to read the last two chapters with work and school but, shit! That was more than with the wait! I saw a lot of it in the signs.... epically classic in my "Rules To FF" handbook. Jeez, its so easy to forget that Bella's not a virgin with her inexperience but you make it seem as if she is ht isn't. She's dirty and clueless and reminds me an aweful lot of myself.... how sad is that? Lol, anyway, I always get super excited whenever I see this pop up in my email and this has been no exception. Great job. I cant wait to see if my hunch about what the invite is for is correct or not. Ill be waiting and willing to put down whatever I am doing to read what comes next. Who needs to get through college or keep a job when fanfic is involved ;D
Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2012 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
WHoly fuck! LMAO! I don't really know if I should be angry laughing or have seen it comming. I had absolutely no time to read the last two chapters with work and school but, shit! That was more than with the wait! I saw a lot of it in the signs.... epically classic in my "Rules To FF" handbook. Jeez, its so easy to forget that Bella's not a virgin with her inexperience but you make it seem as if she is ht isn't. She's dirty and clueless and reminds me an aweful lot of myself.... how sad is that? Lol, anyway, I always get super excited whenever I see this pop up in my email and this has been no exception. Great job. I cant wait to see if my hunch about what the invite is for is correct or not. Ill be waiting and willing to put down whatever I am doing to read what comes next. Who needs to get through college or keep a job when fanfic is involved ;D
Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
WHoly fuck! LMAO! I don't really know if I should be angry laughing or have seen it comming. I had absolutely no time to read the last two chapters with work and school but, shit! That was more than with the wait! I saw a lot of it in the signs.... epically classic in my "Rules To FF" handbook. Jeez, its so easy to forget that Bella's not a virgin with her inexperience but you make it seem as if she is ht isn't. She's dirty and clueless and reminds me an aweful lot of myself.... how sad is that? Lol, anyway, I always get super excited whenever I see this pop up in my email and this has been no exception. Great job. I cant wait to see if my hunch about what the invite is for is correct or not. Ill be waiting and willing to put down whatever I am doing to read what comes next. Who needs to get through college or keep a job when fanfic is involved ;D
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
Is it a adult toy party? Great story and I can't wait for more
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
With Renée you never know, it could be something completely harmless or some really outrageous and embarrasing thing she wants. Damn, can't wait now and I don't have Edward here to keep me entertained until the next update.
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2012 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
I'm guessing it's some sort of a toy party...and I'm not talking about Mattel...Great chapter. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: karenlillie (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
Three words~~ SEX TOY PARTY!!! Sorry for my lack of review! RL is a PITA right now with these last few weeks of school and graduation... I officially have my management degree!!!
Back to you though... Awesome job with these chapters! I'm loving that Bella is coming out of her shell... Of course who wouldn't for Edward! Keep em coming girl!!
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
The invite must be one of those "toy" parties!! She should totally go... :)
Loved this chapter!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
Knowing Renee, it was probably a sex toy party! This was a very difficult chapter to read on vacation with the family all in one little room...definitely could have used some privacy!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
Edward's idea of naked time reminds me of when my husband & I were first married- we stripped down as soon as we walked in the door & didn't get dressed again until the next morning for work!
Reviewer: Mart (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 19. One New Experience After Another
It is a sex toy party!!!! whoo
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