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Reviews For Love Story
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 3

OoO...love it so far! i know it's late, but I just found it :)

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

ok seriously...update please :)

I was gone for a LONG time too. I just put up several new chapters of my story so I totally understand being away.

but...umm.. update, yeah? lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, I kinda dissapeared...Sorry! I'm glad that you like the story enough to keep checking on it! I started school back up last school year and was crazy busy trying to get all of my classes done so that I could finish this year (all that I have left is two quarters of student teaching and then one quarter with just two classes!).

I admit that I started on chaper 20 when I posted chapt 19, but now I have no clue where I was going with it.

I do very much want to finish this story, it just might have to wait until my life is not so crazy...(or until I get spurred on by another showing of Eclipse LOL)

Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

I am so in love with this story...please finish it.....but i will wait for you to be ready to finish it.....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Sorry I have been MIA....I've been busy with school and stupid life crap.

I am going to finish, I'm just finding myself with out a lot of time to write gue to school and what not.

 

be patient with me! I'll get back to it!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

Aww!! *sigh* I don't want Edward to leave either!

Thank u for the realism of this story--especially Bella's recovery process! It must have taken alot of research for you...but it is so worth it :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I know, I hated writing that part!

Thank you! I wanted to try and be as real as possible...I like fantasy, but fanfics and stories where the characters heal and get over horrible stuff in a blink of an eye kinda bug me.

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 2

Shoot Tanya. Then all will be perfect  :-)

No seriously



Author's Response:

LOL

Reviewer: Biankis (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

she's a mess!!!



Author's Response:

yes she is :(

thank you for reading! :)

Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

How sad! Poor Bella!!



Author's Response:

I know! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Prologue

Hi! I'm really enjoying the story, so will another chapter be up soon?



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad that you are enjoying it! Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you.

 

My life has been crazy busy over this last year trying to finish up school and stuff. I willo eventually finish this story, it just might be a while :(

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

Drunk Bella is funny. I am glad that Edward stopped things from going further with her. He's right, their first time together should be special, he should make her feel special.
She's alone now. I have a bad feeling about this trip to Chicago. I think something bad is going to happen to Bella, like maybe James will come back for a visit.
Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

I agree, drunk Bella is funn. I'm so happy you liked the chapter, and you're not altogether wrong about your bad feeling...

Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

Thanks for the update. I hope they have a date when Edward comes back. Also, a heartfelt present from Chicago would be awesome!



Author's Response:

Yes, the search for the perfect gift has already been started LOL! I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

cant wait for the next chapie!! :)



Author's Response:

Hopefully you won't have to wait too long...as long as I live through finals week LOL

Reviewer: bella_edwardcullen (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

this is my favorite chapter



Author's Response:

Awe! Thank you!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

OMG OMG Sniffle!   I tried to prepare myself for him leaving but it didn't work.  When he left it was still very sad!!!  Look forward to the next chapter hopefully nothing BAD happens please...  Post again soon



Author's Response:

Next chapter is soon coming! Finals are next week so you should see something shortly after that!

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

This is so good! I love it, and can't wait for the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

I just love Edward!!! Sooooo sweet! :)

 



Author's Response:

Me too! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

hey this was such a gopod chap =]



Author's Response:

hey! thank you! I'm glad you liked it ^_^

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

Your Edward is so awesome.  He's patient and kind, and I absolutely love how he didn't push Bella for more, or even entertain her advances beyond kissing because he knew it would hurt her.  I hope Bella leans on the others while Edward is away...she needs friends right now.

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

Yeah Sweetward is my favorite Edward. Also Sexward is good too...but he doesn't really appear in this fic....

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 19 (S)

Good chapter! Good luck with the unpacking I know what a pain that can be. I still haven't unpacked all my stuff after 6 months. LOL



Author's Response:

LOL yeah, I HATE unpacking...whats worse is unpacking during the Christmas season when 1/2 the crap you unpack you have to repack because it's all holiday decorations...

Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 18

I'm so glad that you are back. I've missed this story. I'm glad that things are better for you and your husband though hectic.
As for this chapter...it's good to see Bella stick up for herself, but obviously her lower self esteem and insecurities will continue to win out in the end. It will just take time. Enjoyed the chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 18

I am so looking forward to the next chapter.  I loved her small backbone appearance in this chapter bUT I wish it was longer and I am so looking to see where you take this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback! More and more as she grows and heals she will get more of a backbone.

Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 18

Thanks for the update. It was worth the wait.



Author's Response:

you are very welcome! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 18

update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wtm



Author's Response:

Yes! I do have another update coming soon, it's about 1/2 written, but it's finals time for myself and my beta, so it might not make it up for another couple of weeks...

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 17

:)

wtm



Author's Response:

^_^

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 16

that was written really well!!!!

wtm



Author's Response:

thank you very much!

Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 15

:)

wtm



Author's Response:

^_^

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