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Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 7
Intriguing, different, unique ... Just now finding your story and read it straight thru. I'm loving your twist on the mating ritual. I'm eager to see more posted.
Author's Response: Thanks ddc - hope I keep you along for the ride. The next chapter should be up in the next 2 days (or sooner).
Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
GREAT chapter! Love the story!! Update again soon please!
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 7
Cant wait for more update soon....
Reviewer: sophdrea (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 7
Well, you made my heart hurt in the last chapter, but this time you made my heart sing! Your writing is so strong that you made me feel their pain and desperation. But then you gave me hope when Bella realized that Edward was hurting much more that she was. How absolutely compelling and romantic it is that he feels her pain as well as he own. Their reunion was so beautiful and touching. You have done an amazing job showing us the depth of the bond between your vampire mates. And I loved the hamlet quote. It's so nice to see people still revering the classics of literature.
I loved everything about this chapter. Thank you!!!
Author's Response: Soph - what a tremendous note! Thank you for your uplifting words. And now I'm actually a little stressed - I hope I can keep up this level of depth you've now gifted me with :) Please tell me if I lose you somewhere along the way because I failed. I've submitted the latest chapter today - should be up soon.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
Whew! Stubborn !?@/!!
Reviewer: xiolaperry (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
Interesting. I can't wait to see why Bella is acting the way she is, because she just seems stuborn for no reason. Everything is so well written, I'm sure all will be revealed in time.
Author's Response: xiola - you are so sweet. Thank you for your kind words. Hopefully, when all is revealed, Bella's actions will make sense.
Reviewer: fellowsandfokies (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 7
REALLY REALLY liking your story! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Fellows - nice to have you here.
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 7
Excellent.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 7
Ahh Hamlet.
About time she woke up or gave in or both. Before they both died.
Author's Response: That's exactly how I feel about Hamlet - so amazing. I could use him in every chapter, but I think my audience would grow bored. Me? never.
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 7
:) I'm glad they've reached this milestone of understanding. Very interesting! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 7
I read a bit of christine feehan in here. Interesting combo.
Author's Response: Thanks angel - yeah, I'm a big fan of Feehan's early work (note; not later work - it became too sappy and cheesy). I love the concept of the blood exchange and the desperate need for each other. Hope I keep you with me for the whole story.
Reviewer: moirae (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 7
Lovely way to start my day! During the last chapter I was so worried Edward was going to do something stupid like try to take her away or force her to drink. I was so glad when he chose to leave instead. This chapter was achingly beautiful. Very happy for the uplifiting ending.
Author's Response: Your review made my day. Thank you! Hope you stay with me for the rest of the story.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 7
whew! that was close! how long till they are back to 100%....does it take more than a day for everything to heal?
Author's Response: Hey mountain - glad you're still with me. They come back to normal fairly quickly. In this case, since they went so long, it will take until the next morning. Next chapter will explain a little.
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 7
Sweet Jeezus I mean I was worried about Edward, now I understand why... Holy Crow thank Heaven she came around....
Author's Response: Thanks Khans! Hope you stick with me and let me know what you think of the upcoming chapters.
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 7
I love everything I have read so far! Can't wait to read more
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 7
Squeee!!! I a so glad you have a rough ride for these two planned out heheheh!!! Can't wait for more love love love it!
Author's Response: Thanks silly sad - glad you're still with me. Definitely a little rough road ahead - but they will be much more united going forward. I'm a big believer on handling angst together and not apart.
Reviewer: nothing_but_a_prayer (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh thank goodness they figured this part out.
Looking forward to the next part. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks nothing - yes, it was nice to have them come together on something :)
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 7
Deep sigh. Good to see Bella came to her senses. Gotta love Alice and her foresight.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 7
Thank you!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2012 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 6
Bella is being stupid
Reviewer: Solidae (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2012 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
I'm ready for her to stop being so stubborn, or at least give us her reasoning. Let's see some ACTION!!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Coming, coming... She folds soon.
Reviewer: sophdrea (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
Shame on you RP...you just made my heart hurt...big time! I hope he is just leaving to prove to her that she can't live without him. I actually thought she was going to stop him right there at the end, but no, she had to let him drive off. I know you are going to fix this, right...... :)
I love this story, and your excellent writing. Brilliant job!!!
Author's Response: Hey soph - would you believe my own heart was hurting somewhat when I wrote that? Oh yeah. But don't worry - update is coming very soon. Thanks for your kind words. :)
RP
Reviewer: wendycd41056 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2012 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
Very different story. I have always been intrigued by vampire mating theories.
I like this - look forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks Wendy - yes, I love the idea of vampire bonding and the blood exchanges. Hope this keeps your attention. Please tell me if I lose you along the way.
RP
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2012 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 6
I finally thought that Bella was coming around to the thought that Edward is her mate, and then wham.....my heart clenches as they leave one another! NOOOOO! It can't be! Heart breaking here! A phone? Hope he left a charger behind, lol. Please wake up Bella!! Want to read on! Gah!!
Author's Response: Thanks RandyWriter for all your kind reviews. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Bella is coming around real soon.
RP
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2012 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 6
I finally thought that Bella was coming around to the thought that Edward is her mate, and then wham.....my heart clenches as they leave one another! NOOOOO! It can't be! Heart breaking here! A phone? Hope he left a charger behind, lol. Please wake up Bella!! Want to read on! Gah!!
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