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Reviews For My Mate
Reviewer: ac87 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2012 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

People would actually skip the lemon-tastic chapters? Not me! I'm absolutely loving this story. It has just the right ratio of love:lemon:angst. Perfect in my opinion! I could read this forever! I feel so spoilt that we get updates so frequently :p

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 20

Skip chapters?......Are you having a laugh?......Not bloody likely, lol, I'm not missing out on the hot lemons you write and I certainly don't want to miss developments in their relationship.  I hope Edward has put Bella's fears about her not being his true mate to bed now, lol no pun intended.

I'm looking forward to Bella trying Edward's diet.  I hope she's successful even if she doesn't continue with it.  I think it would give her a huge boost of self confidence.

Jane x

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 20

this lemon was raw and real......awesomely written.  it was exactly right for two people so in love and so hungry for one another. fantastic job!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 20

oh i'm sticking around for the lemons....don't you worry...lol, If James ever finds them, i want it to be known with out a doubt that they belong to each other.....

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 20

oh wow oh wow oh wow...Bella trying a diffrent diet never saw taht coming can't wait to see that!!! Post again soon!  <3

Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 20

My, My...... ;-)

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 20

hell no, I do not want to miss any chapters I love this story, I was just so busy today I didn't have time to read till now...OMG!!!! I hope she understands that they are true mates now...**snickers and chuckles**  You write some awesome lemons too!!!

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 20

w o w z a !!!!!!!!

Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 20

no, by ll means keep going.....now for a cold shower.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 20

Alas, my husband can only dream about days of that!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 20

Thank you!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 20

She's going try human blood...seems wrong. This was a fun ch.  

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 19

Hmm, just how many 'friends' does James have in the Volturi Guard?  Vampire fate wouldn't be so cruel as to suggest that there is another mate for Edward or Bella....would it?  No, I think Felix was just trying to provoke Edward for another reason, maybe to do with his cousin.  Now would Felix's cousin be a certain recent vampire visitor by any chance?  Hmm. *Taps finger thoughtfully on chin*

I loved the bond between Edward and Marcus it really came across as a father and son relationship.

Jane x

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 19

Well Let me say this. I hope the words Felix spoke do not shake Bella's confidence in her mate and herself.  No matter what happens as long as that bond is strong everything else will work out.

 

I believe that.

Reviewer: Queenofhearts820 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 19

GREAT UPDATE

Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 19

I LOVE this chapter.. so amazing.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 19

It would be better if Marcus held a little more sway here.  Something evil is afoot!

Reviewer: BrandensBella (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 19

I don't think they're done with James.... That was too easy. Great story by the way.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 19

Edward should have ripped them all to pieces!!!

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 19

I dont know that expression "be the berries" but me too. Nope James is coming with friends soon. Getting good.



Author's Response:

It's from A River Runs Through It.  I have never heard it anywhere else - but I just love how Jessie uses it in that movie. 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 19

'OMG OMG OMG Once James finds out which I think will be by Caius doing James will want what he wants even more...I don't trust Caius and i have a feeling by the end of this they will be down one ruling brother... too bad so sad hahahahaha  

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 19

Not a chance...

Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 19

oh boy, that was fun. LOL. I seriously doubt they're in the clear, not that i'm worried. Edward is more then capable of dealing with james himself should the bastard come after them.



Author's Response:

It's going to be nasty when the final moment comes.  Trust me.

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 19

Thank you!

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 19

Love this Story!!! Wow what a chapter..  did I miss it before or was this this first time we discovered that Marcus was the Sire to Edward?  Nope never thought for one milisecond that James was going to be gone that quick and the sad torturous fact is that they (meaning James, Felix and anyone else with them) just continue to rape and molest Bella's mental defenses regarding James taking her blood, but again that doesn't make him her mate...those idiots apparently are to moronic to get that it takes both parties YES both parties to have the same feelings...even though Bella struggled with the Mating / Bonding acceptance with Edward she felt it...Immensly in fact...Not the same issue with Moronic VampDog James!!!!!  Ugggghhh.... okay  TY for another rivioting chapter and you know I anxiously await the next update... Laters BB  Kathy



Author's Response:

Edward mentioned it to Bella on their way to Seattle - a few chps back.  Yeah - there are definitely some parties working together on this one.  Glad you liked the chapter.  Next one has already been submitted. 

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