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Reviewer: RebeccaJ1973 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2018 10:03 PM · On: Epilogue

Absolutely wonderful!!! Of course, now I'm left wanting more because of Bella's remark about Aro's "other plans" for them. :)

I enjoyed the originality of the plot and all the nuances (especially related to Bella's gift). Actually, I was so absorbed in this story that I flew through both stories in this series in 2 days! Twilight is the only fanfic I've ever read, and I tend to only look for stories here on twilighted due to their standards for quality writing. Still, I've read a great many stories here, and your series falls into the #2 spot on my all-time favorite fanfic's list (a post BD canon series, Harvest Moon & Full Moon Rising hold the top spot, but that is due in part to my normal preference for canon post BD stories in general. Though, I haven't been able to find them on this site the last couple times I've read them, so I guess, technically, that bumps yours into my top spot of twilighted fics. ;) Thank you once again for sharing your time, energy, and creativity with us.

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 03:20 PM · On: Epilogue

Snickers!! A FANTASTIC ending to a GREAT STORY!! Thank you so much for sharing it!!

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 34: This Is The Beginning Of The End

Darn, none of the Volturi got squished...oh well!! ;-)

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 33: Anything Goes

She's going to kill them next, I hope!!

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 31: All Alone

Holy crap!! =-O

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 10:00 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two - Come Back to Me

Futures change..

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 09:43 AM · On: Chapter Twenty - Pale Moon

Wasn't expecting actual werewolves!! =-O

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 09:29 AM · On: Chapter Eighteen - Let's Get Away from It All

Ohhh shit... Fred or Irina?

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 08:41 AM · On: Chapter Fourteen - All Alone

Oh shit...

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 01:21 AM · On: Chapter Eight - Walkin' in the Sunshine

BWAHAHAHAHA!! BEST. SCAVENGER.HUNT. EVER!! :-) :-)

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 01:11 AM · On: Chapter Seven - Angel Eyes

WOOT AND SHINY!! Interesting stuff happening!! :-)

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 12:12 AM · On: Chapter Four - All the Way Home

D'aaaaws!!!

Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2015 12:04 AM · On: Chapter Three - If You Go Away

Bawling here...

Reviewer: campyrs (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2014 12:49 PM · On: Epilogue

Great story! Thank you for posting this.

Reviewer: jimmyd (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2013 12:32 AM · On: Epilogue

Please write another epilouge! I want to see how Jasper explains his kiss to Edward Bella and Alice

Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 11:07 AM · On: Epilogue

Your story was good til the last few chapters, where you took bella martyrdom to the extreme. Making no effing sense. You might as well made her a jihad member, constantly looking for a reason to blow herself up to save the day. That is how desperate you made her look. She was tryng to save EVERY damn thing, and mourning EVERYONE, family friend, and stranger alike.

Too bad. could've been one of the best.

Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 34: This Is The Beginning Of The End

Good gambit on bella's part. But she should've kept Irinia for Bitch slapping purposes.

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Jasper kissing bella......SICK!. Puke much.

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Q: Did she do all of that without a shirt on???

Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 31: All Alone

What RETARDEDNESS did I just read?. WHy are you MAKING BELLA SO FCUKING STUPID????!!!!!!!!!!!!

She closed herself in her sheild with the C.of the moon inside w/ her. and allowed herself to get butchered so she can protect emily?.

ARE YOU Fing kidding me?

If she is dead, emily would be next regardless. WHAT B.S.ARE YOU WRITING?!!!!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you think.

On that note... I BEG you to stop reading. You obviously aren't enjoying the story, so why read it at all?

Thanks again.

Simaril x

Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 30: The Hurt Doesn't Go Away

I cant believe you wrote that nonsense aka BS!. Bella threw herself into the 'void' begged for death over the lost of Jessica effing Stanley???!!!.

[Who btw ppl, wasn't even mentioned in this story till this point]. FTW!!!!!.

Are you out of you effing mind?!. Bella is a bleeding heart, sure, but what fucking ridiculousness are you writing??? Bella will never in a milion years beg for death over JS. That would be as if she would do the same if it was for Ms. Cox, the office lady at forks high. JS does NOT mean that much to her. So what the F are you talking about there?!.

Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 09:34 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Nine - Leave It All To Me

I knew that game was trouble.

Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 05:50 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Five - I See It Now

Bella is taking to her role as leader, but at the same time what is her plan?. I just seem that she wants to gather and inform the wolves of what is going on, then try to make a plan from there. not much of a plan is it.

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Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 05:24 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Five - It Worries Me

Irina needs to go. That is twice now she plotted to kill bella and the cullens. Too bad kate and tanya are unwilling to see.

Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 04:28 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Four - This Nearly Was Mine

Bella is such a effing martyr. Always on the look out for a sword to throw herself on. she won't last long as a anythiing thinking like that.

Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 03:36 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two - Come Back to Me

Geez bella dramatic much?!. Death, that is what you get when you try to save everybody in the world Bella. Stop trying to be a hero. Save what you can and let go of the rest!.

Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 07:55 PM · On: Chapter Twenty - Pale Moon

Bella altruistic nature screws the cullens again. She could've just killed the child of the moon and left, but nooooo.

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