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Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 10:22 PM · On: A Law That I Live By

I think Bella was smart. 

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 10:09 PM · On: To Let the Story End

Man this sucks...not the writing...Bella's hurt.

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 09:58 PM · On: Goodbye

Wow...you went there. Good for you.



Author's Response:

Hello!

Thank you...yes, yes I did. I do that often in this story. ;-)

 

LJ

Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 09:43 PM · On: All Full of Good Intent

Interesting first chapter. Looking forward to the rest.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Why, thank you for joining me in this AU. :) I know it's odd and I thank you for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 08:08 PM · On: Honesty Knows I Wasn't Ready

I don't think someone  ever paid that much attention on me, or maybe I just didn't know.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Sometimes, we are unaware what people are seeing when they see us.  :)

Thank you for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 05:39 PM · On: Honesty Knows I Wasn't Ready

So now Alistar is Kate's mate. Great Bella attracks them and then she attracks their mates.  She is going to become even more careful.  Just date human's Bella. Have sex and move on. You can not get pregnant.  So.. have some fun Bella for once be daring!  To HELL with all these mated vamps



Author's Response:

Good morning!

I took a very brief mental trip to think of Bella becoming a mate-finder, but changed my mind. ;-)

LOL I ALSO did consider, very briefly, having her meet a human and date them, but that isn't going to happen here. I am sorry.  Bella will make choices that make her happy, before we're through.

 

Thank you so much for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 12:20 PM · On: Honesty Knows I Wasn't Ready

OMG you are so evil with the cliffy's!  Grrrrrrrrr!  Please update soon Bella deserves to get her freak on, hell we do to...we've all been suffering with her!

Is it Alistair?......

Take care, dixie



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, Dixie!

I am, I am.  C'mon, you know me... :D

Bella does deserve to get her freak on. And she will. Before we get to The End. (Am I evil? OH YES.)

Is it Alistair...? Ah, you will find out in the next chapter.  Yes, yes you will.

Thank you so much for reading and the lovely rating!

LJ

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 11:21 AM · On: Honesty Knows I Wasn't Ready

looking forward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Hello and good afternoon!

Thank you!  I should be slipping it into the queue shortly, so your wait shouldn't be too long. :)

Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: Evelyn208 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 10:54 AM · On: Honesty Knows I Wasn't Ready

The chapter left me completely underwhelmed until Alice's vision... do tell... :)

Author's Response:

Good afternoon!

Ah, Alistair is not, I take it, your idea of a good match for our Bella? ;-)

Alice's vision will be...revealed...in one way or another... Eventually.  :)

Thank you for reading!

LJ

 

Reviewer: bella31 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 07:00 PM · On: You're Making Me Feel Not Alone

OK, I have reread this and I really need you to have Bella tell Edward off big time, remind him what she gave up for him. Let the whole family hear what she says and make him feel like the dog he is. And the family is letting him off to easy, and if I were Bella I would be feeling not much love from this family.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

LOL Well, this IS Bella, remember. She may be doing better at realizing her strength but I have tried not to make her vastly OOC.  

The Cullens are the Cullens.  Imperfect, striving always to maintain their status quo through the decades, NO MATTER WHAT. They're like that.

As to how the family relationships adjust over time, stick around. ;-)

Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 06:48 PM · On: And I Don't Wanna Be Alone

well how nice. She never gets away from Browyn. They do this and that Rose really likes her..yadayada yada. Now Alistair. Super. I hope.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Bronwyn IS a member of the Cullen Coven, yeah...  Well, what Esme THINKS and what Rosalie FEELS are not necessarily the same thing... lol

Alistair has a role to play. For real. 

Thank you for sticking with me!

LJ

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 07:06 AM · On: And I Don't Wanna Be Alone

What the hell?  I can't wait to see why Alistair wants to see Bella!

I swear to God these Cullens are so rude!  Why in the world would Esme say "I think Rose has really taken to Bronwyn. Almost as if she feels sorry for her..." when Esmw knows how horrid Rose treated Bella at the start of her and Edwards relationship.  I thought vamp's had perfect recall....my ass!

It's almost like they just want to push it under the rug and pretend that nothing happened and everyone is thrilled with the outcome.  They are really pissing me off...I hope when Bella finds her mate those two go off on their own...screw the Cullens! Excepte Alice and Jasper.

Take care, Dixie



Author's Response:

Good morning!

LOL Ah, well, Alistair will tell her, for sure. :)

Here's a bit on the Cullens and how I see them:

- This is a family with a "We'll always be a family, come Hell or high water" mentality.

- Edward leaves and drinks from humans? He comes home. All is well.

- Rose is changed and hates her new life? She adapts and is grouchy but all is well.

- Rose brings on someone not even APPROVED (gasp!)? Emmett is changed and all is well.

- Newbies show up, one of whom slips rather more often than the family norm? They cover up and move on and all is well. Everyone ALWAYS adjusts.

- Edward falls for a HUMAN? Well...sure, because he's happy now. They all adjust and stay together and all is well.

This is what they have ALWAYS done. They move a bit, adjust, and keep moving forward with the understanding that this is WHAT THEY DO. Always. They're not perfect.

So, yes.  Pushing it under the rug is rather accurate.

:)
Thank you, as always, for reading and your lovely ratings. :)
LJ

Reviewer: Jasperslover (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2012 01:03 AM · On: And I Don't Wanna Be Alone

hum , love it and the idea of her with alistair is very intriguing. I hope you update more soon =)



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Ah, Alistair.  He is rather an enigma in a cloak of darkness at times.  Still, I like the fellow. lol To a point!

Thank you for reading, reviewing and rating! So kind! :)

Since the story is complete here on my end, I've been updating pretty quickly. AND the Twi-beta for this story is super-speedy!

Thanks again,

LJ

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 09:47 PM · On: And I Don't Wanna Be Alone

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Great! Because more is to be had! lol

Thank you for reading and joining along on the ride.

LJ

Reviewer: Evelyn208 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 09:31 PM · On: And I Don't Wanna Be Alone

I was enjoying the carefree, no drama chapter for once! So rare in a story to just have thoughts. Very refreshing. And then Alistair had to come along. :p Ah, oh well. I enjoyed the chapter all the same. 



Author's Response:

Good morning!

LOL Yeah, I thought I might give the readers a break. ;-)  Our thoughts play a HUGE role in our own personal dramas, so they deserve a little air time.

Alistair...ah, yes.  Stay tuned. *grin*  

Glad you enjoyed the chapter!  Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 01:40 PM · On: You're Making Me Feel Not Alone

Well its nice to see that Mom and Dad have realized she isn't dead and wants to spend time with her. Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Good evening!

LOL Yeah... Remember the Cullens are only human. ;-)

Next update is in the queue! Should be up soon. 

Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 06:17 PM · On: You're Making Me Feel Not Alone

Im hoping the surprise comes with a six pack, and you know im not talking about beer.... Bella deserves a romp in the sheets, and i'll be ok if you do the fade to black when the action gets a little heavy. Just so long as Bella has problems working her legs afterwards...



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Well, as to six-packs, they don't enter into it...at this time. And this story will have its non-fade moments, I promise.  Eventually.

Patience is a virtue. :D

Thank you so much for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 06:04 PM · On: You're Making Me Feel Not Alone

Okay.. I get thatmates are hard to find.  Well it is not Edward's fault he found his. How darn convenient for him. Go from one love to the next.

 

Bella is becoming her own person and that is good too. I think we all need a breather between relationships. To access.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Yeah, mates are hard to find... Alas.

Edward did have the surprise route to find his mate. This is something that troubles  him a bit.  

I heartily concur. Breathers are necessary for proper emotional health. Even for vampires. :)

Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 06:03 PM · On: Let the Rain Come Down

Being an empath drove him crazy.

I absolutely love that line.

 

I think Bella should just do what she wants to do. And if she doesn't know what that is yet, that's cool. Sounds like she's having fun with the Whitlocks.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

LOL Glad you liked that line. :)

Bella will do her best to do what will make her happy. Eventually. 

She is having FUN. :) In spades, even. lol

Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 01:49 PM · On: You're Making Me Feel Not Alone

Lord I hope Bella lets go and has a little monkey sex of her own.  Good lord how many years has it been now?

I can't wait to see what the surprise is!

Take care, dixie



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Bella...will have some options presented to her in upcoming chapters. ;-)

It's been a few years. Four I think?

Thank you so much for reading and the lovely rating!

LJ

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 12:48 PM · On: You're Making Me Feel Not Alone

loved it looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Good afternoon!

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

More is forthcoming...!

Thank you for reading,

LJ

Reviewer: scareDcat (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 11:32 AM · On: You're Making Me Feel Not Alone

Good for her x

Author's Response:

Good afternoon!

Thanks! I was pleased for her, too. :)

Thanks for reading and the shiny rating!

LJ

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 08:30 PM · On: Let the Rain Come Down

Please take this with a grain of salt... Why would Bella want anything less than a true mate after the Edward fiasco?  She fell deeply in love and after so long she is left to wander and wonder.  No she will not invest time in anything less.. I do not blame her.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Well, with Bella and the mate issue... She knew Carlisle waited CENTURIES before finding his mate.  And Bella has known a loving, intimate relationship and is now without that.  Would she really want to keep herself TO herself without any kind of closeness with anyone for centuries?  If that is what it would be?  You're right - the risk would be huge NOT to wait and to possibly open herself up for another fiasco for herself or someone else.  

So that is her dilemma.  It will take time to resolve. :)

Thank you for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: sisteria27 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 06:47 PM · On: Let the Rain Come Down

This chapter was great.

I really want her to find her mate!

I want him to be so incredibly gorgeous he makes even Edward jealous.

 



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Thank you. Glad you liked it. :)

I can promise she'll be happy in this story and that it will make Edward nuts. :)

 

Thank you so much for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: TGosha (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 05:54 PM · On: Let the Rain Come Down

I love the direction that the story is taking. As much as I'm a B/E fan, I'm looking forward to seeing Bella as an strong , independent woman. Keep up the good work. P.S. sorry about the rating before, I was on my phone and didn't realized I had made a mistake.



Author's Response:

Good evening!

No worries! :) I only said something in case it had been an accident, because if it were me, I'd want to know. lol

Bella will be strong and confident before we're done. :)

Thanks so much for reading!

LJ

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