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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Boy, that wasn't really helpful! Edward looks like he has schizophrenia, as he keeps changing his mind, and Alice looks manic! I suppose Bella might just get an early sleepover! Loved the one shot, it was very thought provoking on the possibilities!

Author's Response:

Good morning!

So sorry for my tardy reply! 

The workings of Alice's visions and how they affect her was just fascinating, to me. The poor woman, having to maintain her equilibrium while her world virtually crumbles around her over and over.  Yikes!  

It does look odd from the outside! lol

Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Alice. Theres just no way to avoid the tragic future That is bella.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Apologies for my tardy reply!

Alice really had  a rough time, here!  The only way to avoid it is to go pro-active and seek out the nomads before they find Bella!  

Because I'm all into search and destroy. Or something. lol

Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

A great idea! Playing was the lesser of the evils.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Sorry I am SO FAIL with replies to this site!  Let's hear it for a dying laptop...

So! Thank you. :) I'm glad you enjoyed this story.  Playing was a lesser evil. In my head, they decide to go AFTER the nomads, though... Carlisle is less than pleased. Alas.

Sometimes, you can't please everyone!

Thank you for reading!

LJ

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