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Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2013 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 29
i've liked this story, this felt kind of rushed, though
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2013 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 29
:)
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2013 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 29
Thanks good chapter
Reviewer: bellabyday (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2013 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 29
Wow, where do I get my own handyman Edward?! lmao. What a great ending to a great story! I really loved how Bella tried to really work things out with Emmett. It's what any good mother would try to do. No she will have no future doubts as to where she belongs. I enjoyed the exchange between the reverend and Edward, very fitting. Thanks so much for the awesome read. I cant wait to see your next fic. I'll be sure to put you on author alert. Keep up the awesome writing! ~ Bellabyday
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2013 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 29
what an ending
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 29
wow very very good ending very very nice
keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: Sandythestorm (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 29
Wow. Fantastic chapter. Last chapter of a perfect ending. I knew after the kiss in prison to remind her of their passion he owned her. "..worth it" knew he wasnt talking about their time together. I appreciated him begging nearly. Im so proud she stood up for herself. And no matter what she let go of familiar, safe, histery, a kid, counselling she said we grown apart, not campatable, im out.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 29
squeeeeeeee hot wow squeee omg love it!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 29
I was a little worried there for a while about the end but it was perfect.Thanks for a great read!MerrilyKat
Reviewer: Red Koolaid (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2013 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 29
Ah, what a super ending. This was such a great story. I knew they had to end up together in the end. He couldn't let her go, and she couldn't let him go. Thanks for giving me closure. I hope you've got another story in the works. Thanks!
Reviewer: Sandythestorm (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2013 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 28
Yes i am caughtup and wait patiently for an update. Love your desperation your fire your passion your excitement.
I so quickly believed Em. So quickly believed she could walk away from even the thought of Edward.
More must have more
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 28
Poor Emmett. It makes sense that his problems were more deep rooted but his religious upbringing did mask that very well and I think most people, like Bella did, would assume that religion was the cause of Emmett's inability to open up and discuss sexual matters.
I'm glad that Bella's going home with Emmett, she needs time to heal and process everything that's happened and also to see Adam and be his mum, but I hope this isn't the end for her and Edward. As she said being with Edward has changed her and I feel that she'd be sacrificing too much to go back to Emmett and their marriage. Could they get past his initial and Bella's subsequent infidelity without pointing fingers? I couldn't. Emmett was obviously unhappy and missing something with Bella in the first place which is why he ended up in Rosalie's arms.
Jane x
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 28
Great! The whole plot with the nazi art seemed rather forced, but this is still a good story. I hope you update soon!
Reviewer: I laugh I hope I love (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 28
I really liked this chapter! It feels like something that has to happen between Bella and Emmett and for some reason a part of me wants to see them try to work it out... I'm looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2013 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 28
:)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2013 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 4
Well, Emmett IS cheating on her... It shows in the way he is being so critical of Bella-not just texts and phone calls
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2013 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 28
holy crow.. I wonder how much Rose knew before Bella.... How will he just leave Rose? Cause Bella sure as hell just cant forget Edward.... Post again soon <3
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2013 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 28
wow very vey nice keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2013 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the early part of this story when it was exploring Bella's sexuality but now that it has gone to the dogs with all these cloak and gagger art theft nonsense (a quite unbelievable plot twist) and now sexual abuse of Emmet which is very uninteresting and totally off-tangent, I think we have to part ways with me being extremely disappointed. I'll look in once in a while to see if there is some improvement but on the whole I think you wasted a golden opportunity here. In any case, good luck on your next story. Bye-bye!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 28
arg!!
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 28
Thanks good chapter
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 28
Looking forward to more
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2013 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 27
lookingforward to more
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2013 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 27
Thanks good chapter
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2013 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 27
:)
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