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Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Humiliation
This is a great story! I can't wait to see what tomorrow brings for these two!!! Great writing!!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Humiliation
Water dripping down Edward's body...thanks for the visual :) Great chapter!
Reviewer: midsummerstars (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Humiliation
Awwww poor Edward.....
Reviewer: denmother (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Humiliation
Gah!! Oh Shyward and maybe a little bit Dorkward...how I love him! This story is great, I keep checking religiously for updates. Keep em coming!!
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Humiliation
I was laughing out loud !!! Very cute. Please let them stop being blind soon. There is so much more fun to be had, wink wink. Keep up the terrific job.
Reviewer: Milliehud (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Humiliation
AGh. They need to kiss....???
Agh Funness!! They are just so cute. :D
Update soon please!!
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Humiliation
this is a nice story. im interested to see what other adventures that get up to in this cabin.
Reviewer: GoodyGoody23 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Humiliation
I love your story, and your banner is awesome. Very creative. You portray Edward and Bella very well. Edward being a physchologist makes so much sense but is also original. You are hugely talented. :)
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Humiliation
What a fun story! thanks!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Humiliation
Loved it - the water fight was awesome, and I could easily picture the whole thing in my head. Loved Edward's inner monologue/arguments with himself, those were great. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Humiliation
Great chapter. So much fun. Loved the water fight. I'm just waiting for Edward to lay one on her!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Humiliation
Ahhhh, miscommunications suck! Bella needs to grow a backbone and jump the boy already. *grin* The guy took his shirt off in front her, didn't put on another one, and then got into a water fight with her. How much self-control does one girl have???
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Humiliation
LOVE LOVE LOVE this. I'm so glad that you updated (yes I clapped my hands like a toddler when I saw that you had updated!!). I want Bella to attack him already. The sexual tension between them is so thick that just reading it means that I have to go take a shower.
This story is very subtle about passion but it's there, in volumes. I like that they're so playful. I don't think we saw enough of that in Twilight.
GREAT job =D
Reviewer: Wordy (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Humiliation
Every snowed in cabin story should come with a eclipsedawn.....
Thank you speedy updater :)
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Humiliation
Loved the water fight! Sounds like so much fun.
Reviewer: Lina (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Humiliation
great chapters... i had to do some catchin up today.
Every kitchen should have a Bella....LOVE that line!
Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Humiliation
water fight love it!! great chapter!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Humiliation
He obviously hasn't been reading her signals too well..lol.
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Humiliation
Cute chapter... loved the sexual tension. Good Job!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Humiliation
Great chapter! I can't wait to read more. :)
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Humiliation
Yeah, well if I were going to gander a guess, oh wth I am, she wanted that hug to continue. Cute story!
Reviewer: Edward_fan (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Humiliation
Hmmm...a water fight. Edward without a shirt...both of them all wet....I was totally thinking they were going to get somewhere past the aquaintance/friend zone. *sigh* Apparently not....here's hoping to the next chapter! Great job by the way!
Reviewer: WndrngY (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Humiliation
Tease! How long are they going to be trapped and are they going to waste the whole time being socially backward and obtuse? (Showing off my vocabulary skills!) The story is great, keep going, but jeez! Let something happen soon or they're going to spontaneously combust.
Reviewer: mari cullen (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Humiliation
Awesome chapter! I love the spontaneity of Edward. I want to read more, please update soon.
Reviewer: Keela Byrne (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Humiliation
Haha. Must've been a fun night for the two of them. It's amazing how oblivious they are to each other. The attraction and the feelings are mutual. Get on with it already! :D (I think the pace of the story is just perfect, it wasn't meant like that ;) It's more to Eddie and Bella :P )
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