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Reviewer: Samolly (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Lights Out
Perfect story for a chilly day!
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Lights Out
this fun...and its looks like we are about to get to the funner parts!! lol
so get to it!!
Reviewer: mayte (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Lights Out
UM....LOVED IT!!!!! =D
Reviewer: Demetria99 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Lights Out
This is an excellent story. I am glad that they didn't throw themselves at one another at the beginning. Getting to know each other first makes perfect sense. And it is really interesting that Alice has yet to answer those calls.
I can't wait to see how Edward and Bella get along next!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Lights Out
squee!!!!
moremoremore!!!
Reviewer: BellSwan (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Lights Out
Awwies. They finally kissed..full out. God. Took forever. Thank god for Bella ecoming a charmer. Hehe
BellSwan
Reviewer: Ellie is a freak name (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Lights Out
bow chica wow wow! lol wow that was immature, but I laughed so that's okay! lol hope you laugh too! ;D
Reviewer: ecoholic (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Lights Out
Really like your story. The characters seems pretty dimensional. Update soon!
Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Arriving
Okay, so I have read all the way through chapter 15 and I really like the story. My only complaint is I feel like I read every chapter twice. I understand that you are trying to get both of the POV's, but is getting a little daunting reading hte same dialogue two chapters in a row....Other than that, your plot freaking rocks and you are a very talanted writer. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Mya Jacobs (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Lights Out
I love your twist on the basic ideas of Twilight. You have a lot of talent!!! I'm new to the site so I'm not sure what more to say, aside from the feeling I need to beg you to keep writing! : )
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: January 09, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Lights Out
WHOOOO HOOOOO!!! Show of hands for anyone else interested in renting a cabin out in the middle of nowhere and inviting cute guys to stay with us!?!?! LOL! Ready for my game of Twister, now...where did I stash Jasper???
Reviewer: andreaspray (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Lights Out
"right hand, my dick? left foot, my sholder?" Absolutely the best line ever. It took me a full five minutes to recover from laughing so hard. Once again awesome chapter. To bad they were interupted :( Oh well plenty more time for someting hot and steamy to hapen later *nudgenudge*winkwink* So good, love this story so much update, update, update
Reviewer: LatinaLibra (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Lights Out
gah! Update!
Reviewer: mslupin (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Lights Out
YEAH, Kissing! I was wondering how you would get Jacob into the story.
Reviewer: Lion_Lamb32 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Lights Out
amazing! amazing! amazing! Such a sexy fantasy written beautifully through you! Please updaate :)
Reviewer: MrsKelleyCullen (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Arriving
Ah don't stop I need to know what happens next lol More kisses!! Lol
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Lights Out
That's cute.
Reviewer: Vanessa Wolf (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Lights Out
Very sweet story. I read it at my workstation at lunch today.
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Lights Out
Ooooh, love it! Love to see Edward's devious mind at work, when he chose Twister . LOL And YAY for more kisses!! LOL
Great job, keep it coming! :)
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Lights Out
Holy Crap, I totally love this story. Please, please, please don't let Jacob come between them - I don't think I could handle that. I love that there are no games between them, its very refreshing. However, if Jacob were jealous or unbalanced and threatened Bella, that would be cool. I just think that Edward and Bella have such an honesty between them it would stink if there was unfounded jealousy and miscommunications.
Just my unworthy opinion! Thank you for such a great story.
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Lights Out
This is an adorable story! "Every kitchen should come with a Bella". How CUTE! I hope you aren't planning on anything too much with the whole Edward/Jacob thing. I really don't need to see Jacob too much! I'm having so much fun reading about Bella/Edward! Looking forward to your next update!
Reviewer: allytwilove (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Lights Out
GASP!
I LOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU
Ok, back to the story now.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Lights Out
Whoo-hoo! (Or as some put it - "Boom chicka wow wow!!!")
Love this story. I'm generally not into all the AU AH stories, but this one is fun, Can't wait to read what happens next!
Reviewer: braveinsanity (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Lights Out
I am falling in love with this story. I love your Edward! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: pearls8 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Lights Out
ahh i am loving this i started it tonight and just plowed right through it cuz i could not stop. It is soo great!! UPDATE SOON PLEAAASSEEE!
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