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Reviewer: stylishy (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Intimacy
Woooooo for lemony goodness!!!!!!! And Twister!!
This is really sweet, their love keeps growing stonger and stonger. I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
~Yelda XD
Reviewer: violakate (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Intimacy
This is GOLD! GOLD I TELL YOU! Please make chapter 20!
just one tiny sugegstion
try to stirr up the plot. it cant just be edward and bella having sex and foreplay (well it could, we would ALL enjoy that).
but anyway, i think you have the human qualities of edward down to perfection :]
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Intimacy
WELL DONE! Now, if you will excuse me I have a shower that is begging to freeze me out...
Reviewer: superstarrh (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Arriving
Great start, can't wait to see where this goes.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Intimacy
The lemony goodness that was this chapter has left me SPEECHLESS.
I'm finding a snowy cabin and locking myself in with an Edward. YUM =] Hopefully it will turn out HALF as amazing as your story!!!!
This is definitely one of my favorite stories so please update really soon!
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Intimacy
Edward Cullen is always first...but Rochester is a nice second!
Reviewer: offthenet (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Intimacy
OK, I'm ready to hop a plane for Alaska and find myself an Edward ... Any snow around here is offically melted! I'm feeling slightly warm myself ...
Reviewer: Vanessa Wolf (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Burning
Fabulous story, love the Twister part.
Reviewer: ieatsourgrapes (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Intimacy
Oh so hot!
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Intimacy
yum yum yum
Reviewer: lovesfool (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Intimacy
That was great! Just totally perfect!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Intimacy
Great chapter!! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: flygirl (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Intimacy
I love the story. It's very sweet. But I have a question. I've read in many stories, not only yours, that the main character had panties and bra under the PJ (or t-shirt and sweatpants, doesn't really matter). Is it normal in US that you go to sleep with your underwear, esprecially a bra? It's kinda dangerous, if not uncomfortable. It can cause cancer. Just curious...
Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Intimacy
loves it times a million!
hot chapter! =]
can't wait for more!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Intimacy
I loved this chapter. You managed to make it really sweet and put a lemon/smut in there.
Can't wait to see what else Bella has planned! Please update soon.
p.s Hope your cold gets better.
Reviewer: rosesoliloquy (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Intimacy
Yay! Lemons! *claps enthusiastically* and no, this didn't sound loopy at all :)
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Intimacy
Mmmm.... nice! LOL Good to see confident, sexy Bella, even if she's not sure where it's coming from. LOL
Loved the 20 questions Edward seemed to be playing with her, and then the ticklefest. The 'Edward Scissorhands' cracked me up! LOL
Can't wait to see what else she has in store for him. LOL Great job! ~Cat~
Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Intimacy
Great chapter, i loved it
cant w8 for next 1
Reviewer: Morganville_Vamp (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Intimacy
Hooray for SMUT!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Intimacy
Awesome!! I can't wait to see what else you have in store for them :)
Reviewer: Bulls in Brooklyn (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Intimacy
I can't believe you're snowed in whereas I've had three 43 (109) degree days in a row. It's been unbearable!
So not fair!
Reviewer: Mamasebring (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Intimacy
MMMMM YUMMY
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Intimacy
I love these people. I love their heat. I love their humor. I love their...LOVE. It's building and buidling, inching them closer and closer to that precipice where they eventually tumble over into their sweetest oblivion. I can't wait to see just how sweet that oblivion is going to be. Your writing is already setting up the fall in spectacular fashion. I love it to pieces!
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Intimacy
Another great chapter! I loved how this was very sexy but also very tender. Looking forward to much more!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Intimacy
Hmm...I thought she was headed in a different direction when she was studying and admiring his peen. Maybe an oral exploration is planned as part of her turn?
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