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Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Sweat
LMAO.... of course!!! Cut him off right when he finds the perfect moment...
hmmmm...All is well. I trust that you'll fix it... hopefully, you'll still find a great moment again, ok?
OK, so make good on your promise to not leave us hanging for so long... and update soon!!! :)
Reviewer: bludazie (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Sweat
That damn Jacob Black. Boo!!!!
Reviewer: sarah_levana (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Sweat
oh my god ! you didn't really stop here !
please update soon or my poor little heart can't bear it...
see ya
Reviewer: Doyle (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Sweat
....cliff hanger???? Duh duh duh! I'm in love with this story lol, you must finish! :)
Reviewer: LiseH (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Sweat
Finnaly ! I've waited for ages thinking that I would never be able to read this amazing story til it's last sentence. I love it, and you better not make me wait as long as the last time! x)
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Sweat
That was an awesome chapter. It was filled with humor, lust and love. I hope that Edward gets to say those three lovely words to Bella. The cliffhanger was a very effective mood breaker.
Reviewer: JazzHands (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Sweat
WHY!!!! Why must you torture me??? This is really good stuff, keep it coming. JH
Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Sweat
I'm so happy to hear that you will finish this story cause i love it so much and want to find out how it ends. Keep up the good work and please update soon. :)
Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Sweat
Yeah I'm so glad that you gave us a new chapter. This story is awesome and even though that really is an evil cliffy...LOL...that was a great chapter. I can't wait to see Bella's reaction when Edward tells her he is in love with her.
Who's at the door? Hum...it would be quite the plot twist if it were Alice but wouldn't she have a key? So I'm going to go with it's the rescue people or whatever making sure that they are okay..Ooo I just had another idea..please tell me it's not Jake? Oh that would not be good. But that would be a plot twist that would have serious implications and reprecussions. Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Sweat
Great Story!! This is my theory on who is at the door
1) It's Jacob coming to the rescue because Bella did ask to be rescued. Oh the drama that would ensue if the is who it is.
2) It's Alice and because she knocked at the door Bella and Edward figure out that she set this up.
Please keep on writing I am on egg shells wondering who it can be!!!
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Sweat
ah crap...what a cliffie. i cant wait to read the next one and omg the sex holy crap LOL
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Sweat
OMGGG
haha
way to leave me on the edge of my seat!
love love loved it
cant wait for more
Oxo
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Sweat
boom boom boom snow rescue!
poor Edward, planning for a future with Bella...interrupted at every turn
Great chapter!
Jeanna M.
Reviewer: skr0075 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Sweat
Ugh! Dang it, Jacob!
Reviewer: simplicity (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Sweat
NOOOOOO...I have a feeling I know who is at the door and wish so much I were to be w-r-o-n-g sniff sniff
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Sweat
omg it's totaly Jacob.:( lol
Reviewer: gxtgal (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Sweat
Love Love Love this fan fic! Can't wait til the next chapter. Just SAY IT Edward!!!!!!
Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Sweat
It's Jacob. We haven't seen him since he dropped Bella off...he's due for a visit.
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Sweat
GGGAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS AMAZING!!!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON I CANT STAN THE SUSPENSE LOL!!! :)
Reviewer: Theresa Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Sweat
AHHHH hurry please i cant wait to see whats gonna happen next guurrrahhh!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek!! i rated u a ten!!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Sweat
oh no! They're getting rescued..and Edward haven't told her his feelings!
And she won't say it, ever bec she doesn't think he feels that way :(
Reviewer: SherryJo (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Sweat
shit now , one of me favs . please please please add another chapter........ oh yeah please dont let it be jake
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Sweat
Terrific story... I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you for writing such a great story.
Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Sweat
Thank you! Thank you for the new chapter! I enjoyed it.
Jenn
Reviewer: Jenn32 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Sweat
You're killing me. I wanna know who is at the door. That was so hot!!! I hope he tells her how he feels soon!!!
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