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Reviewer: Ljchurch21 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Sweat
Noooooooooooooooooooooooo! What happens next?
Reviewer: ZephyrEffect (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Sweat
You and your cliffhangers!!! I am LOVING this story, keep it up!! Can't wait for the next chapter. Please complete it soon, I am going through withdrawals... :)
Reviewer: SarahBella (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Sweat
You are so mean!
We've been waiting for this for chapters and chapters now, and what od we get??
A cliffie!
Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Sweat
dang it! i HATE CLIFFHANGERS! GREAT STORY,I LOOOOOOVE IT
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Sweat
well i just read through the whole story and i loved it. i'm glad u started alternating point of view instead of giving both... man.. they need to just spit it out already.. lol I love you, Bella-I love you, Edward!! i didn't think that was hard.. lol i've added it to my favs and can't wait for more. thanx for writing
chasity
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Sweat
shucks!! this is such a cliffhanger!! i just finished reading all 24 chapters and i loved it! i regret not having come across it sooner. i didn't know how to explore/find other stories here in twilighted before.
but this is a terrific story! i wish you could write the update sooner. just who the hell is at the door to interrupt at the most unfortunate of times! i think it's alice..or worse, jacob! gah! i wouldn't want that! but it's been 23 chapters since he last made an appearance.. i'm getting a bit anxious because if things are going great, a problem or glitch is bound to occur to mess up with your happiness. God i hope not! i hope it's alice. with jasper... haha.. i like those two.
anyways, i'm guessing you're a psychology major? just a guess. i hope to read the next chapter pretty soon! thanks for writing such a wonderful story.
Reviewer: PIXIECORPSE (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Sweat
So that is totally Jacob knocking at the door making sure Bella is alright.
Love the story, hope to hear more soon!!!!
Reviewer: Defiance (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Sweat
Ok, so I've already reviewed and you know I love this story. But last night as I was brushing my teeth a thought came and clobbered me over the head.
The people Bella rang at the start of the story, the ones who told her she'd have to "stay put" because they were flat out trying to dig people out of the snow elsewhere, I bet it's them at the door. Come to "rescue" them and take them back to real life.
Bella, Edward, if you can hear me - DON'T GO!! Real life is boring! Monotonous! Dreary! Stay in the cabin forever and continue having raging hot sauna sex. Please? *begs*
Reviewer: twilightedtwilighter747 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Sweat
NIow that is mean, u cant leave people just hanging there :( I'm probably gonna come here like every hour for the nxt chap) Anyway I love "Snowed In" I read the chapters you loaded into the computer in a day. Is its Jacob at the door? or the people that Bella called in like the first chapter? Or is it Alice?
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Sweat
AHHHHHH!!!! Is it Jacob??
Reviewer: LisiLisi1990 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Sweat
how could you stop writing now? that is just so mean!! i just started reading your story yesterday and i finished today and i have tosay that i absolutely LOVE it... i was waiting for alice to come though, i hope its her! :) i cant wait for more!!seriously,
<3
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Twister
NOW Alice decides to call back???
Reviewer: podunk265 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Arriving
I've read as much as you have written and I need more. You are a very good story teller and I appreciate the fact that there is a story here. Not just smut for smuts sake. Please keep going and tell us where they end up. I look forward to more stories from you.
Congrats
Reviewer: podunk265 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Sweat
WHAT ??? WHAT HAPPENS ARGH!!! YOU'RE KILLING ME!!! PLEASE KEEP GOING
Reviewer: misha2607 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Sweat
No!!! Why do you always end on the cliffhanger?!
Reviewer: alecat191 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Sweat
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!
i have a feeling its Jacob but idk!
update soon plz!
Reviewer: SaraiR88 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Arriving
oh my!! I read all of the chapters today. you left me wanting more. How can i wait for the next chapter?
Reviewer: DesiCullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Burning
Ive never read any au-human stories. i never thought id like it with all human character , but i decided to chance on this story and it definitely didnt disappoint.
Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Sweat
Awesome story...please update soon...can't wait to see what happens!!!
Reviewer: lucia16 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Arriving
Well, Jacob has to know Edward is in there as his car is parked out on the front, isn't it?
Please let them get rid of him fast!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: mojonesy (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Sweat
Boom, Boom, Boom!
AWWWW I could just hear the yelling Go Away!
Boy, it's getting stuffy in there. My bet is on Tanya tracking down Edward. But Jacob is a persistent fellow too....I guess we will wait and see.
Reviewer: TRDancer (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Sweat
*smacks head against a wall*
Of course I had to join in when the last chapter had a cliffy. *sigh*
So much for Edward letting Bella know he loves her verbally. Ah well, they had some fun. ;)
So... who could it be? Jacob?
Possibly Alice?
The abominable snowman? Those knocks were pretty hard... (TWSS)
I guess I have to wait to find out. :D
Reviewer: TRDancer (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Punishments and Salads
Won't do WHAT? Ack.
I love the "Bella Map"
And I love the part where Bella's all "I didn't think 'ooo, shapely'" That made me laugh.
There was more... but I can't remember. I'm suffering from cloud mind.
Reviewer: TRDancer (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Tongue Tied
He realized his love for her!! Yay! But silly Edward thinks he has to be all special. Honestly, if he just randomly said it when they weren't doing anything particularly special, that would be the best moment.
:D
Reviewer: TRDancer (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part II
Bella's turn is very fun, I can see. :P Or rather, read.
HA.
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