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Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Humiliation
I don't think she is freaked out. She is probably in her room doing a "happy dance." LOL!!! Fun chapter.
Reviewer: Chassy369 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Sweat
WHAT!!!?!?!
After working my way through 24 chaps of this wonderful story and this is where i catch up?!? Not fair!
The cliffhanger from hell...
I bet it's Jacob at the door. Or Alice...no...it got to be Jacob....NOT NOW! GO AWAY!
UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdate....pleasepleasepleaseplease
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Spark
Can't wait for that spark to flame. :)
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Something Else
I wonder how long it will take them to admit their attraction to each other???
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Tour
I love Edward's inner dialog. Enjoying this story.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Staring
They are both similar in their thoughts about the opposite sex. LOL!!
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Good Morning
I am enjoying this story.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Bewitched
Ah, Bella. Always underestimating herself. Can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Ironic
Enjoyed it. It may be cold outside but I have a feeling things might get hot inside.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Double Booked
LOL!! I can just picture Bella standing there with a knife.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Intruder
She's got company. :)
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Arriving
Looks interesting. Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Kayten (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Sweat
OK, first off, I do not believe for a moment that it was an accident that Bella and Edward ended up in the cabin together =) Just sayin'.
Secondly, considering this is an AU story I think you've got the most believable characters of anything I've read on this site so far. I totally feel like, if Edward would have been a modern-day human and met Bella a little older like this, the two of them would be just like you portray them, and that's awesome =) You have their mannerisms down perfect, it's almost as if I can imagine you've met them in real life. And, honestly, I think I have a bigger crush on human Edward than vampire Edward now thanks to you lol Well done on that note!
Thirdly, I've seriously found myself thinking about what's going to happen in this story in my every day life. I caught myself wondering at work today lol I'm not even ashamed to admit that. I can't wait 'til you update again =D
Reviewer: HEAR (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Ironic
Aww... nice to see he's captivated already!
Reviewer: HEAR (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Double Booked
Hmm... not so sure this was an accident on Alice's part but I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Sweat
Damn it! That's so cruel to leave me hanging there! :) Now, I'm bouncing all over the place waiting for the next chapter.
xoxo Danii
Reviewer: vamptramp16 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Arriving
Must be Jacob!
Reviewer: lostlamb07 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Sweat
I can't take it!!! I need the next chapter!!!! I love Snowed In!!! Me-thinks that might be Jacob at the door... that damn Jacob. Grrrr.
Reviewer: Mo40 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Good Morning
Hi, I'm late in finding your story, but it has got me hooked. I can't wait to read more. xx
Reviewer: baby_lotuss (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Sweat
Just wanted to congratulate you on your wonderful writing. You have really tapped into the 'real', or should I say human, romance between these two wonderful characters. I still can't believe you made Bella a bit of a fetishist, and now I cannot read anything related to either Bella or Edward that involves his saying: "Say it, say it out loud". You are awesome. Can't wait to see what's coming up next.
All the best!
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Sweat
Oh no! Don't tell me salvation has arrived! What timing!!! Thanks for updating! I've been DYING for the next chapter. Animal Bella was great! Too funny how Edward reacted to her. He was so deluded... naked sauna time and no sex? Puh-lease!
Reviewer: Treysongswifeyy (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Sweat
LOVE LOVE LOVE it !!
hehe ..
next chapter . next chapter !!
:D
Reviewer: Wondabug (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Staring
awwww...i love it!
Reviewer: theresurrected (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Sweat
hey hurry up man!!!! i am litrally dying here!!!
Reviewer: Princess2000204 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Sweat
Poor Edward, keeps getting his moment taken away. I an so see him just going, 'fuck it' and declaring his love for her in the most inapproperiate time.
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