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Reviewer: evoL le fay (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Twister
uh.. niiice!!!! lol i love it!
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Arriving
i really love this story, but have only recently started making comments. I figured I would want to know if someone was enjoying my writing so much. you really are great and this story is so fun, I can't freaking wait for the next chapter! thanks for writing it!
Reviewer: NuclearLove3640 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Sweat
please please write more! :)
Reviewer: northernskies (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Sweat
I think you kinda abandoned this story.. shame really...:(
Reviewer: i love edward cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Sweat
omfg how could stop the story here!! ugh i am about to kill my self (literally) since there is no more story, have to go get a knife ugh plz write mroe really quickly
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Burning
Definitely best use of a Twilight movie line - is there a category for that? "Say it - say it out loud" was um.. a perfect fit in this chapter...Loving the story - I just started it yesterday and won't stop until I'm done today! Keep up the awesome writing! Can't wait to nominate you for a
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Burning
Definitely best use of a Twilight movie line - is there a category for that? "Say it - say it out loud" was um.. a perfect fit in this chapter...Loving the story - I just started it yesterday and won't stop until I'm done today! Keep up the awesome writing! Can't wait to nominate you
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Burning
Definitely best use of a Twilight movie line - is there a category for that? "Say it - say it out loud" was um.. a perfect fit in this chapter...Loving the story - I just started it yesterday and won't stop until I'm done today! Keep up the awesome writing! Can't wait to nominate
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Burning
Definitely best use of a Twilight movie line - is there a category for that? "Say it - say it out loud" was um.. a perfect fit in this chapter...Loving the story - I just started it yesterday and won't stop until I'm done today! Keep up the awesome writing! Can't
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Burning
Definitely best use of a Twilight movie line - is there a category for that? "Say it - say it out loud" was um.. a perfect fit in this chapter...Loving the story - I just started it yesterday and won't stop until I'm done today! Keep up the awesome writing!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Burning
Definitely best use of a Twilight movie line - is there a category for that? "Say it - say it out loud" was um.. a perfect fit in this chapter...Loving the story - I just started it yesterday and won't stop until I'm done today! Keep up the awesome writing!
Reviewer: LoganOwens (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Sweat
omg. i am in love with this story. keep up the fabulous job and i can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: Guynelle (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Arriving
Amazing!!!!!!
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Sweat
Wow - I just read through 24 chapters in one afternoon! The story is great!!! You left it at an evil cliffy, so please update soon!! :)
Reviewer: moviegal (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Sweat
OMG! You have to hurry with the next chapter!! I was so ready for Edward to say I love you to Bella when the knocks at the door came. Are they rescued? No wait I bet its Jacob! Please hurry!!!
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Sweat
i'll join the petition here... PLEASE UPDATE!!!! we are dying to know what happened and who is at the door. i still think it's jacob but i am sooo hoping it's not. hope it's alice or any other cullen.
PLEASE UPDATE!! PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE...
Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Sweat
i wanna more, i havent laugh so much in really long time, this bella is something...heheh....who would it be in the door? is it alice or jacob? hehehe
i hope it is alice not jacob...i wish i have that kind of man in my life, edward i mean...he sound too perfect, here in finland u dont find that kind of men...ups...sorry, but i think this story is sooo funny and great...
Reviewer: skimmerscm (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Sweat
When is the next update??
I'm just on the edge of my chair and it's getting uncomfortable right now...
Update soooooon please
Reviewer: KTCullen (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Sweat
wOW!I just found your story today, and now I'm done and desperate for more!! Who is at the door? It's probably the "rescue" workers Bella had called the first day...will Edward tell them to go away? Or it's Jacob....I don't know why, but whoever it is is going to be a buzzkill. Alice?
I love your Bella and Edward! I love how Edward over analyzes everything! I also love all the "Easter Eggs" so to speak...the lines or traits from the SM books thrown in here in different contexts. I smile every time I find one!
PLease don't torture us too much until the next update...I'm leaving you a nice review, rating you a 10, and adding you to my favorites...doesn't that deserve a quick update?
Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Sweat
Fantastic chapter, I cant wait for the next one :)
Reviewer: shead (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Sweat
Ok that was mean! But good I have to admitt! There wasn't a better way to end the ch. then that! lol Poor Edward! But hurry with the next chapter I don't think that he can or should hold on much longer!!! Love it!
Reviewer: bluocean444 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Sweat
Please update this story!!!! Thats just cruel! and whats with Bella being so bitchy all the sudden?
Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Ironic
YOU
NEED TO UPDATE
YOU
YOU
NEED TO UPDATE
Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Double Booked
U-UPDATE
P-PLEASE
D-DO IT FOR YOUR FANS
A-AWESOME PEOPLE UPDATE
T-TIME IS MONEY OR IN YOUR CASE LOVE FROM YOUR FANS <3
E-EXPECT ANGRY MOBS
Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Intruder
UPDATE YOU FOOL! D:
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