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Reviews For Sins of my Past
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 08:22 AM · On: Confessions

Great chapter.  I'm so glad E & B talked.  Looking forward to seeing him court her

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 08:06 AM · On: Confessions

The best...at last, love them all, great chapter.

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 08:04 AM · On: Electricity

For some reason I just loved this line at the end:

"Damnit, Bella, don't pass out..."

 

haha!

Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 07:40 AM · On: Confessions

YAYYYYY!!!! Hope your shoulder gets better soon!

Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 07:34 AM · On: Confessions

Hi April,

First Best wishes on your feeling better.  I am sorry to hear you hurt your shoulder I know it must be painful and a bother especially with kids!  I hope you feel better.  :)

 

Thanks for the chapter!  I was thrilled - as usual.  your are a really good writer.  Each chapter you not only mesmerize me but you are pulling me into your way of thinking!! I actually now want Bella & Ed together!  shocking I know lol!  Can I say again how I love Carlie.  Thanks for this wonderful story.

:D Chea

Reviewer: madidumas (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 07:27 AM · On: Confessions

I fell asleep holding onto Bella’s hand, while the happy chatter floated over me, leaving me looking, no doubt, like the village idiot…so broad was the smile on my face.--- wonderful!!!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 07:24 AM · On: Green Eyes

How ironic...I'm starting this story on MY birthday! :D

 

Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 07:22 AM · On: Confessions

yay!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 07:17 AM · On: Confessions

Woohoo! Kisses for Edward! Finally on the path to healing ALL wounds. I know how near death experiences can put things into perspective from personal experience. 

Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 06:54 AM · On: Confessions

I can't wait to see how Edward is going to try and earn Bella's love. It will probably frustrate her more than anything. Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope your arm is feeling better.

Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 06:46 AM · On: Confessions

Step one on a long road to recovery, and I am not talking about his physical one, just there relationship. Its going to difficult. Then add the grump of his addiction and therapy etc. Good luck you two

Reviewer: frankie_lvz (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2012 01:10 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

I love this story please more soon! i check for it daily! and i hope when this finnishes u keep writing! i would definetly read more from you!

Reviewer: Avabell (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 11:22 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

It's good to see what the rest of the family is thinking

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 12:01 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

THE FACT THAT HEE EVEN WOKE UP IS AMAZING THE FACT THAT HE IS SO CONFUSED IS UNDERSTANDABLE CAUSE HE THOUGHT HE WAS DEAD  HEARING HIS ANGEL  CALL HIM AND BEING CALLED DADDY BY HIS LITTLE GIRL AND PAIN WELL I BET HE FEELS LIKE A TRAIN WENT THROUGH HIM   HOPE WE ALL HOPE FOR THE BEST THE THING WITH THE BRACELET MADE ME CRY KNOWING HE WENT BACK TO FIND IT AND SEEEING HOW MUCH EMMETT LOVES THEM BOTH

Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 10:43 PM · On: Directives

LOVE!  LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!  (I'm singing this, in case you can't tell.)  LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!

The only thing I didn't love about this chapter was Sam's character.  I have a recently turned five-year-old and they don't speak quite that eloquently, and in full sentences, and in calm matter-of-fact voices.  Maybe some do...mine never did.  But then, mine has never had to deal with the things that this poor dear has, so...  Hmm...

I love that Bella has reconciled with Alice!  I love that she through a fit when Jenks came in, speaking about living wills!  I LOVE that we got to read about him opening his eyes!  :D   YAY!

 

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 06:29 PM · On: Directives

I loved this chapter!  I can't wait to see what happens next!  I'm happy to hear that there is alot more to come!

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: wsharp30 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 05:40 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

I LOVE SOMP! I just found it Friday night and read all weekend. I finished chapter 35 this morning at 1:00am and only got 3 1/2 hours of sleep. I then read chapter 36 while doing my hair this morning. Yeah, you can say you sucked me in. Keep the chapters coming! :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 05:16 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

What are my thoughts?....Just, that you, are a fantastic writer.  You get in to your character's heads so well.  I love peeking into everyones thoughts, I love these out-takes.  I think they really add to the story making it even more well rounded!

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2012 09:34 AM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

i wanna know what happens next!!! >< Update asap!! 

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 08:11 PM · On: SOMP - Jacob Outtake

i love jacob and carlie moments!!! <3 :) :)

Reviewer: mugglesmith (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 06:54 PM · On: Directives

I very much like both your Bella and your Edward in this story.  I guess I'm ridiculously forgiving of Edward's wayward behavior.  Edward seems sincerely contrite.  I also do not prescribe to the notion that Bella should have random hook ups to even the score.  I actually think she has the upper hand in this because she has remained faithful to her own values.  I do sometimes find Bella to be a bit of a martyr in her thinking processes, and that does annoy me, but that was particularly true in Stephanie Meyer's Twilight saga.  I think you have captured the essence of these two characters even though there are no vampires.  Edward is out of character in that he's such a womanizer, but he doesn't seem as horrible in the later depictions than how was described in the earlier chapters.  I struggle understanding why a doctor, even one as wealthy and charitable as Edward, is so frequently in the society pages, but I guess that's my own lack of understanding high society.  Anyways, thought I'd share my perspective.  I am very much looking forward to where it goes from here, now that healing seems to be beginning in so many forms.  Blessings, on your writing and all else.  Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 05:14 PM · On: Directives

amazing!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 04:52 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

All of the Cullens are thrilled with Bella's reaction towards Edward with her feelings, just not the circumstances.  It's a shame that it took such a drastic measure for Bella to own up her feelings for Edward.  His near death (death-heart stopping) condition before Bella would drop her ice control and let her true inner feelings show. After Edward has already told her how he feels towards her.  But Carlisle's reaction to Bella standing up to Jenks during the reading of will and living will a portion of him was delighted that she was fighting fiercely that no one was pulling the plug until there was no hope.  When Carlisle saw Edward's heart rate jump gave him hope Edward knew what was occurring around him. Emmett such a sweetheart wanted to make sure Bella was taken care of giving her his share of grandfather's inheritance.  That's a huge sum of money to give as a gift.  Emmett saving all those items of Edward and Bella being together from Edward's destructive behavior will be priceless to Edward when returned.  Esme is right parents should not have to bury their children, God willing I will never know that feeling either.  It's hard thinking of them leaving home and starting lives of their own much less leaving this earth forever.  Just waiting and worrying whether Edward will pull out or not especially knowing he had crashed more than once.  Especially after Carlisle was removed from the operating room due to his being overwhelmed by his son on the table.  Rosalie's got the right idea as well as the rest of the Cullens Edward once well will be pursuing Bella with no holds barred if Bella will allow it.  She has to let him know it he has a chance.  He'll woo her until the cows come home.  The man is a born romantic.  He only has to listen to his heart to do and say the right things.  Demetri said if Edward didn't woo her, he would go back into the ring as competition.  I don't Demetri will have to worry about Edward not taking the gaunlet and take his second chance on making Bella his girl now and in the future.  Looking forward to next week.

Hope you had a great weekend with hubby.

 

Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 08:15 AM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

Oh my ... this is getting almost too intense as I'm VERY afraid that this won't end well - pins and needles that's all I have to say - what a ride - thanks!!!

Reviewer: Luna89m (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2012 01:24 AM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

Yes he is waking up. How did he get out of jail. Tanya lost everything, how did they find out. Where are her parent, do they still talk to the Cullen. Why did they not do anything. So many ????? Please give us some answer. Get story.

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