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Reviews For Sins of my Past
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 02:52 PM · On: Thawing

wow!!! Great chapter!!!!!


Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 01:26 PM · On: Thawing

I am really envious of Bella and Jake's friendship!  They are closer than most brother's and sister's!  I really enjoyed the Bella Jake time, very funny, you made me laugh!

It's nice to see Edward and Bella starting to heal.  And hell yes I want to see what's going on with Demetri and Elizabeth!

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: drasticdee (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 12:43 PM · On: Thawing

great, love how bella and jacob interact

Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 12:33 PM · On: Thawing

Oh, I can't believe things will be that easily forgiven between Jake and Edward. The conversation about Tanya is definitely something that will be hard on Bella.

Reviewer: Luna89m (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 10:04 AM · On: Thawing

Yes, the first of many talks are out of the way. They need to talk about Tayna. They need to talk about how no one really stop her too, I mean someone had to know what she was doing. Jake and Edward need to talk too. Good way for them to start.

Reviewer: Monik_79 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 09:21 AM · On: Thawing

How you can come back from that? I know I couldn´t do it. Good luck triying to take this two in that trip.  

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 08:11 AM · On: Thawing


great chapter!! :D

can't wait for the next one!!!:):)

Reviewer: edward loves country (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 08:05 AM · On: Thawing

Now that's a good friend I'm sure Jake and Edward are gonna have a nice long chat soon.Edward needs to beg and beg everyday for forgivness even though she forgives him.

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 07:52 AM · On: Thawing

Bravo to Edward & Bella's progress!

As for Aro, given the description of the type of man he is, I wasn't surprised by his actions. He looks out for his own, so if you know what's good for you, you won't cross him.

Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 07:06 AM · On: Thawing

Still not down to the nitty-gritty but they will get there eventually. Can't wait to see what you come up with next, and Jake actually giving Edward a chance, that should be good. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I also hope you enjoy The Hunger Games, I thought it was great.

Reviewer: VampNurse (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 06:47 AM · On: Beginnings

I Just discovered this story and spend 2 days reading to get caught up. Wonderful story! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2012 11:40 PM · On: Beginnings

Truly a lot to work out between them.

Reviewer: Luna89m (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 03:10 PM · On: Green Eyes

Go go Aro, what away to get payback. Tanya went back to her old way. Like I said where are her parents, they even know everything that she did. You show how much Aro will go to for the ones he loves.

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2012 06:58 AM · On: Green Eyes

now that was so friggen cool ....well B/E will never know just how loved and cared for they are the death ....this man has taken protective father to  a whole new level

Reviewer: Avabell (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 03:39 AM · On: Beginnings

Loving the E/B time :)

Author's Response:

:)  More to come, but gotta heal first! 

I'm sending Aro/Tanya to you!

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 06:16 PM · On: Beginnings

I am looking forward to seing Demetri and Elizabeth together... do you think you will have an outtake of their POV's? Thanks for the chapter.

Author's Response:

I promise a Deme/Elizabeth POV.  I'm thinking next chapter.  Snicker.   For now, sending Aro/Tanya to you!

Reviewer: wickedvampires (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 02:53 PM · On: Beginnings

squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Oh I was just getting hot reading that and realized the chapter has ended!!! (pouting) and (panting) lol. Keep up the great work!!! next chapter really soon please!! Pretty please!!!

Author's Response:

Working on it tonight, but trying to get Aro/Tanya out.  Which by the way I'm sending to you!


Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 09:55 AM · On: Beginnings

This is just such an awsome story and I truly enjoy reading it.  Cannot wait for more.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  sHER

Author's Response:

I'm working hard on the next chapter...promise.  Had to get Aro/Tanya out tonight.  Sending it to you directly!


Reviewer: ferret (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 05:19 AM · On: Beginnings

I really love this story. I can't wait to see if Bella and Edward manage to keep their hands to themselves. It looks like they are going to be fighting a losing battle. More serious stuff to come I'm sure, but I can't wait for it!

Author's Response:

It wouldn't be fun if they didnt' have to suffer a little!  ;)

Aro and Tanya to you directly. 

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 07:37 PM · On: Beginnings

Oooooh I can't wait to find out Deme's issues.

Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Don't worry.  It's love at first hate.


Sending Aro/Tanya to you!

Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 04:19 PM · On: Beginnings

The highlight of my week is finding you have updated this story - I love it and look forward!!  Can't wait for a happy ever after!!  (although I don't want the story to end yet!)


Author's Response:

:)  SOOO glad you liked.   Don't worry.  It isn't over.  ;)

Aro/Tanya to you...

Reviewer: browneyes84 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 03:29 PM · On: Beginnings

I can't wait for the next chapter! I love this story!

Author's Response:

Working hard on it.   Promise.  For now, I'm sending you Aro/Tanya directly.  Thank you so much for your review.  I love hearing from people how they feel!



Reviewer: linda (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 01:32 PM · On: Beginnings

loveing it!  keep it coming. Maybe soon, Edward can as well.  Linda

Author's Response: More coming...more coming... I have to get busy writing, but wanted to get Aro/Tanya out

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 08:52 AM · On: Beginnings

So Deme & the Doc??? Yeah for Bella...I love that she get's all jealous!! Can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

:)  Yeah.  Love at first hate...or something like that.

I'm writing, writing, writing...  :)

For now, here's Aro/Tanya

Reviewer: edward loves country (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 06:53 AM · On: Beginnings

Love it keep up the good work

Author's Response:

I promise to do so.  I know where I'm going.  I just need the time to get it done!  HA!

Sending Aro/Tanya to you directly.


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