Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For Sins of my Past
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 03:18 AM · On: Whiplash

I am glad that Edward is finally coming home and I feel bad about Tanya, but the old saying....."what goes around comes around.....but putting your baby at risk  that is just so not right.  I hope that Edward will build his big house for his new family.  I LOVE THIS FIC.  Still reading the sequel to Harvest Moon.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 01:57 AM · On: Whiplash

Somehow, Tanya's death seems fitting, although sad.

They say, Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem, but has anyone actually gotten the whole story from that persons point of view?

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 11:08 PM · On: Whiplash

Bella's lunch with Rob was cute.  Loved Rob.  He was so funny.  Had great ideas to make Edward jealous.  Didn't need them, just the fact that Bella went to meet him was enough.  Edward was already jealous and worried that Bella would be leaving him for her old flame.  Rob knew that Bella held the torch for Edward that's why she would never open her heart completely for him.  Rob was ready to make a permanent commitment.  Bella had tender memories and she'll miss Rob, but her heart is solely owned by Edward.  Carlie talking with Jake about the "Daddy" issue.  I was proud of Jake for understanding her dilemma of having the two "Dads".  Jake would always be daddy, but she wanted Edward to get the title of dad also.  He is her biological father and he does love her.  Carlie cares for him also.  She is already telling Edward he needs to build the house on Cullen Acres big enough that she has her suite and her new sister Samantha has hers also.  She doesn't really care about his room just the girls' rooms and shared living room.  Esme is going to have her hands full with Carlie's demands on what she's expecting in the new house.  Carlie's already planning on moving in with Edward.  She's pushing for sooner rather than later.  I guess Edward isn't going to be able to take it as slow as he wants to since both girls in his life are planning on pushing him to reach their goal to be together.  Edward's feelings of insecurity when Bella left to see Rob, to surprise of Carlie's declaration of what to call Edward, to her decision of a new house big enough to have her new sister move in, to the news that Carlisle comes in to announce.  News that Tanya had an overdose. Which of course, we all know wasn't her choice.  She messed with Bella and Aro didn't stand for it.  He caused the overdose.  Granted it will be better for Garrett and the baby in the long run because she was an unfit mother.  Bringing that child into the world as an addict.  Talk about the ultimate in being selfish.  If Edward's tests come back well the following day he'll be leaving the hospital and both Edward and Bella will be separated.  They won't have their unlimited time together.  In some ways it will be good because Bella needs to start taking care of herself and resting more after her surgery.  She's overdoing it, not following procedures of post op, not resting, etc....  Her headaches and eye sensitivity are only some of the symptoms starting to come through at this time.  Looking forward to Edward's reaction when Bella tells him Rob wants them both to travel to England to visit him there and send him a wedding invitation.

Reviewer: Bloodrope (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 06:41 PM · On: Whiplash

Is it the original hardback copy of the Swan Song that she created or is it just one that she could've bought at a bookstore? I lol'd. Edward met his match with Carlie! x) It was a shame to see Tanya die from an overdose. Will we get a Outtake of her last moments, perhaps? Would love to see it if you do decide to do that. Great chapter.

Reviewer: G licious (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 10:36 AM · On: Whiplash

Lovin it as usual !!!

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 10:29 AM · On: Whiplash

Rob sounds like a nice guy.  Something sounds fishy about Tanya's death, and Carlie was so sweet asking if she could call Edward Dad1  Great chap!

Reviewer: Bloodrope (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 10:28 AM · On: Hole in the Heart

Woah... I thought that Bella only did Children's books but knowing that she branched out was pretty nice to know, especially that it was a book that Edward felt connected to. It was a great chapter and I can't wait to continue reading this. You still sending Edward's POV? x)

Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 10:06 AM · On: Whiplash

Aaahh! He is finally going to find out that she wrote the book. I loved Carlie giving orders on the rooms for her and Sam 2. Just perfect and what any teenager would want. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 08:59 AM · On: Whiplash

Sorry I didn't review the last one, I read it on my Nook, and for some reason, I can submit a rating number; but, it won't allow me to type anything... :{

Anyway, as usual, I am loving this story!  I had totally forgotten about "The Swan Song".....oooohh....the next chapter is going to be great!  I kust know it :):)

Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent! 

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 08:50 AM · On: Whiplash

I loved the chapter. I loved all the different POV's.  I feel bad for Tanya such a wasted life, but she did it to herself.  Your Jake is such a wonderful guy!  I really like Robert.  I can't wait for Esme's POV.

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 04:56 AM · On: Whiplash

This chapter is proof that if people just communicate up front, stuff gets done. Bam.

Interesting news about Tanya. Curious to see if that will play out further.

 

Reviewer: Saturn (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2012 12:25 AM · On: Whiplash

Loved it:-)

Reviewer: gabella2423 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 07:57 PM · On: Whiplash

I hope they come together and they really should have another baby in the future since Edward missed so much of Carlie's life

 

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 07:39 PM · On: Whiplash

Very nice, can't wait to reacquaint with the swan song.p

Reviewer: twilightagain (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 06:24 PM · On: Whiplash

oooo I want Esme's POV too! I can't wait to read Edward's reaction to The Swan Song and reading Bella and Robert's visit was strangely irratating lol I think it's because I don't like the idea of him having such a close relationship with Bella *rolls eyes* Bella and Edward are meant to be in my mind

Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 06:10 PM · On: Whiplash

what can I say - every chapter is tremendously entertaining! just like a good book - hard to put down! 

Reviewer: Christie Marie (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 04:11 PM · On: Whiplash

Such a great story!  I love how Edward and Bella are growing into each others personality and grow as a person. 

Reviewer: Brumbear (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 02:49 PM · On: Whiplash

I love Carlie's determination and loyalty!

Edward still seems very caught up in his past and while he has hope for the future, he seems unable to see it happening. He projects his own beliefs unto Bella. He wouldn't be able to forgive anyone who treated him as he has Bella, so why would she? I'd say he needs time away from Bella and a lot more therapy.

Bella seems to have her feelings straight and is working towards her goal.

Can't wait to see what will happen when they are more separate with Edward going home.

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 12:51 PM · On: Whiplash

Wow! I cried with almost every chapter and with this one as well. I don't know if I'm crying with sadness or elation for the characters. I can relate to so much of this story, it's painful but I can't stop reading it. How you weave each character's lives, thoughts and feelings together, it's almost like real life. Keep it up. Thank you. DJ

Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 12:41 PM · On: Whiplash

Wow... lots happening in this chapter...liked Robert, Carlie is very funny, Tanya was sad(no one deserves to die that way) but at least the child is ok and Edward is recovering, yea.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Whiplash

Lots of stuff happening.  Is Bella going to tell him the truth about Swan Song?

Reviewer: Luna89m (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 10:15 AM · On: Whiplash

Esme pov can answer some of are question. I am happy that Carlie talk to Jake and Edward. Edward and Carlie talk about what he said to Bella. You know Edward will not let it go in his mind about Bella not finishing school, this will be something that onces the family know it will eat the, maybe during Esme pov we can see how she feel about this. Gives more B&E time.....:)

Reviewer: drasticdee (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 10:08 AM · On: Whiplash

great as always!!!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 10:04 AM · On: Whiplash

even I feel good after her talk with jake he will alwys hold the daddy card for her he holds all her child hood secrets in his heart ...but there are many new memories  to be be had with dad growing up and moving on into a new blended family life with mom and dad   ..its all good and sam 2 ...almost make you want to be adopted by them  

Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 09:36 AM · On: Seduced by Chocolate

HOT!! I can't wait till they can finally consummate their relationship!! Hopefully the wait won't be too long, cause I'm sweating for them. I know Edward has to heal, but there are things that can be done until then...just saying!

Submit a Review




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.