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Reviews For Sins of my Past
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2012 01:14 PM · On: Extra

wow...didn't see that one ....I love all these little secret chapter

Reviewer: cravingMORE (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2012 12:44 AM · On: Line in the Sand

Love Love Love Bella setting him straight!  I'm not looking forward to the separation but I can see how it can only make the reunion that much sweeter.  Wonderful story.  I love the big extended family because you're right family is not just about blood it's about bonds.  Looking forward to your update. :)

Reviewer: cravingMORE (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2012 08:50 PM · On: Peace

(((cry))) (((sob))) no!!!!!!!  :(

Reviewer: LunasInSilver (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2012 03:38 PM · On: Line in the Sand

Have to say its about time she swatted him back.  Surely 15 years of wallowing is enough.  Actions speak far louder than words, and its time he quit saying and started doing.

Reviewer: cravingMORE (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2012 09:08 PM · On: Monster

I can bearly stop reading to review but I have to let u know..... I love it!!! :) still lots to read and I can't wait!

Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 03:48 AM · On: Receiving

hello! would love the outtake, i have been reading and following on my phone and it wont let me leave reviews! would love the extras though! thanks

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 11:07 PM · On: Line in the Sand

Good job Bella.  Stopping the man from over thinking everything and never feeling worth of a second chance.  Not only does he have you with him currently, but the gift you gave him expre ssing your feelings towards him.  He's wearing at your request and placed on by you just lke it was originally.  One of his possessions of your relationship he got rid of, but regretted for all these years.  Bella you won't have any problems with Carlie wanting to be a family.  She  has already made up her mind a long time ago.  She's been waiting for her parents to just get it done.  Edward definitely went to bed a very happy and contented man.  Reaching out for her even in his sleep to hold her close to him.  If Bella hadn't said no, he would provided her with the same pleasurable contentment.  She at least has the happiness and security of sleeping in his arms.

Reviewer: Luna89m (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 07:44 PM · On: Line in the Sand

Yes Edward got some. They had a nice talk.

Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 01:13 PM · On: Line in the Sand

ahhh Bella, I love your spine m'dear its straight and strong!

Reviewer: Erilu77 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 11:33 AM · On: Roses and Freesia

I see so many little big things that give away the special spot in your heart for "U&U" and "U&UD"(from what i've gotten to read). And I dread the drama ahead in the huge amount of chapters i have left to read. Please tell me if there are dramatic similarities to the two fics i mentioned? 

I'm a huge fan of your O.C. Henry and the two stories where he and his Anna are key players as well as Downward Spiral. U&U,and more so U&UD, are a little too spicy for my tastes (I'm a closet E/B gal and always root for a HEA for those two)

PS. Have you conssidered softening Edward's granddaughter's midle name over in FMR?

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 09:47 AM · On: Line in the Sand

Woo hoo Bella, <--- you go girl !!!   I loved it when she told him to "Lift up", those two little words gave me such a great visual...I was "smiling" reading that !!  I don't know if I figured she'd crack and do something like this, but I am SO glad she did, this was written perfectly...  calling him on his !  I can't wait for them to be as "one" again and that is a compliment to your writing.  I know it will be something special.  p.s. I can't imagine how they will handle being separated, I just can't see them being away from each other for any length of time after spending their nights together in each others embrace.  I'm not liking that she is going home, but I guess I get why she has to.  Thanks for the update, Sunday nights have never been so sweet !!!  Have a great week.

Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 04:29 AM · On: Line in the Sand

Great to see Bella putting her foot down. Can't wait for the relationship to progress. Thanks for the update

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 03:54 AM · On: Line in the Sand

its about time she just let him have true moving forward is a Necessity, not a desire but a requirement for all of them...does that mesn in order to do so that all past transgressions must be completely resolved and dealt with? No, not go Bella for telling him the truth.....great chapter

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 02:35 AM · On: Line in the Sand

Lovely as always.

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 11:34 PM · On: Line in the Sand

Woohoo! Bella put Edward in his place! 

Nothing wrong w building a little sexual tension

Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2012 10:35 PM · On: Line in the Sand

Great chapter! I'm glad Bella was able to finally get some of her emotions out and set Edward straight. Hopefully they will finally be able to move past some of their issues and Edward will learn to finally let some things in the past just stay in the past. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Luna89m (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 07:57 PM · On: Green Eyes

Readed Sam 2 outtake it was hurtful. What she had to grow up with, but she in the right home now. If she dose not go to Edward, she still has everyone, I mean they all live in the same place with a gate around.

Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 05:31 PM · On: Receiving

Awe, Emmett must have found it !

Reviewer: frosticles (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 04:22 PM · On: Receiving

Your story is beautiful thank you for sharing it, could I possibly have the outtake? Thank you

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 03:45 AM · On: Receiving

Great double date for Edward/Bella and Jake/Leah.  Jake giving Edward a second chance, but still letting him know I'm watching ya -- fly straight, or else.  Thoroughly enjoyed the football game, especially the excitement of Bella being able to actually see it.  Nice of Jake to leave Bella/Edward alone during half time for them to get some rest.  Since both of them are recovering from surgery.  Really liked the bantering back and forth amongst all of the characters.  Embarrassment of Jake with the college girls hitting on him.  Bella's cougar comment and then her indecision of which guy kissed better Edward or drunken college guy.  Come on we all know it's Edward.  I'm with drunken sorority girl, if Bella's not sure about Edward I'll take him too. Emmett and his wicked sense of humor.  My goodnes, Em, your brother just came back from the dead.  Look at the tortur you're putting on him.  Red satin sheets with black ropes tied from each of the four posters of his bed.  Skimpy sleeping attire for Bella in one room, black boots in another, sex toys in the bathroom including flavored oils, and the final kicker Edward's present to Bella, her bracelet.  The bracelet they discussed was his letting go element as they are going through Bella's book.  Edward has it back just in time to completely give Bdella all of his heart.  I'd still kill Emmett for the embarrassment.  Poor Edward wants to do it right and everyone including Bella are pushing him to just go for it now.  It feels right, it's comfortable, just do it.  At least that's the vibe I'm picking up from Biella.  She's not holding back, she's ready to move forward and let the cards and fallout lay.  Carlie's ready for her parents to be together.  I think when Edward is feeling his full strength again, he should be allowed one punch to Emmett with no repercussions about the redecorating of his bedroom, Bella's bedroom, the bathroom, and the outdoor patio.

Reviewer: gabella2423 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 12:34 AM · On: Receiving

Did not expect that at all. Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 08:11 PM · On: Receiving

I was wondering when Emmett was going to give E the bracelet.

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 04:17 PM · On: Receiving

I absolutely love this story!  I don't want it to come to an end.  This is a really well-thought out, storyline!  You are an extremely talented writer. 

Reviewer: ehayter (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 06:30 AM · On: Receiving

Thank you for such a great story, I alsways look forward to Sundays now for my weekly fix.  I love how you make the story so real, like the title of one of your chapters this story gives me whiplash as I go from hopeful for Edward, Bella and Carlie to crying my eyes out when you describe the pain of both Edward and Bella time apart and the long road they have to go down to be happy again.

Keep up the good work.  I re read this story so often as possible as I can not put it down.

Thank you

Author's Response:

:)  I am so glad you are enjoying the story!   Working on Emmett and Edward right now!

Sending Samantha to you directly!  ;)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 12:51 AM · On: Receiving

Your chapters are always so realistic and so creative, that I can find myself looking at things like I am actually in the room, or the booth, as it How poor Edward is in pain and yet he wants to do something with Bella and have a little fun. So sweet!!! Jake to the rescue with the spirit to love it!!!! I think Jake and Leah are starting to see what we all feel through your story...Edward isn't such a bad guy!! I think I felt tears in my eyes too when Bella was using the binoculars and how patient Edward was being with her...and when Jake was mouthing "thank you" I knew ....the ice was broken completely between Jake and Edward. He knows that Bella is loved....squeeee. Love happy thoughts. Now....Edward and Bella napping together...swooooon. Can't get that picture out of my perfect. Edward telling Leah and Jake the truth of his past, and then telling Leah his intentions toward Carlie and Bella....made me smile. Got to love an honest, loving man. When the idiot drunks were hitting on our guys and You must have been to a few college games, since this is entirely normal. Got to love it!!! The BRACELET!!! YAY!! EDWARD has it, and it is apparently sending him into a tailspin. Got to say...Emmett's gifts rock, especially to Bella, but the Bracelet...Well done! Can't wait to see what Bella says to this. Perfect!! Can't wait for more!! xoxoxo

Author's Response:

I've been to just a few college games!  HA!  I was almost one of those in the ER with a concussion - but that is all I am going to say about that.  One day my kids may read this, and I have an image to keep up!  SNICKER!

Emmett and Edward's conversation about the bracelet next...working on it now.

Sending Samantha to you directly!

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