Love it, Love it!!  More, more, more....Please!??

Outstanding..... so beautifully written !!  It's so real, I can't begin to tell you all the emotions I felt as I was reading it.  I read it slow and carefully so as not to miss a word or a meaning.  My heart broke for them when she left (I knew it would) and I'm So glad they spoke to each other... I half expected him to have his driver take him over and you had me thinking maybe he'd climb in her window as in her memory.   Can't wait for their lunch date !  Have a great week and thank you as always for the terrific story !!

Ohhhh man..... 56 frickin chapters and still no Eddie and Bella lovin'! If I didn't love this story so much, I'd be seriously pissed. But, since I do a mental fist pump in the air every time you update, I forgive you for the lack of sexy times.

Your writing is, as always, brilliant - and I loved that you gave Bella more of a voice in this chapter, a look back into their past, and less Velathri time.

Already impatient for next chapter!

Lots of kind regards, Catherine xx

Well thanks for breaking my heart...:(  How people can be so cruel to children and say such hateful things.....grrrrrrr!

I'm so glad she's safe now!

I hate the fact that she will prob have that voice in her head the rest of her life, no matter how many positive things come her way.

Poor little dear! I'm so glad she's surrounded by these huge loving families. I loofa forward to what the future will hold for Samantha.

Poor thing! I can't imagine anyone treating a child so cruelly & being able to live w/ themselves

great, all the romantics are sitting on needles just waiting for Bella to throw Edward a crumb, Its hard for anyone who's been in love and then be hurt by that special one, to feel they can be off their  guard for that is  the kind of pain like an unhealed sore, so easily re-0pened.

Loved Demetri's reaction to Elizabeth's arrival. Can't wait for the rest of the picnic.

I love this story in no way does it suck no worries there keep updating !!

No.  Your story is fucking awesome.  I think that it is great that the entire family and friends get together.  I love when we have everyone over.  You are a wonderful writer and I really love the Full Moon Rising.  What I truly cannot wait for is when Edward and Bella will finally do the deed.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sher

I sometimes so wish that we could comment on another reviewers comments, but so be it, I'll do it this way.  I think Catherine, a little bit below said a mouth full.  I too understand (and have already reviewed on Cohesion) why the writing of the families, but she hit it on the head for me too, I really did miss and do miss the interaction between Edward / Bella / Carlie, I mean I know they ate together and all but we are coming to the end of their time together and they have spent precious little time with each other so far today and his ladies will be leaving him this evening (making the frown sign here and tearing up) I'm hoping that the second part of the chapter centers on them, that they all do get to spend some quality time "together" and alone before you split them up.... and I know you are sick of hearing me say this but I am so hoping that their time separated is minimal hahaha.... sorry I had to say it again.  This  story rocks and I can barely wait the week between updates, I find myself rereading chapters in desparation !!!  Have a great week !!!  xoxo