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Reviews For Sins of my Past
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2012 01:11 AM · On: Bless Your Heart

Love that Alice and Jasper have such a cute relationship. It is also so sweet to hear from Alice herself that she is so excited that Bella and her are going to be able to be friends. Jasper is so cute. Glad we got to see a bit of him here. So cute!!! xoxoxo

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 11:43 PM · On: Bless Your Heart

I loved hearin from Alice and getting a peek into her and Jasper's love, thank you,  It made me smile! :)


Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 11:41 PM · On: Bless Your Heart

Love it!

Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 11:02 PM · On: Bless Your Heart

Awww, I wanna paint me a Jazzy too......

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 10:14 PM · On: Bless Your Heart

So wonderful to have Alice's final demon banished. All her fears removed and the joy of having Bella attempt to be her true friend. She sure loves hers man. Hopefully the paints are washable. It would be comically to have a warpainted Jasper face at dinner.

Reviewer: PyranicPhoenix (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 09:35 PM · On: Bless Your Heart

Lol, and even then we may not tell you! We may just give you a pitying look and pat your hand and say it again!


I love the story and can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 02:43 AM · On: Forgiveness

Adored Edward taking care of his girls in the morning, even though Bella is not a morning person. Coffee on the nightstand with floral. Very sweet and romantic. Bella is already fitting into the Cullens' lives including ideas for their charities.

Going over to Alice's and the painting. Beautiful. Tear jerker. Very happy Bella was able to forgive Alice as well and move forward. Bella has more facts now regarding both Alice and Edward's state of mind based on prior traumatic events in their lives that affected their decisions. Remember they were only teenagers. Kids. Mistakes, misunderstandings, confusion, fear of being hurt and used again. Many factors led to what happened. Regret,sorrow, loss have all been realized and learned as everyone has grown and matured. 


Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2012 12:23 AM · On: Forgiveness

When I got the alert that a new chapter was up to my favorite fic.....I did a little happy dance in the kitchen.  Wonderful as always.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 09:37 AM · On: Forgiveness

Loved this chapter about forgiveness.  You're tying things up nicely. :-)

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 03:44 AM · On: Forgiveness

Love it.

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2012 02:25 AM · On: Forgiveness

So glad you are staying true to yourself and this story.

Reviewer: cjhaaf (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 10:22 PM · On: Forgiveness

i was without my computer for awhile so i was doing catch up reading of your story. when i read in your AN that someone would tell you to wrap up what to me has been an attenion holding, wonderful story i have to wonder how people can be so...idiotic.  you share your talent with so many and i truley hope you keep your original vision of where this story would take you, and not let short sighted non imaginative and unfounded remarks end something you are obviousley very good at. can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 03:01 PM · On: Forgiveness

I loved this chapter.  I find Bella's capacity to forgive so admirable.  The whole situation was so unfortunate.  I'm like Bella it makes more sense knowing that Edward didn't believe Tanya but that it was Alice that convinced him.

I'm happy for them!  Dixie

Reviewer: Baandfam69 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 10:16 AM · On: Forgiveness

writing like crazy is the best news ever. i hope that includes some super citrusy lemons and further healng both physically and emotionally. im hoping the edward truly appreciates those blue garters. lol  sorry for the ee cummings type response. when  i review via phone punctuation and capitalization become a problem.

Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 05:47 AM · On: Forgiveness

I really liked this :) And I can't say that I'm not happy that this story is going to last a little bit longer. I'm glad that there was enough love for this story to get you to continue the track you were originally planning. I can't wait to see what you have planned next!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 05:13 AM · On: Forgiveness

to carry that heavy of a burden all that time know in that one act she was the one to distroy all thoes lives ...but it is al  in the past now and all  has been forgiven ....i wonder what E will think  of the painting for more of that

HEA you promised

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 02:58 AM · On: Forgiveness

Have I told you lately I am in love with your Edward, hee hee, he leaves flowers and coffee by the bed side in the morning, and makes omelets...oh my..., loved their little conversation about "garters" and the promise of later.  Cool that he introduced her as his "girlfriend", loved the explanation about what he did for her b'day all these years.  As I began reading about the portrait of Bella all I kept thinking was how this would be a great movie, I wish there were some way to see the portrait myself, and I do think this story would make one heck of a movie.  I'm thrilled to hear that you are going back to your original plan to finish out this story.  I'm waiting for them to start construction of their house at his family compound, great chapter, I'm glad she and Alice are "finding their way".  Have a wonderful week..

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 02:11 AM · On: Forgiveness

Why would anyone criticise this?  Why?  You have written with passion and kindness. This is hard for me to read at points it must be harder for you to write.  Did you experience this? Was it a friend?  Well what ever it was and whoever,  you gave a great story.  Forgiveness is not really earned it is a gift.  If you let go of the hurt then you have to forgive. Sometimes you don't let that person back into your inner life but when you forgive it helps you.


Good job.

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2012 01:10 AM · On: Forgiveness

Happy and sad tearrs mixed to a perfection. I love it.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 11:18 PM · On: Forgiveness

Glad Alice & Bella spoke

Reviewer: dh_director (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2012 01:44 PM · On: Five Reasons

Your story is lovely and you should finish it the way you want.

Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2012 05:38 AM · On: Five Reasons

Thanks for all your hard work. Love how you have written this story 

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2012 05:17 PM · On: Five Reasons

I stand with the few that never want this to end but I am hoping you will alow her visions to become a reality that they have the gift of more children together this time and he can be a part of all of it ...I have enjoyed every angsty chapter this was wonderful

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 10:24 PM · On: Five Reasons

Very nice. It kinda does feel like you're winding it down, but I hope not toooo quickly.


Reviewer: logan671 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 12:38 PM · On: Five Reasons

Wonderful chapter, Haha, Carlie is too much. Thank you.

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