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Reviewer: stressmaster (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2012 08:36 AM · On: Gifts
wonderful updates, i truly love this story!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2012 08:21 AM · On: Gifts
OMG Robert is the one who noticed?!?! All those Doctors running around that is so funny. I'm thrilled for them, Carlie will be so excited! Everyone will be thrilled.
Ya know everyone is getting a HEA, I hope you take Rose and Alice up on their suggestion and get Robert his HEA also!
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2012 07:46 AM · On: With this Ring
Best chapter yet!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2012 05:43 AM · On: With this Ring
Oh my God. I cried through the entire thing. It was just so beautiful and just right. I am so glad that they did the wedding this way as Carlie did deserve to be part of it because for 13 years she didn't have her dad and now she does. I LOVED IT AND CRIED AND CRIED. THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL BEAUTIFUL READING. Sher
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2012 07:50 PM · On: With this Ring
Ah, does the foreshadowing call for a 6 - 8 lb suprise in the future for these newlyweds?
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2012 07:40 PM · On: With this Ring
Awwww I'm so glad we got it all from his POV...... he's a gem!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2012 07:40 PM · On: With this Ring
You had me tearing up through the entire chapter! I loved the conversation with Robert. I loved Edward realizing what a good man Jake really is, I think the two will be true friends.
Wow this story is so good, i love it, Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2012 05:14 PM · On: With this Ring
Sweet
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2012 11:59 AM · On: Under the Old Oak Tree
Great wedding
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2012 09:10 AM · On: Under the Old Oak Tree
Damn tears in my eyes. Everything was great. Really brought a lot of memories in together, weaving a wonderful chapter! Even including Robert! (Great choice of name actually!). Love the idea of the Christmas wedding, can truly visualize it all. The idea of Edward being so old fashioned and asking permission of so many people, truly touching! the necklace had me in tears! Loved how Jake gave Bella away, and how they had the touching moment when he gave her away and she remembers al the moments when Jake was there!! Her touching his face...damn woman" I loved it all. YAY!!!! They are married!!!! Me thinks she's pregnant ???? Crossing fingers!! YAY! Xoxoxo
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2012 08:01 AM · On: Under the Old Oak Tree
Touchingly beautiful.... *sigh*
Dixie
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2012 04:05 AM · On: Under the Old Oak Tree
Eloquent....the return of his necklace gift to her on their wedding day and how you wrote his reaction was beautiful, I felt it when he touched her face and I saw him standing their with tears rolling down his face. I got the chills during your description of all the memories of Jake just before he gave her hand to Edward, and a lump in my own throat when she called Jake back at her brief moment of panic and finally I felt the rejoicing when she said she wouldn't ever forget how Edward said "forever".
I imagined the velvet gowns were stunning, and I didn't miss that little seed you planted about Alice having to take "her waist out a bit"..... could it be ?
Thank you for your talent !
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 09:51 PM · On: Under the Old Oak Tree
Beautiful!
Reviewer: WolfREADERgypsy (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 09:04 PM · On: Under the Old Oak Tree
Absolutely loved this chapter! So well written! I'm sad to see it finish, but all great things come to an end! Fab job!
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 08:30 PM · On: Under the Old Oak Tree
Perfect !
Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 07:13 PM · On: Under the Old Oak Tree
awww I am crying like I am at a real wedding lol
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 10:28 AM · On: Sunrise and Twin Furies
What a proposal, would we not all love to have had one like that.
Reviewer: britojhb (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2012 07:21 AM · On: Sunrise and Twin Furies
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! I can't type anymore, I can't see through my tears.....
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 10:25 PM · On: Sunrise and Twin Furies
The poem you wrote was breathtaking! What a beautifully, original proposal. I could feel the proposal coming but you surpassed my expectations. Well done! Mad points for having him asking for Carlie's hand as well. So beautiful!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 02:44 PM · On: Sunrise and Twin Furies
I loved it! :)
Dixie
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 02:24 PM · On: Phantoms and Vampires
Happy birthday a few days late! I loved the chapter!
Dixie
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 11:28 AM · On: Sunrise and Twin Furies
Yea!
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 03:17 AM · On: Sunrise and Twin Furies
Oh my god, so beautiful..... brought me to tears, the minute I read he knelt, unique indeed two rings for his two girls.....you have a gift and I'm so thrilled you are willing to share your talent with us. You made my morning !!
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 08:07 PM · On: Sunrise and Twin Furies
YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2012 07:54 PM · On: Sunrise and Twin Furies
Awww that was super cute! I absolutely loved the way Edward proposed. I also loved that he included Carlie in it. I wonder if she was aware that he was going to propse to Bella. Too cute, I can tell that things are getting tied up now, it's sad, but I can't wait to see what you have happen next.
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