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Reviews For Sins of my Past
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2012 02:45 AM · On: Fences

I just caught up on the past few chapters.  They were very good.  I am glad Edward went back home.  Carlisle is certainly putting himself out there.  That poor child of Tanya's, although I don't like a child to lose its mother, i hope Garrett decides to raise the child on his own and kick Tanya to the curb.

Author's Response: would be appropriate wouldn't it!  

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Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 08:13 PM · On: Roses and Freesia

it is beautiful. Beyond words. I LOVE it.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 05:42 PM · On: Fences

Bella did feel Edward in New York.  She was physically drawn to him, just as Edward was drawn to her.  Deep down inside her, Bella still cares for Edward.  She is still afraid to trust him.  Even though she can hear the sincerity in his voice, actions speak louder than words.  So far his past actions have left a large amount of pain in their wake. To trust him again and have that happen again would totally destroy her.  Bella actually finally getting excited about agreeing to having the surgery to possibly regaining her sight.  Just about to go over all the test results days before the surgery and the world renowned surgeon's mother's was ill.  Postponed the surgery. Felix suggested another doctor local only drawback worked under Cullen Enterprises. She agreed to see Carlisle.  Carlisle offered the services of his hospital and his surgeon. Funny about Bella being the excuse to getting out of his wife's book club meeting.  She saved him a fate worst than death talking about a teenage vampire love story with a bunch of women.  Amazed that Carlisle gave Bella the ammunition to ruin his career with the fact he broke HIPPA regulations and looked into Bella's blindness and researched surgery possibilities to operate to cure or improve her eyesight.  1st step to mending bridges between Bella and Carlisle.  It's going to be really hard for Carlisle not to tell Edward that Bella will be operated on in their hospital.  If Edward finds out it will be by other means.  I know he would want to be out in the waiting room with the rest of the family awaiting the completion of surgery and recovery to see the success/failure of such.

Author's Response:

Ha!  Poor he won't have the privelege.  I'll be posting the surgery next!  Just as soon as I get the review replies done.  You'll have to let me know what you think.

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Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 04:37 PM · On: Fences

Do the Cullens actually know Alice is to blame for Bella being blind? I love this story I can't wait to see Bella's interaction with Emmett's family!

Author's Response:

Alice wan't to blame.  Although she did push Bella down, it wasn't that time that caused the blind. 

We'll definitely get to Emmett and Bella, but I'll be doing Edward first...

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Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 01:35 PM · On: Fences

Ok, then!  I liked it.  I'm ready for some reconciliation, though...some one-on-one with Bella and Edward.  I know she won't just take him back without giving him heck first - but I really want to read some type of interaction between them.  Love this story!

Author's Response:

Promise it is coming!  Promise!

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Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 12:54 PM · On: Fences

Good as alwyas

Author's Response:

Thank you!   I hope you like what is coming next. 

I'll post just as soon as I get through the reviews.

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 12:40 PM · On: Truth

Amazing! It is so touching and the fact that everyone else can see the look in Edwards eyes an she cannot... heartbreaking.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 10:44 AM · On: Fences

I've been anxiously awaiting for her to have her eyes repaired.  Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

Surgery is up next for you!  As soon as I get through the review replies, I'm posting.  :)

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Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 09:53 AM · On: Karma

Oooh love that Aro is a lawyer. It is just the profession for him.

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 08:56 AM · On: Electricity

Damn I am enthralled!

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 08:24 AM · On: Cold Hard Facts

This is incredible, my friend. I love it. You are wonderful.

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2012 08:13 AM · On: Fences

I can't wait for the Surgery!! Please let them talk a little soon.......


Author's Response:

I promise, promise, promise that I'll get them there.  Two more chapters...

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Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 10:04 PM · On: Carlie

OMG I love it. The pain of Carlie as she realizes exactly what  her actions have wrought. Beautiful.

Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 09:26 PM · On: Fences

Great Chapter!  I love how you are moving the story.  Okay I hate Dr. Hot Bi!@# (Cullen) having an "in" into Bella's life, But reeally good story telling.


Author's Response:

Gotta give him a little inroad...  Snicker

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Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 08:27 PM · On: Green Eyes

Oh honey... It is beautiful!


i am officially hooked. Not that that should suprise you.

Reviewer: bacall83 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 08:13 PM · On: Fences

Excellent chapter!

Author's Response:

So glad you liked   :)  Hope to get next chapter up tonight!

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Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 07:35 PM · On: Fences

Weeellll....she's getting the surgery, so happy there! Can't wait for that! I also kinda appreciate the twist with having to go to Carlisle to use his doctor. I couldn't imagine not being able to actually see my children and their smiles that go along with their giggles. I am so excited for her to see her daughter.

Author's Response:

:)  You'll see in the next chapter...

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Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 06:13 PM · On: Fences

Nice. I was not expecting that!

Author's Response:

:)  Hope you enjoy the next chapter! 

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Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 05:27 PM · On: Fences

your story  contains a wonderful mix of emotions and though i want to get right to the heart of the matter only reading B/E there are so many other factors that need to be added to make the story well rounded just hoping for a HEA

Author's Response:

I promise it is moving quickly to it now.  ;)

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Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 01:44 PM · On: Fences

well I kmew she had to have felt him there...  that indeed brings me satisfaction knowing this tid bit of information.  as for the new Dr status I am warmed to know that she opening up happy....

Author's Response:

:)  You'll like the next chapter then!

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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 12:18 PM · On: Fences

I think this is a good start for Bella and Carisle.  I like that he knows he can't undo what happened or that even I'm sorry is enough.  But that he wants to move forward and try to build trust again.  Knowing about her surgery but keeping the detales private from his family is a good place to start in building that trust!

I can't wait to hear whar Demetri has to say!

Take care, Dixie

Author's Response:


I'll send Demetri directly to you...and yes, this is an important step for our Doctor friend!

Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 11:40 AM · On: Fences

wow, cant wait for the next chapter. abk

Author's Response:

:)  Surgery up next for you!

Demetri sent directly!

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 11:13 AM · On: Fences

I am so glad you wrote this chapter with Bella and Carlisle getting some what of a new start. I think life soetimes is made up of a lot of baby steps. I can't wait to see how Carlisle keeps Edward in the dark. Maybe his daughter will give it up. Great story thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Lilly!  You are almost dead on!  I'll be posting tonight.

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Reviewer: darkstarz (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 10:30 AM · On: Fences

This chapter is rather interesting.  For me, it's almost a prelude to hopefully the actually beginning of this journey.

Author's Response:

Yes,  we are hitting the high spots now...gonna get interesting.

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Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2012 10:25 AM · On: Fences

Carlisle is a smart man; better to "fess up" than have her discover what he did down the road. That & showing rather than telling her that he can be trusted again. 

Author's Response:

He'll work hard to gain her trust again!

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