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Reviews For Unbreakable
Reviewer: syaoran7 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great writing! Love it!

Reviewer: syaoran7 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2013 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great writing! Love it!

Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was an excellent take on their first hunting trip together. And concidering you wrote it as if Breaking Dawn Never happened it was a smart way to progress the story. I noticed that you wrote this shortly after Breaking Dawn was published. id you not like BD and want to write your own take or were you just having some fun with the Cullens? Either way I enjoyed it very much.  I loved how he was forceful, but loving with her too. Great scene. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

what a fun story .... love the playful feel even during a hunt

Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Good.. Enjoyed

Reviewer: Sumsums (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

very cool :)

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

heeheehee... ahahaha. lols squirms in delight! rofl-worthy! :D

Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

woot! hot vampire sex in the woods! one can never have enough of that! lol. XD!!!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked Bella's apology to Edward for all she put him through as a human.  I have always wanted to see that in a fanfic, and I almost resorted to writing one myself for it!  I still might do that, but I am so glad that someone else felt it important to include in their story.  :)

Reviewer: Porcelain Mortal (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

Favorite line: "It was entirely possible that if I concentrated, I could identify every single nerve ending that was frantically firing as it came into contact with his skin, and every muscle that trembled at his caress. It thrilled me to know that Edward must have felt the same every time we touched." That's the best way I've heard it described in any fic, hands down.

Amazingly, entirely hot. Very, very nice. ;o)

Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this version of Edward! So loving and sarcastic all at the same time. Great job!

Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

It was so well written with great characterization. I can't wait to read your next story!

Reviewer: IntoTheTwilight (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it! I really hope you'll consider writing another hunting session :)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked it.  Well done!

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