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Reviewer: syaoran7 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2013 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Enjoy the detailed writing. Very well thought out, keep it up!!

Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

as much as I understand his reasons I am still angry with Edward.  He deserves to suffer just a little bit.

Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

as much as I understand his reasons I am still angry with Edward.  He deserves to suffer just a little bit.

Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 1

dear author,


i like it very much! Alice's internal  struggle semmed very possible to me ! I like when the scnenes are worte which I missed in the book!

Yours, Cathy

Reviewer: Maaaru (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

This story was sooooooooo good!! I've always wondered what was happening when Alice got the vision of Bella jumping and this fanfic provided a very good possibility.

Great job!

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

You HAVE to write the next part!  This was wonderful, I always wondered how that whole thing went down.  I like the conflict between Alice and Jasper, and Jasper's ability to think in terms of collateral damage.  It seems very true to his character.

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2008 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Gosh, that's amazing writing. I love it.

Reviewer: Mollie (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2008 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really liked seeing that scene from Alice's point of view. It was very good!

Reviewer: ikecheer24 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow this was amazing! It went along perfectly with what I thought Alice saw! Great Job!

.... Do you think you could continue? I love Alice POV's and there aren't too many of them!

Thanks! =) 

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was an absolutely perfect look into a pivotal "missing moment" in NEW MOON. And you handled it masterfully. I pray you continue wth this. It's truly wonderful. Please post more ASAP!

Reviewer: ShandyAnn (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

and that it did

Reviewer: fireonice1292 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2008 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

omg you need to write the rest of new moon in alices POV....


this is amazing

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