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Reviewer: nitaalvarez (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 13
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 13
I really hope Bella showing up in Denver doesn't backfire.
Reviewer: madiloca (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 13
Oh boy, I hope he doesn't mind little suprise visits! And by the way, who the hell has their secretary send flowers & a note to their wife about last minute business trips instead of a simple phone !
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 13
Ah....silly lovel. Two people who love each other, but let petty things get in their way. Been there...done that....LOL! Fights where you are both miserablem but don't know what to do to fix it. It would be easy to turn around and hug and kiss him, but that wouldn't be logical to a woman who is pissed off, or to a guy. Love how Bella got drunk though, lol, and smashed the glass. That woke Edward up. Couldn't believe it when she had the guts to go to his office, and then to hear that he left for Colorado, DAMN. Loved this story and can't wait for these two to make up!! Write when you can!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 13
While spur of the moment is good, it seems as though none of Bella's plans are working at this point. Let's hope this one is different, though I'm not betting on it!
Reviewer: AubreyRose (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 13
im always really excited to see that this story has been updated and this chapter didnt disappoint - awesome writing as usual. i thought it was great when bella had her mini breakdown, she needed an outlet for her frustration as she's not able to communicate with edward yet. please please please post more soon as i cant wait to see what happens in denver!!!!
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 13
Liking this assertive bella.
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 13
Another awesome chapter:) Can't wait for Denver!!
Reviewer: kufansvj (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love ballsy Bella! I hate that she hid in the guest bedroom but I'm so glad she's tracking Edward down and making him face the conversation! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 13
GO Bella
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 13
Oh, you go girl!!
Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 13
Stupid girl. Baby, really. Not even girl. She's positively acting like a child. Throwing things is just plain stupid. Following him to Denver, bad move.
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 13
OMG! I was pretty nervous when Bella decided to show up at Edward's office unannounced, I thought that he wouldn't be pleased, at all. But now! WOW! I wonder what he will think of Bella showing up at Denver. He will be totally surprised, but will he be angry? I'm glad that you post new chapter quickcly, because I really need to know!
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 13
Ok so is she ditching the new job? I mean really she is So wishy washy. He wanted her to come and now she is?
Reviewer: Twi Mom (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 13
I am really enjoying this story and the direction it's taking. Keep it up x
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 13
Wow... he really is the king of avoidance huh? I can't wait for the next chapter! Since I'm new to this story... I have to ask what your update schedule is... if you have one that is :-)
I love the story!
Thanks,
Dijah
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2011 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 13
nice job
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 13
Bella surprised me as she sat at the table drinking wine. Imho she had every right to be upset with him. And then he turns around and tells her to be safe and cleans up to boot!
Her first day went well enough despite all that she had on her mind. I liked that she went to see him at work to talk this out. I did feel bad when she got there only to discover he had left for Denver early. Again I am happy. This time that she chose to go out there to see him. My fingers are crossed that all will work out well. Oh yes, and I do like Jane. The receptionist? Not so much.
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh dear lord. Silly woman just doesn't learn.......
Reviewer: Bella3268 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 13
Once again as always I loved it. I really don't think Edward was truly mad at her forgetting a job, I think he was more angry that she did it without telling him. That's why he forgave her so easily. Thanks for not leaving too big of a cliffie here. Hope you can update soon and good luck !!!
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 8
Poor Edward... he's so sweet... yeah... I know... I'm easy to manipulate... I think not so long ago I was all for the whole leave him thing... funny how him showin' up at the club helps me see him differently... it must have been hard for him to get up the nerve to go there... he is not as 'emotionless' as he seemed before.
Bella... Bella... Bella... drunky Bella is too funny though! My daughter is seriously lookin' at me like I'm crazy right now... I just kept havin' little outbursts of laughter... yep... I'm pretty sure she thinks I've totally lost it now ;-)
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 6 (content1)
Emmetts plan is most definately better!
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 5
So far I'm agreeing with Bella. I feel sorry for Edward though a bit... it seems that, maybe, he just doesn't know how to change... he seems a bit selfish though... but then again this is the reason he went witht he arrangement anyway... right? I think maybe they're in for a ride getting this fixed.
I can't wait to see what happens!
Dijah
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oh! Oh!...
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 2
I must say that I am really... really... really... glad that she slammed that door!
I am really into this story already! I can't wait to see how everything plays out!
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