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Reviewer: madaboutforks (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 02:40 PM · On: 9. Probation
Thank goodness, skulking about always makes me nervous, I'm glad that it didn't end too stressfully. Not that I didn't enjoy the chapter, because I really did. And if Coraline is good at reading people, then she must have an idea about how he feels...
Reviewer: madaboutforks (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 02:23 PM · On: 8. Brussels
Really good chapter, it's nice to fill in some gaps. Grant is so lonely that I hope Harriet wins out.
Reviewer: madaboutforks (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 02:24 PM · On: 7. Company
Great chapter. I loved his enthusiastic descriptions of Coraline and the way he used his talent. The corpse drinking was pretty disgusting though, yuk! I had wondered if the blood would have gone solid after a short time and be undrinkable, but rigor mortis is not exactly my field of expertise, so I'll take Grant's word for it :)
Reviewer: madaboutforks (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 01:58 PM · On: 6. Hyde
.... a vampire?
I am hazarding a guess :) I now have to rush to the next chapter...!
Reviewer: madaboutforks (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 01:07 PM · On: 4. Closure
Grim, but well done :)
Reviewer: madaboutforks (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 12:54 PM · On: 3. Discovery
Another really interesting and well written chapter. This story has a lot of food for thought, it's great. The whole feeding on corpses thing was fairly gruesome, but better than feeding on alive people :) His gift is interesting, and described really well.
Reviewer: madaboutforks (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 12:33 PM · On: 2. Indestructible
That chapter was excellent. It was one of the best transformation/awakenings I've ever read. I love the wry humour, and I am glad that Britta is no more. She had 'unbalanced obsessive' written all over her (even when she was human), and I thought that her behaviour towards Grant was spooky and unnerving (which is saying a lot since she's already a vampire) I don't think that she would have taken it very well if he had rejected her. The wolves were nicely introduced.
Reviewer: madaboutforks (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 02:14 PM · On: 1. Origins
I can see that this is going to be an interesting story. I really like the first chapter, I especially enjoyed the humour. At this point it seems strange that Britta has singled Grant out, though I'm sure she has her reasons - which will no doubt be revealed (I hope!)
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 11:03 AM · On: Epilogue: Hawkins
Awesome Chapter!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 11:00 AM · On: 22. Rendezvous
Nice Cliffy!!!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 10:58 AM · On: 21. Chaos
Awesome !!!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 10:49 AM · On: 20. Teamwork
Evil Cliffy!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 10:40 AM · On: 19. Waiting
Awesome Chapter!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 10:36 AM · On: 18. Crossfire
Go Grant!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 10:22 AM · On: 17. Fighting
Finally!!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 10:02 AM · On: 16. October
Poor Grant!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 09:51 AM · On: 15. Home
Awesome Chapter!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 09:39 AM · On: 14. Hermes
Awesome chapter!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 09:24 AM · On: 13. Clarity
Friends...finally!!!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 09:14 AM · On: 12. Holiday
Awesome Chapter!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 08:52 AM · On: 11. Gravity
Great Chapter!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 08:42 AM · On: 10. Balcony
GO Grant!!!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 08:25 AM · On: 9. Probation
Great Chapter!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 07:22 AM · On: 8. Brussels
Great Chapter!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 07:09 AM · On: 7. Company
Great CHapter!
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