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Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 07:10 AM · On: Land Mines

I totally see something awfully similar taking place between these two. I think you captured this moment brilliantly! 

Nice job!

Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 06:18 PM · On: Land Mines

I would have loved to have read a Kristen's POV companion piece too! Kristen strikes me as a "no nonsense" kind of young woman when it comes to a relationship, she wants respect, honesty and yes, some romance with a guy who doesn't need to look over his shoulder for confirmation that he's doing the right behavior or unafraid to tell how he feels (in private)! I think this one of the reasons we all love Rob and Kristen together --they complement each other in more ways than we may suspect! I so want to see their love affair succeed! 



Author's Response:

Ah, with the exception of part of a crossover in Wake Up Call chapters, I try to avoid doing the same scenes from different POVs.  I haven't figured out how to not make them feel too repetitive and boring.  I'm not that skilled. 

I could have done this in 3rd person to know what both of them were thinking, but I felt that the appeal of this from his POV was that you get his yearning and desire, but also the uncertainty of their future.  Some mystery is good for a story, no? *whispers* I can only write a story as I hear it in my head, and this one presented as his version, so I had to go with it. ;-)

I hope that I at least planted enough seeds for you as the reader to know what Kristen was thinking during this one shot.

I agree with you that they complement each other in more ways that we will ever, or should ever, know.

I, too, wish them all the best in the world. :)

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts with me.

<3 from the shrew

Reviewer: golddigger99 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2011 07:21 AM · On: Land Mines

Just like Kristen has stated in the past, this scene is too my favorite. I wish it could've somehow been in the movie, but it just didn't fit the story line. Great story!



Author's Response:

Thank goodness we at least got it in an outtake.  I can say it's one of my faves; I cannot choose an absolute favorite as so many of their scenes are just too freakin' gloriously sexy and loving for words.  What I wouldn't give to have the heaps of footage that hit the cutting room floor. . . . Oh yeah, I am just gonna dwell on that and imagine the possibilities for the next week now.

Thank you for reading and commenting.  I'm glad that you could enjoy this if it was your favorite scene.  That sometimes makes it more of a challenge to live up to, no?  :)

<3 from the shrew

Reviewer: anna j (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 12:29 PM · On: Land Mines

This story seemed very believable based on what I really know of those two.  I enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

It's entirely fiction.  I don't know them at all.  I try to make it "sound like them" based on what little we see of them in interviews, but it's 100% my internal ponderings of what a situation like this could be for two people within these circumstances.

Thank you for reading and for leaving me your comments. :)

<3 from the shrew

Reviewer: anna j (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 12:25 PM · On: Land Mines

This story seemed very believable based on what I really know of those two.  I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: The Infamous Izzy (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 10:35 PM · On: Land Mines

I liked it!!! Very well written!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for commenting. :)

<3 from the shrew

Reviewer: eclipselover1 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2011 07:44 PM · On: Land Mines

very cute ......imagine tht actually happned xD

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. :)  I'd love to know what you think I could have done better on this scene.

<3 from the shrew

Reviewer: musicluvr (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2011 03:35 PM · On: Land Mines

Wow, his description of what Edward would have done was incredibly hot!!! Whoa!!

Given Rob and Kristen's undeniable chemistry, I've always wondered how intense the sexual tension between them was in between takes while filming Twilight. You did a great job depicting it!

Author's Response:

He was totally messing with her with those comments.  Well, he was, and he wasn't messing with her, if you know what I mean? 

I remember the pics of them filming the tree scene stuff, and the tension was like a tangible entity that existed despite any efforts to the contrary.  Their interactions just appeared fraught, for lack of a better term.  I bet some times it was really freakin' intense, with that undercurrent of love, and other times, I bet they just dissolved into laughter.  Whatever the REAL, it's fun to imagine them having fun with it all, no? Thank you for imagining with me. :)

Thank you very kindly for the compliment. :)

<3 from the shrew

Reviewer: ebskdyal (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2011 07:43 PM · On: Land Mines

That was great. Thank you.



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  Thank you for reading.  <3

Reviewer: LIZDESMOND (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 04:29 PM · On: Land Mines

Good, REALLY good!!!  I can imagine how much real tension they felt during this time period.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and commenting, Liz. :)

I'm so glad you enjoyed this.:)

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 06:57 PM · On: Land Mines

perfect and so possible



Author's Response:

Squee!

I'm glad you thought this was "possible."  I struggle so much to get the voice down to sound realistic, especially with Rob, so if it seemed believable, I feel that I did it right.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. :)

<3 from the shrew

Reviewer: vampire_lust (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2011 10:02 AM · On: Land Mines

Loved this O/S!

They had incredible chemistry back then (well, they still do) and the UST in this scene is unbelievable. You managed to relay that perfectly.

Good job!
xx
Su



Author's Response:

Hi Su!

Yeah, their chemistry back then was so controlled and focused (now it's deeper <3).  This deleted scene was one of my favorites (even though I know they couldn't ever use it) because it captured their TENSION so well.  I'm really pleased that I was able to relay that to you.

Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

<3 from the shrew

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 04:38 PM · On: Land Mines

That was fantastic! Loved it, why'd you make us wait so long? I can totally see this after watching that clip!

Author's Response:

I'm really glad you liked it.  There were lots of reasons I didn't post it earlier.  Better late than never, maybe.

I really loved that scene.  It was too much fun to watch, and I had too much fun imagining if Rob was thinking dirty, dirty boy thoughts. ;-)

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

Reviewer: littleangrykitten (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 08:49 PM · On: Land Mines

Finally another good Robsten story....Thank you shrew.....:D That one shot made my day.....



Author's Response:

I am very pleased that you liked it. :)  Hopefully, the dry spell for my posting is over, and I can get a few more things out to you this summer. *fingers crossed... and toes, and eyes, legs, arms, ... um, whatever else can be crossed...* ;-)

Thank you very much for reading and commenting.:)

p.s. LOVE your penname!

Reviewer: AZILIZ (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 12:22 PM · On: Land Mines

Why have you waited so long?? This one shot is so great! This improv was so epic, the behind the scene video and the way Kristen narated it...

I love the last line "We had metaphorically stepped over another landmine, but I wondered – how long before one blew up in my face?"

"le petit mort" is it an american adapation of " la petite mort"? I'm french so I know the french expression and not the american one.



Author's Response:

Well, I waited because I kept trying to flesh it out more, make the scene fuller, but I never could. Then I got distracted. Then RL crapped all over me, then I forgot about it, then... I posted it. lol.

I loved this deleted scene. They really crackled with the energy and tension.  I tried to recreate that here.

I'm really glad you liked the last line. :)

I am not French, and so I looked up the spelling, but apparently, my resource was incorrect.  THANK YOU for letting me know the proper spelling. It IS supposed to be the French version.  I see now that the phrase is not gender specific.  I really appreciate you pointing that out. :)  I will fix it now.

Love from the shrew

Reviewer: SmileLikeYouMeanIt (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Land Mines

Whoa... That was hella good... Very raw and believable sexual tension there... Greatttt job



Author's Response:

Excellent. That is hoping how it turned out... believable & UST.  :)

Thanks much for reading and leaving me your comments.  I'm really glad you enjoyed this. :)

Reviewer: mgg (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 06:47 AM · On: Land Mines

Dear Miss The Shrew:

I am so happy to have new material in which I can totally indulge my crazy obsession with this beautiful characters (I totally know it's fiction, therefor I am not stalking or obsessing over real people; sorry I have to say that over and over so that I don't feel patetic, and other won't write shit about me on there blogs) that are so realistic, (to me) love them.

Just one more thing: Are you writing any new chapters on your story Wake up call?? If so thank you, if not thank you. You know en epi or an outtake would be totally cool. If not I totally undestan, RL has gotten too hectic for us twilightfans and some of us had had to stop cold turk writing and reading since we dont have the time or where neglecting families, friends, work, etc. But I totally admire the writer that can juggle both and can still have that creative edge to there writing.

So thanks again.

Hope eveything is well with you and yours,

Melissa

 

P.s Sorry I was feeling a little formal today. I should have PM'd



Author's Response:

My dear Melissa,

Please do not apologize.  You can be as formal as you wish. If you would prefer, though, we can remove this review if you don't want it public.

People that don't understand that these are CHARACTERS, just don't get it.  We must ignore their misunderstanding.  They will always think we are creepy & nuts, and they will ALWAYS MISS THE POINT.  I feel ya, sweets, I really do.

I still hope to get an epi for WUC. I've had RL stuff, but for that story specifically, there is have been quite a few blocks & questions as I try to deliver the epi.  I still plan on it, if it's at all possible.

I know what you mean about those authors that have learned to do that juggling act. I aspire to be like that someday, but I am not there yet.  Here's to learning.

Thank you for sticking with me through my learning process.  It means so much to me.

Love from the shrew <3

Reviewer: rjcarreno (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 05:39 AM · On: Land Mines

Loved it! Very realistic! ;)

That was one of my favorite deleted scenes from Twilight. Wish it would've made into the final film, but I'm glad it was included on the dvd.

Thanks again for this wonderful o/s.

:)

Author's Response:

It was a great scene.  I know why they couldn't keep it in the actual film (tasting her blood would certainly have been a no-no for Edward at that point) but it sure was sexy as hell to watch that scene play out.  I'm really stoked that they included it on the DVD, too.  CH at least included a lot of goodies that were lacking from the later DVDs.  I may have watched those deleted scenes as much as the movie. ;)

Thanks so very much for reading and leaving me your comments on this little ditty.:)

<3 from the shrew

Reviewer: alba girl (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2011 05:36 AM · On: Land Mines

What a treat to come home to after a hard week at work. No need to worry about this. It is a lovely way to revisit the early days. I think I need a cold shower after all that UST!!

Keep writing. xx



Author's Response:

Dearest alba girl,

Thank you so very much for your encouraging words.

I am so glad that you enjoyed the UST.  These two are hotter than hot, no matter what, and I just wanted to see if I could capture and convey a little bit of that hotness.  I'm SO glad that they have been able to move past that now, though. :)

Thank you for continuing to read these stories. Thank you for continuing to leave me your comments.

Much love to you, sweet one,

the shrew

 

Reviewer: flo_kaka (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 10:44 PM · On: Land Mines

I always love your story. Of course, this one is without exception. This is really a sweet little piece.

You know? It has been a while since you last posted, and I was thrilled when I received the alert of you posting a new story. Do you have any facebook page or Twitter or something else where I can follow? I'd love to know what is new with you.

Love,
Florence



Author's Response:

Hi Florence,

Thanks for reading.  I'm glad you enjoyed this.

I have a twitter, @edmett, although I don't tweet much anymore.

Thanks for leaving your comments. :)

Reviewer: Mrs Karlssonlsson (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 08:16 PM · On: Land Mines

I really liked this, feels very realistic....:)

Author's Response:

Excellent! I wanted to make it feel "real." Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

Reviewer: jbe86 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 08:08 PM · On: Land Mines

Um wow! That was soo freaking hot and yet Nothing as in lemons happened. Good job! Thanks Hun. Bye 



Author's Response:

Glad you found it hot. They had an INSANE amount of UST going on back then. I tried to capture just a little of it.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

Reviewer: karenbush2007 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2011 08:02 PM · On: Land Mines

cool, not bad!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

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