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Reviewer: kpsp95 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 10:26 AM · On: In the Wings: a One-Shot

i liked it.  nice o/s, very sweet.

Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 10:08 AM · On: In the Wings: a One-Shot

That was so sweet. I thought you did a great job with the mix of tender moments and hot smexin.

I really enjoyed Bella's thought process. It can be hard to pull off the popular girl who gives it all up story, but you nailed it.

And I thought the brief glimpse into the future was great.

Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 08:53 AM · On: In the Wings: a One-Shot

This would be a great regular story. Think about it..... ;P

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 08:43 AM · On: In the Wings: a One-Shot

I am absolutely completely freaking in love with this story.

I would print it out and marry it if I could.

PERFECTION.

I bow down to the obvious amazingness of it.

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 08:42 AM · On: In the Wings: a One-Shot

Lovely! I do love a story where Jake is a sleaze bag! lol

Reviewer: pindrop (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 08:22 AM · On: In the Wings: a One-Shot

Very sweet story!

Reviewer: EarthQuote56 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 08:20 AM · On: In the Wings: a One-Shot

Short and sweet. Great story. I like the message. High school is not the best years of your life. Look forward to reading your other works. Take care.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 08:04 AM · On: In the Wings: a One-Shot

This was a wonderful one-shot.   I loved how Edward rescued her this time, instead of Jacob, and how maybe to the outside world, he was a gorgeous guy, but unpopular?   She noticed him, but didn't act on it because she was afraid of being an outcast.   He was so normal, gentle and loving, and above all very very patient.  Two years patient.   LOVED IT!   I absolutely loved how you showed the 20 years later!   Perfect!  I wish you had expanded it even more, but who knows, it might have ruined it.   It was very emotional, and very moving.   Write again some time, we'll read it!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 07:41 AM · On: In the Wings: a One-Shot

Such a sweet beautiful love story!  Love it!

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