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Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
Lol. Can't wait to find out why Jazz shows up in costume.
Reviewer: ToSSeT (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
wow, fantastic chapter . . . I want to say that I'm quite happy to wait for the next chapter, but that would be a complete lie . . . I'm currently stamping my foot and pouting like a 3 year old because I have to wait lol
I really hope Edward owns up soon, I can't pick how B is going to handle it and it's only going to get worse the longer he waits.
As for Jessica . . . back off ho, you might have had a shot before E changed but now you just annoy me lol
Love your work, banner . . .cyber hugs for another winner :) xx
Reviewer: Vamp Chick (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
I was so happy when I opened my favorites today and saw that you had added a new chapter! I must admit I was getting anxious! This is absolutely hilarious! Please hurry, hurry, hurry and post again quickly!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
Holy hotness YUMM gotta love a man in uniform! I am like wow and all teh little twist you kee p tossing back at us Mike the hat Jess teh story Edward possibly over hearng Jess tell Bella which freaks out Bella so much fun little close todbits teehee love love love!! Can't wait for more I hope Jasper and Alice finally get soem alone time in teh hot tub hahaha and Mike and Jess leave together and Angela who has been quiet can draw Taylor away on a BS reason so teh couples have time then when Rose shows up and meets Emmie bear!!! squeeee
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
This just gets better and better! What a pickle Bella and Edward are in... More and more people they know seem to be reading the story, and some are so close to the truth in their musings. It was nice of Edward and Bella "covering" for each other during Mike's ramblings. And poor Alice, will she be at all coherent after seeing Jasper in that uniform?
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
WTF??? Why is Jasper wearing that?
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
LOL great chapter, but it was too short!!!
Hope that means a quick update on the way? ;)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
Great chapter!
I'm glad the situation with Mike was taken care of...though I don't know if I would trust Jessica.
And Jessica is one of Bella's readers? Wow...
I wonder why Jasper was dressed like that...
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 17: True Confessions of Stealth Transgressions
OMG!!! I needed this laugh so bad...hahahaha!! I so love this story:)
Reviewer: Emmet Cullen Lover (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
awesome!!!! i looooooove this story its hilarious!!!!! please update sooooooon!!!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2012 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
Great chapter. Looking forward to the rest of the party. Why on earth is Jasper wearing civil war regalia?
Reviewer: wickedvampires (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
hehehehe what a cliffie!! Cat is out of the bag!! Well partly I guess. lol. Better be some juicy hot tub lemons in the next chapter. Lol. Just kidding. i love your story!! Keep up the great work!!! Keep us laughing too!! :)
Reviewer: Yecats86 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Sorry this is the first time I'm reviewing, but I've only recently found this story and wanted to catch up :)
There have been so many OMG moments this story that I've had trouble keeping quite (I have 4 house mates who don't know about by Twilight fan-fiction addiction and as I should be studing most nights, I don't want them wonder what the hell I'm up to laughing all the time).
This is a brilliant story and I love all the cringe worthy moments. Edward talking to his mum (I'm British and can't bring myself to spell it any other way, sorry:/) about Bella's story I loved itand Edwards reaction. I am so wishing that I had followed your's and the others reviewers advise about having an emergency tote bag with protective gear.
May I make a suggestion for the tote? Sound proofing!!
I can't wait to read the next chapter, but I regret to tell you that I may not get to review them as I really should be studying and getting my assingments done (the woes of a uni student).
Keep up the amazing work.
PS, may I make one suggestion that I hope you will not think to forward, but while reading some of the earler chapters I noticed a few errors, should I say (things like odd words that look like they were left over from a re-write ect). I know you must have a beta and being an editor myslef I know things can get missed (you even mention it in the first chater when Bella is proofing the final chapter of "Beyond the Hills So Green"...See I paid attention ;)) but maybe you could just go back over them, at some point once you've finished this story? Of course you don't have to and I hope you don't feel I've stepped out of line as this is some of the best writing I've seen.
I'm sorry for rambling on and now I'll sign of :)
Y xx
Reviewer: Marlena68 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
I'm pretty much a lurker here on Twilighted.net and I am new to your stories. I started FF, SG, & SG a few days ago and haven't been able to put it down. I've finally gotten to where you left off and just wanted to tell you how much I've enjoyed the story. I can't wait for future updates. I am waiting with baited breath.
Reviewer: ToSSeT (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
So, I'm a late comer to this story and I did the rude thing of reading all the way through without reviewing . . . *smack wrist*
I love the story! If the fact that I couldn't stop long enough between chapters wasn't enough of a clue. I loved the animosity at the start, but I love how cute the banter between Bella and Edward is now. I seriously CAN NOT wait until things start to *ahem* heat up with them lol
Can't wait to see what happens next chapter and how Edward reacts to Mike's outburst.
Reviewer: DingoesAteMyBaby (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Okay, let me just start by saying that I've not been on Twilighted for...well, a long time really, I don't think MoTU was even finished at that point in time so I might be a little rusty:D
Now, this story spoke to me immediately, as do all stories with crazy first encounters, and let's be honest, this encounter was quite dramatic (in a good way though).
The setting was easy to get into and I have to admire you for your canon name changing, I have a feeling it's not as easy as it seems. I mean I have a feeling that sometimes a tiny Twilight may have snuck its way into a Stardust sentence, am I right? heh.
I enjoy the story a lot, at first I'll have to admit though, that I didn't much care for the repetitions but now that I've gotten used to the style and the different ways Bella and Edward respond to, for instance the reviews, I'm completely into it:D
What else can I really say? I'm not good at reviews, I tend to wonder if my spelling is correct and double check it like crazy since I'm fron Denmark and thus may not be entirely great at English in the written form (I hope you'll bear with me though;)).
I will definitely return a lot more often to Twilighted now that your story is here to forefill my crazy, obsessive fanficiton need that I can't quite dampen no matter how much my boyfriend desperately wants me to.
At last, I'll just thank you for making my day a little more fun and enjoyable. It is always nice to find new stories that intrigue you, isn't it?
Happy writing!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 26: Discussions and Dissection
Wow...this is just so unbelieveable. I thought that he review was great. Not giving away too much though. This should certainly be very interesting to say the least. I guess it is on to the barbeque. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 25: When the S#!t Hits the Fan Fiction
I think that this chapter was fucking awesome and it was done so great with his thoughts and her writing right in there. I don't know how you do it. I fucking loved it and I think that Edward finally has a better picture of Bella. THANKS FOR THE FUCK AWESOME READING. Sher
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 17: True Confessions of Stealth Transgressions
All I can say is WOW!!!!!!!! He did some rotten things, but what she did is so uncalled for. It is a terrible thing when someone goes through your things. That was some after dinner conversation. THANKS FOR THE MOST INTERESTING READING. sHER
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Squeeeee wow oh wow just WOW!!! I mean teh tour was one thing teh messages was another and teh trying to be discreet around Alice...IMPOSSIBLE!!!! hahahahhaah Post again soon!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 10: Into the Lair
OMFG!!!!!! Is he really going to catch her? I guess we will see. She is just so obsessed with him. She is really obsessed with him. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
This is just so good! I can't wait to see what happens at the party with the various guests. Some shit should be hitting the proverbial fan... I'm glad to see the interaction between Edward and Bella, they really do grow more and more fond of each other.
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 7: Aide-de-Camp Black
WOW....that is some combination in her bed. A girl can only dream. I am glad that Jake was able to let Edward know not to mess with Bella in a nice sort of way. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Gahhh pls pls pls pls update really soon!!! I can't wait to see how the bbq goes!!! And can't wait for these two to get togather!!!!!
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
I am really enjoying reading this fic and I have tried to review several times but I couldn't as Twilighted was giving me a problem. Wants me to put in a "security code" Never heard of that before. Anyway....they are playing the cat and mouse game. I wonder why he couldn't get it "up" for his little Russian tart. Hmmmm probably thinking of Bella. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
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