This is a very interesting story, of a story within a story. I'm intrigued. Hopefully I won't have to wait too long for another chapter or two. Keep going, I can't wait to see what will happen. 

So goddamn cute! Why must you make Assward so gosh darn cute?! My heart can only melt so many times! Grr!

Urgh. Well. Anyway. The chapter was awesome, the character's were, as always, funny as heck and Angela's perceptiveness is quite nice; I like that you've carried that across from the books.

Your ego must melt out of your ears, so I'm only going to tell you it was awesome twice. Because it was awesome. So, go and buy some ear plugs and sit back down to your computer, because I can only wait for so long.

Ear plugs. Sit down. Upload. Presto. Happy smiles. Upload. More smiles. (Because you love us.)

Edward's really serious about changing his ways. I love Angela for not trying to nip the potential relationship between Bella and Edward in the bud. I'm so looking forward to the barbecue because there will be a lot of people who now all the "different Edwards", lots of opportunities for Bella to get to know him better, but at the same time I fear for Edward. He's trying so hard but Alice and Emmett have the potential to embarass him hugely. Love the star-themed lighting.

*squeals like an adolescent girl* Loved it 😊 Poor Edward, I mean I know he isn't exactly the ideal boy next door...yet at least...his poor angst-ridden thoughts always make me empathize with Esme- you just can't help see the little boy lost soul in him and want to hug him and love him until he finds some peace. (Course then he does something unintentionally sexy like running his fingers through his hair or that crooked smile and my thoughts are far from motherly 😏).

I'm loving how this is playing out :)  Can't wait to see where you take them!

Great story! Can't wait for the BBQ, it seems more people are likely to find out about their identity since Mike Newton did the "bitch" hat for Bella. Looking forward to new update!

OMGosh! OMGosh! OMGosh!!!!  I certainly hope she's written enough that he'll figure out she DOES like him....now, actually, he shouldn't be looking at her writings...cuz she didn't look at his music...I'm just sayin'  Gotta Go...more chapters to read!!

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Awww.....so good, so good.  Can not wait to see how the barbecue turns out. 

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Can't wait to read about the BBQ!

Hahaha, I soooo can't wait for the BBQ. And I wonder whether his parents and Alice will find out then that Edward and Bella (will) have exchanged keys. :P And I am very curious (nosey) as to what Edward wrote in his profile.

"Pissle off" - SNORT... I may or may not have scared the cat with that one ;-)

Worth the wait, as usual. Still loving the inner musings of particularly Edward, he's so funny and sometimes lost. And I love that both Bella and Edward have "inner voices" talking back to them, which make for a lot of hilarious moments. I should've learned by now not to read these chapters at work, but I can't wait until I get home, so I have to be clandestine about it and do it when no one's around, and make sure I keep my coffee away from the computer while reading, LOL. It will be very interesting to see what happens at the barbecue.