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Reviewer: angiem (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

Bannerday!

I love it and I wish to join your Fandom. There is more than just potential here.  The story line is fresh and fun and I'm looking forward to reading more!  Jerkward is a nice change for starters.  It's going to be awesome seeing how your Bella tames him.  Pretty please, may I request that if you bring Jake into the story that he isn't a douche bad guy or warn us in your AN?  Too many people write Jacob as the bad guy which makes me so sad since I adore Jacob. It won't stop me reading, but I am tired as hell of Evil Jake.  Whatever you choose to do, I'm invested in this story and your characters. 

Angie

 



Author's Response:

Hi angie!

Welcome to my Fandom. ;) Wow...never had anyone make that kind of request before! :) I thought this storyline seemed pretty exciting...there's just so much possibility for something different here. I agree...we don't get many Jerkwards...Dorkwards, Domwards and Sweetwards, yes...so this will be fun making him douchey for a change. And of course Bella will tame him and change him. And I have never written Jake as the bad guy. You should take a look at my other two things if you're tired of Jake as a bad guy. I won't do it. No Evil Jakes here. :)

thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

I would read more of this. I enjoy Bella inadvertantly cockblocking Edward. I'm also jealous of that red head, if you know what I mean, and I'm sure you do since my meaning is hardly obscured. LOL.



Author's Response:

Hi elislyn!

Glad you liked the beginning of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. It's the ultimate in clumsy Bella when she can ruin Edward's sexual escapades! LOL. Chapter 2 is up...hope you like it as much...the sparks are flying...the confrontation is here.

Thank you for the review. Let me know what you thought of chapter 2. 

-bannerday

Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

More. Need it!!!!!! Im an addict and not ashamed to admit it. Lol. This sounds good. :D

Kate:D



Author's Response:

Hi Kate!

Glad you liked the beginning of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. Chapter 2 is up...hope you like it as much...the sparks are flying...the confrontation is here. There's no shame in being addicted to Edward...even when he's an Assward. ;)

Thank you for the review. Let me know what you thought of chapter 2. 

-bannerday

Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2011 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

It has definite potential, and I would indeed be inclined to read on :) 



Author's Response:

Hi Twi lover 21!

Glad you liked the beginning of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. Chapter 2 is up...hope you like it as much...the sparks are flying...the confrontation is here.

Thank you for the review. Let me know what you thought of chapter 2. 

-bannerday

Reviewer: Ellab2005 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

Ooooohhhhhh!! YES YES YES!!! I'm loving it! Keep going please! Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Hi Ellab2005!

Thanks for the storylove! I hope you like chapter 2 of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls...it's posted now. Let me know what you think.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

You betcha!  will be here till the bitter end lol, and this one looks like it is going to be fun fun fun.  added to my faves and looking forward to where its heading.  Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Hi fanficfanVic!

I think this one will be a lot of fun. I can hardly tear myself away from it to do anything else or work on my other stories. GAH! If I could just open my head and let you look inside at the things I see happening...Well, trust me...it's got some potential! Thanks for fave-ing it. And it's nice to meet over here on this street corner once again. lol

Hope you like/liked chapter 2...Of course I'm beginning to have trouble keeping things straight...just so long as I get the storyline straight, right?

-bannerday

Reviewer: timide (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

SOOOOOOOOOO has potential! Will be obsessively checking for updates now!  Two bannerday stories - I'll just have to schedule real life around the stories now - ha!



Author's Response:

Hi timide!

Glad you liked the beginning of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. Chapter 2 is up...another reader told me they didn't get an alert, so I'm letting you know. I hope you like 2 as much...the sparks are flying...the confrontation is here.

Thank you for the review. Let me know what you thought of chapter 2. glad to know we are spending so much time together! :)

-bannerday

Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

Oh my goodness, so much potential! I really would love to read more.

Author's Response:

Hi Discordia!

Glad you liked chapter 1 or Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single girls...and I know you read two and reviewed that one as well...I'll get there. Thanks for the love! :)

-bannerday

Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

Please hurry and update - I can't wait to read about their confrontation. - hee hee!

 



Author's Response:

Hi Intsu!

Glad you liked the beginning of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. Chapter 2 is up...hope you like it as much...the sparks are flying...the confrontation is here.

Thank you for the review. Let me know what you thought of chapter 2. 

-bannerday

Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

looks good :) 



Author's Response:

Hi sweetnees!

Glad you liked the beginning of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. Chapter 2 is up...hope you like it as much...the sparks are flying.

Thank you for the review. Let me know what you thought of chapter 2. 

-bannerday

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

Oh banner, LMFAO at Edward (Ka-BLAM!) getting cockblocked by his new neigbour. I can just see his outraged face, standing in his silk pj pants. looking all hot and entitled. Look forward to his first face-to-face with said cockblocker! Thanks for this.



Author's Response:

Hi spunk!

Loved your review of c-1 of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls.  KA-BLAM! I loved the phrase about Edward looking "all hot and entitled" I may have to use that in an upcoming chapter. May I?

The cockblocker/irate neighbor confrontation is updated and available for your viewing pleasure and your reading hysterics. I think you'll like it. ;)

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  KER-POW!

Thanks for the review, bb!

-bannerday

Reviewer: Rory1984 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

I love love this new idea :D It has plenty potential my dear!

And dear Edward is definitly in for a surprise .. since I guess he is expecting a guy to be the driver of the truck and seeing as he is only wearing black silk PJ pants seeing a hot and pretty Bella could definitely become a problem for him :P

Well, I love this life imitating art idea and vice versa, I love the idea of playboy Edward being "tamed" by Bella. The only this I have a little issue wish is the third person narrative... cause I am a sucker for 1st person narrative.. I blame SM for that ;) But no worries I ll def keep reading! Just thought Id mention that!

Anyway this was quite a beginning and you gave me quite a surprise posting a new story alltogether :D Cant wait how this will unfold :)

Btw, r u on twitter or facebook?

Take care dear, u r my fav author by far

 



Author's Response:

Hi Rory!

glad

Glad you liked the beginning of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. and see potential there. Chapter 2 is up...hope you like it as much...the sparks are flying. Edward IS in for a surprise... ;) I may switch things up and do some chapters in first person. Not sure about that. i know this is a departure, but I think it's a little more tongue-in-cheek this way . And I will still include lots of dialogue and also thoughts from both characters' POV's.

I think the art imitating life and vice versa will be a great aspect to this story. And playboy Edward...he's a little over the top, but that's okay...Bella will reel him in. ;)

And no...I'm not on Twitter or Facebook. this is PLENTY for me to keep up with right now. I don't need additional outlets for my craziness.

Thank you for the review. Thank you for telling me that I am your fave author by far. That just means so much to me. I write this stuff because it's fun but I also write it for the wonderful interaction I get from readers like you.

Let me know what you thought of chapter 2. It's amazingly bizarre...in a hysterical way. ;) 

-bannerday

 

Reviewer: LadyExcalibur (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

Great start! I can't wait to see the sparks fly!



Author's Response:

Hi LadyExcalibur!

Glad you liked the beginning of Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls. Chapter 2 is up...hope you like it as much...the sparks are flying, all right.

Thank you for the review. Let me know what you thought of chapter 2. 

-bannerday

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

LOL can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Hi hc4metal!

I've missed you! Glad you liked that first chapter. Hope you like the second installment. It's up. Let me know what you thought.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

So Bannerday should I tell you everything I said over at FFn are just give a new one..........still want to know if there is a hot playboy next door to you, if so I might be up for a roadtrip!!!!!!!!!!! hehehehehe.

Really I love this so far and can't wait for the rest...this feels like it might be one of those stories that dosen't have major angst and can balance out all the others I am reading that do!!!!!!!!

stilllike your point system being DicNips!!!!!!!! yeay that shit is funny!!!!!! I will have to wait to send Aussie and Kong out with your DicNip shipment as we here Louiville are deal with massive storms (hitting now)and tornados (passing me up) in the area...... no not kidding about that!!!!! and yes my crazy ass is on the computer reading and reviewing!!!!!!!!!!! ( hahahahaha that would a great review for Bella hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!) *smiles and winks....you know you love me!!!!!!!*

I do like how you ended it....Edward doesn't even know what he is in store for!!!!!!!!!! Men they have such simple minds...even Edward!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for THAT reaction!!!!!!!!!!

Much luv laters bb

Twi-Ho!!!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Hi Ho!

I thought I'd get started on the reviews on this site and you're...number 1! How fitting that you are my first review on Twilighted. Truly, you live up to your name, my Twi-Ho!

I love that you reviewed this on two sites. The more the merrier, I say!

I don't think I'll have major angst here, just rollicking good times and lots-o-laughs. I'm gonna put edward through hell. He deserves it...the Ass!

I love the Dic-Nip point system And especially the fact that they don't dome in small or extra small...you can probably do away with the mediums as well. ;)

I'm so sorry that you are dealing with such weird and dangerous weather, but I'm glad to know that you can still fangirl despite the storms/hurricanes/possible flooding or anything else nature throws your way.

Glad you liked that ending for chapter 1...Edward having no clue what he is in for.

Thanks for the love and the extra-grande Dic-Nips!

Love and laters, bb!

-bannerday

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