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Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
well speaking of rich this chapter was rich so what evil plan will she come up with next to torment her poor unexpecting neighbor i am so glad you added the part where his dick wont work i hate it when they are with other people but it not so bad with him being out of commision but i bet she torments him with jake at bit these to are just toooo funny this is quickly becominging my favorite fic
Author's Response: Hi twigma!
Glad you got a kick out of chapter 5. Poor Ed and his ED. I know what you mean...i don't want him to be with other women, but he's not really with Bella yet. it's kind of in chracter that he might have a fling with someone else still before he figures out he's interested in Bella. It's a fine line I walk here. i want him to be a playboy, I just don't want him to play. LOL
Chapter 6 will not post here for at least a week. But it's up now on fanfiction(dot)net I have the same penname and of course the story has the same title. Come find it over there and if you do, leave me a review so I know you found it.
Thanks for the storylove and thanks for the review!,
-bannerday
Reviewer: Louise Clark (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
LOL! Lovin' this!
Another great chapter!
I think Edward should have gotten a hard-on though when Bella saluted him. But perhaps that will be in the next chapter? :)
Author's Response: Hi Louise!
Glad you are enjoying the read. I'm having fun with Assward and Bitchella. Or maybe it's Dickward and Awkwardella. More info on Edward in the next chappie. And Jake. And Irina. We'll see if there's a showdown ...
Chapter 6 will not post here for at least a week. But it's up now on fanfiction(dot)net
I have the same penname and of course the story has the same title. Come find it over there and if you do, leave me a review so I know you found it.
Thanks for the storylove and thanks for the review!,
-bannerday
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
All caught up and lmao that was just amazing! I won't be like one of Bellas reviewers I normally review all chaps after I caught up! I am happy I have found this story as it has me lmao and thats concerning my husband to the dubious nature of my sanity hehehhe Great work look forward to more soon! I can't wait to see what happens to "Ethan" along the way I am sure whatever is to come will be well deserved muah hahaha
Author's Response: Hi ssst!
Great to hear from you! I've missed you! And I'm glad you found me and are enjoying the read.
I'm having fun with Assward and Bitchella. Or maybe it's Dickward and Awkwardella. More info on Edward in the next chappie. And Jake. And Irina. We'll see if there's a showdown ...
Chapter 6 will not post here for at least another week. But it's up now on fanfiction(dot)net if you want to read it there.
I have the same penname and of course the story has the same title. Come find it over there and if you do, leave me a review so I know you found it.
Thanks for the storylove and thanks for the review!,
-bannerday
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
I really love this story. You have me giggling like a girl - which is fine because I am one, or at least I was once!
Jealous much Edward?
Author's Response: Hi Looby Luscious!
Glad to know I am giving you the giggles. I'm giving them to myself as I write this nonsense! and I was a girl once too. Now I'm Extra-girl or Girl squared or something.
I'm having fun with Assward and Bitchella. Or maybe it's Dickward and Awkwardella. More info on Edward in the next chappie. And Jake. And Irina. We'll see if there's a showdown ... and if anyone's jealous.
Chapter 6 will not post here for at least a week. But it's up now on fanfiction(dot)net
I have the same penname and of course the story has the same title. Come find it over there and if you do, leave me a review so I know you found it.
Thanks for the storylove and thanks for the review!,
-bannerday
Reviewer: 98765 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
very funny, the line about the vooddo dance had me laughing out loud!!
Author's Response: Hi 98765!
Glad you liked that little hoodoo-voodoo dance of Bella's. ;) I'm having fun with Assward and Bitchella. Or maybe it's Dickward and Awkwardella. More info on Edward in the next chappie. And Jake. And Irina. We'll see if there's a showdown ...
Chapter 6 will not post here for at least a week. But it's up now on fanfiction(dot)net
I have the same penname and of course the story has the same title. Come find it over there and if you do, leave me a review so I know you found it.
Thanks for the storylove and thanks for the review!,
-bannerday
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
Aww - dick-fail, too? Now I feel kind of sorry for Edward. I already had a feeling that he would think Jake is Bella's boyfriend. Wonder what comes of this misconception.
Bella shouldn't be too offended by the bitch-hat. At leas meeting Edward has given her inspiration for her new story.
Author's Response: Hi mysticfighter!
I'm having fun with Assward and Bitchella. Or maybe it's Dickward and Awkwardella. More info on Edward in the next chappie. And Jake. And Irina. We'll see if there's a showdown ...
Chapter 6 will not post here for at least a week. But it's up now on fanfiction(dot)net
I have the same penname and of course the story has the same title. Come find it over there and if you do, leave me a review so I know you found it.
Thanks for the storylove and thanks for the review!,
-bannerday
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
Ahahahaha! As usual, I love it.
They are just too much fun together. Her dream was a hoot.
It was nice to get a little bit more info on Edward and his harem of women. I do feel bad for poor Edward and his voodoo-cursed limp dick. Not that he doesn't deserve it.
I love that Bella read more into the welcome mat message than was intended. And I can't wait to see how her little display with Jake plays out.
You crack me up!
Author's Response: Hi Discordia!
Glad you got a kick out of chapter 5. I'm having fun with Assward and Bitchella. Or maybe it's Dickward and Awkwardella. Glad you liked that little dream of hers. I don't know about you, but I've had that dream. LOL More info on Edward in the next chappie. And Jake. And Irina.
Chapter 6 will not post here for at least a week. But it's up now on fanfiction(dot)net
I have the same penname and of course the story has the t=same title. Come find it over there and if you do, leave me a review so I know you found it.
Thanks for the storylove and thanks for the review!,
-bannerday
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
Nice!!! I didn't think anyone else did the hairbrush concert but me!!!
I loved the salute that Dickman (see...like Batman) gave her when he got home. He's so full of himself.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Rox
Author's Response: Hi roxnroll!
No, you're not alone in the hairbrush concert. You just never thought of singing from the stage that is your bedreoom window. ;) Edward IS rather full of himself. But at least he's saluting her nicely, and not giving her the one-fingered, flip-of-the-bird salute. ;)
Thanks for the review of chapter 4. I think you alread read chapter 5 over on fanfic. I'll reply to chapter 5 reviews shortly. Thanks for reading.
-bannerday
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
Do you use the same name over on FF?
Author's Response: same story name, same author name. ;) Enjoy!
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
OH. MY. GOD!!!! I was laughing so hard that I had tears running down my face. Especially when Bella was telling him her version of Jake's diagnosis on her truck. Best Ever!!!
Moving on to the next chapter....
Rox
Author's Response: Hi Rox!
Sounds like you had quite the good time with chapter 2. Hope you continue to enjoy. I know when car problems and car repairs are discussed, I hear what Bella heard and I probably give the same kinds of explanations of diagnoses as Bella. ;)
Thank you for reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
Why am I watching this?! Why are you making me do this?! I never really liked this song.
I suppose for realisms sake she'll have to at least try to understand Edward's character in order to model her character of Ethan on him.
Author's Response: Sorry you didn't like your vid assignment, elislyn! I had that damn song in my head all last week as I was writing that chapter. I figured I'd share. How often do you find the perfect song to sing about a Mr. Silk pants???
Anyway...you are right about Bella's story. And this is going to make things difficult because she has no desire to get to know him and yet she's going to write about him. She'll just have to make some assumptions.
Thanks for the review of chapter 4. Chapter 5 should be up this weekend, I'm hoping. I'm also on fanfiction if you want to take a peek over there to see how Edward's day goes....it doesn't go well. ;)
Thanks for the review. Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Reviewer: illnevertell (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
I can't wait to see where this is going!! I am having a blast just reading it. You gotta love a funny prickward redemption story. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Hi illnevertell!
Absolutely loved this: "You gotta love a funny prickward redemption story."
Best line I've read yet to summarize this thing. ;)
Thanks for the review of chapter 4. Chapter 5 should be up this weekend, I'm hoping. I'm also on fanfiction if you want to take a peek over there to see how Edward's day goes....it doesn't go well. ;)
Thanks for the review. Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Reviewer: angellovee (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
I went, I laughed, I replayed and sang!!! We'll show him! Can't wait to make him squirm. This is going to be be worth the wait!
~Steph~
Author's Response: Hi Steph!
I'm so glad you did your homework and play, listened to and sang Mr. Silk Pants/Mr. Big Stuff! ;) I had that song in my head all last week as I wrote that chapter. And you are 100% right! WE WILL SHOW EDWARD CULLEN! ;)
Thanks for the review of chapter 4. Chapter 5 should be up this weekend, I'm hoping. I'm also on fanfiction if you want to take a peek over there to see how Edward's day goes....it doesn't go well. ;)
Thanks for the review. Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
~Bella watched as Asshole appeared in the upstairs window, closing the drapes. He paused and saluted once more in her direction, and then the drapes shut.
What an Asshole! How does he know? It's not like he can hear my thoughts!
Bella stuck her tongue out at the master bedroom across the way.
Who cares, Asshole? Who gives a crap what you do? You think I do? You think I have any interest in the way you lead your disgusting life, Edward Cullen?~
The underlined portion is something I would totally do and for your info I do sing to my hairbrush. Did it tonight! Loved it hun and love you!
Kate :D
Author's Response: Hi Kate!
These two crazy, crabby kids!!!! ;) Edward certainly knows how to push her buttons and she pushes his right back. And I'm assuming the thing you would do is to stick your tongue out at someone's master bedroom across the street. (The underline didn't show up, but I'm guessing.) Thanks for the review of chapter 4. Chapter 5 should be up this weekend, I'm hoping. I'm also on fanfiction if you want to take a peek over there to see how Edward's day goes....it doesn't go well. ;)
Thanks for the review. Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Reviewer: renesme carlie cullen (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
haha I love it please write more it's awesome, Thanks :)
Author's Response: Hi renesme!
Glad you like the premise and got a good laugh! ;) Thanks for the review of chapter 4. Chapter 5 should be up this weekend, I'm hoping. I'm also on fanfiction if you want to take a peek over there to see how Edward's day goes....it doesn't go well. ;)
Thanks for the review. Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
I think Angela struck gold with her Mr. Silk-Pants-fic-idea. Edward is right: Bella is good with words. Domme Enforcer Barbie made me crack up. More, please! Wonder what goes through Edward's mind when Jake steps on the scene.
Author's Response: Hi mysticfighter!
Glad you liked Angela's idea! These two crazy, crabby kids!!!! A Mr. Silk Pants fic! glad you liked Domme Enforcer Barbie...she's back in chapter 5. hope you like her when you find out who she is. ;)
Thanks for the review of chapter 4. Chapter 5 should be up this weekend, I'm hoping. I'm also on fanfiction if you want to take a peek over there to see how Edward's day goes....it doesn't go well...and Jake shows up besides. ;)
Thanks for the review. Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It
Edward's inner voice is so entertaining. He should be glad Icky-Vicky left, Edward didn't order the truck to disturb them. Bella seems to bring out the worst in him - LOL. Edward wearing the hat, Bella naming his ride the dickmobile ..... can't ait to read more
Author's Response: Whoops! Hi mystic! Somehow I skipped over this review. Glad you like E's inner voice. I love inner monologue. I'm also liking telling the story in 3rd person so the all-knowing narrator can sound normal while relating ridiculous facts and events. Bella is bringing out the worst in Edward and I think I'd say the same about Edward, bringing out the worst in Bella---she doesn't strike me as the sort that would normally do such extreme, bizarre things. She's being pushed over the edge. ;)
Thanks for thie review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
Bella hanging up her hat on his dick - priceless. Edward is so out of it, completely losing it (and his manners) and Bella's just as bad, yelling back and ogling his junk, totally forgetting to cut the engine of her truck. Their meeting the new neighbour is so desastrous I just have to find out what else you have in store for them.
Author's Response: Hi mystic!
Glad you liked Bella's hatrack. Edward is easily caught off balance, it seems. And Bella is bewildered and awkward. It'a a match made in hell. ;)
Thanks for reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
The idea of a fic within a fic is great. Edward being cockblocked by a truck - ha, ha! Love it.
Author's Response: Hi mystic! Glad you like the idea of a fic within a fic. That cockblocking truck is just the fi5st bad thing in Edward's day...
Thanks for the review. Hope you continue to enjoy.
-bannerday
Reviewer: hey333777 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
ha ha ha I love it.
Author's Response: Hey, hey!
Glad you are getting a laugh out of Edward's misery. More laughing at misfortune on the way. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
I thought this was longer than 4 chapters I never read stories this short, its takes too long to write the whole fanfiction, but I did like the story and will continue to look for updates
Author's Response: Hi missy!
I update usually within the week---so far it's been about every 5 days. This story is burning a hole in my head and I have to get it out quickly before these two crazy kids fry my brains. ;) Thanks for the review.
Hope to hear from you again.
Chapter 5 should be up this weekend, I'm hoping. I'm also on fanfiction if you want to take a peek over there to see how Edward's day goes....it doesn't go well. ;)
Thanks. Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Reviewer: -dreamchaser- (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
HAHA, ok that song is awesome, and fits mr. silk pants to a T. That was great, cannot wait for the next chapter :P
Author's Response: Hi dreamchaser!
Glad you liked the song. I sang that thing all last week as I wrote that chapter! LOL These two crazy, crabby kids!!!! ;)
Thanks for the review of chapter 4.
Chapter 5 should be up this weekend, I'm hoping. I'm also on fanfiction if you want to take a peek over there to see how Edward's day goes....it doesn't go well. ;)
Keep in touch!
-bannerday
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
Love the song choice :) I spy with my little eye one of my reviews I left you: "Review alert from: Crazy4Hockey" I see what you did there and I love you for it lol. Seriously, Dickward doesn't know what he's getting himself into and I guess Cluella (he he) doesn't either.
Author's Response: Hi HC! I hoped you would see yourself! Hope that's okay. I went back to some of the reviews I got from The Transfer and used a few of those. I was able to use yours completely because it wasn't too specific. So that was really cool! Plus, you and I go way back...so it's a way of, I dunno, thanking you for reading and reviewing so consistently?
Glad you liked that song choice. I couldn't get that out of my head the whole chapter as I typed away, so i figured I'd share and send people who weren't familiar with the song to hear it/read it/sing along with it. This is turning into a very interactive story, you know?
And as to your last statement...they have no idea where they're headed. I'm working on chapter 5 and I put a sentence about that in a dream sequence. I can hardly wait... ;)
Thanks for the review, HC/C4H!
-bannerday
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
Oh tell me, tell me!
Could it be the transfer? Oh Squee!
Or perhaps One stupid thing? need to read how minorward behaves with his new neightbour.
oh! oh! oh! is it FFSGSG? This story seems to be pouring out of you!
You see, doesn't matter which one you update - I WIN!
lOVE YOU LONG TIME!
ELLC2011
Author's Response: Me love you long time too! Every ending is happy ending! ;)
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
** waves hand ** Hi B!
Author's Response: **blows kiss** Hi E! Guess what I'm working on???
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