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Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2011 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
I'm glad Bella's rethinking her previous assumption about Edward & I'm anxious to see what happens when Edward confronts her about her snooping!
Author's Response: Hi twimomct!
Bella is definitely remorseful and feeling guilt. Especially now that Edward has done a kind gesture for her. He isn't all bad boy after all. Next chapter is his POV. I'll post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: debr (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2011 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
ok off topic did Master of her universe really get published? I wanted to re read it and can't find it..................
so onto your story...absolutely f***ing fantastic....loving it
djoy0720@netzero.net
Author's Response: Hi debr!
MotU, or Mast of the Universe was a fanfic written by Snowqueens icedragon. The story has been pulled and re-written to get rid of the Twilight aspects but they're still in there buried beneath different names and slightly different events. If you Google The Writers' Coffee Shop Publishing House you can find the first book of the trilogy, Fifty Shades of Grey, which is already available. The second book, Fifty Shades Darker, is available as of Sept. 15th. the third book comes down the line. The author is E.L. James. Let me know if you have problems finding it.
Glad you are liking my story. thanks for the storylove!
Edward's POV is up next chapter. ;) I'll post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2011 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
You really managed to bring a new perspective and several fresh ideas into Bella's "Stella and Ethan" story. The car alarm idea was so funny :-)
I'm feeling a little sorry for Bella right now, because she's so full of guilt. Given that Edward realized she had been in his bed, I hope that he understood her crying, and maybe, just maybe, is going to try to make her feel better in the next chapter...
Oh, and by the way, I liked the more serious tone of this chapter. Life isn't always funny, and if that's what Bella is feeling, it has to be told, right? :-)
Um - it's a bit embarrassing, really - but I managed to hear about "MoTU" (that's the fic you're referring to, right?) only after it got pulled, and I seem to be too stupid to find the book on my own. Could you maybe give me the title, the author, anything that might help? Thanks...
Author's Response: Hi nightline!
I thought chapter 12 was a way for us to see how Bella's perspective is changing. It's also the chapter that her readers will read and of course they will review and she will reply and there may be some PM's that follow as they discuss what's in there. That will be important for how her life begins to change in a most interesting direction. ;)
Bella is defintely feeling remorseful. It's going to confuse Edward but maybe in the end it won't be a bad thing. It may bring out the protectiveward in him. lol And you are right about life not always being silly and funny. there has to be a little serious mixed into this story so we see more depth to these characters. or at least that's my intention. You never know what's coming in life and i guess you never know what's coming up next in this story. ;)
MotU, or Mast of the Universe was a fanfic written by Snowqueens icedragon. The story has been pulled and re-written to get rid of the Twilight aspects but there still in there buried beneath different names and slightly different events. If you Google The Writers' Coffee Shop Publishing House you can find the first book of the trilogy, Fifty Shades of Grey, which is already available. The second book, Fifty Shades Darker, is available as of Sept. 15th. The author is E.L. James. Let me know if you have problems finding it.
Edward's POV is up next chapter. ;) I'll post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
I like your plot but i hate the repetition. Its well overdone and raked over. Props to icy fot the fifty shades refrence, fan i am waiting for 9 15 So begging you to be less repettitious and get to the meet or meat of the story.
Author's Response: Hi angelblue
I thought chapter 12 was a way for us to see how Bella's perspective is changing. It's also Bella's backstory through Stella. And it's what her readers will read and of course they will review and she will reply and there may be some PM's that follow as they discuss what's in there. And that will be most important for the path her life takes shortly because of who those readers are. ;)
Edward's POV is up next chapter. ;) I'll post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
Yet another great chappie... wow... you must be really losing your mind tryin' to keep this fic figured out straight! I look forward to more funny... although I understand that her fanfic is important... I can't wait for it to evolve into more... I am eagerly awaiting the next update :)
Author's Response: Hi Dijah!
I thought chapter 12 was a way for us to see how Bella's perspective is changing. It's also the chapter that her readers will read and of course they will review and she will reply and there may be some PM's that follow as they discuss what's in there. ;)
Edward's POV is up next chapter. Some interesting events ahead! ;) I'll post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: sigh_for_sigh (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
I don't quite understand in this penchant of having multiple POV's repeating the exact same material over and over again. It's something that is so common is this fandom that I just don't understand. That said, your Bella is as always charming to read.
Author's Response: Hi sigh_for_sigh
I think the penchant for including multiple POV's is directly related to Stephenie Meyer writing Midnight Sun and giving us Edward's POV of the same story that appeared in Twilight. I loved reading that, as I'm sure many readers did and I wish she had continued it but oh, well... I've always thought it was interesting to get their dual perspective of things as their acquaintance and then their friendship and relationship developed. Edward's view was just so different from Bella's. Especially for the period of time before they are actually toegther. I thought it was interesting to see how two different people were looking at events that made them connect and drew them together until their POV would become more shared. And maybe that's why Steph didn't actually continue Midnight Sun. Truly, I had never really contemplated the guy's view of what was happening when I developed relationships. Of course I thought of the typical, 'Does he like me, like I like him?" But it was really only insofar as it directly concerned me. I never thought about what was really running through their heads. I'm not sure that makes sense.
Anyway, I thought chapter 12 was a way for us to see how Bella's perspective is changing. It also gave us her backstory through Stella's backstory--obviously they are one and the same. It's also exactly what her readers will read and of course they will review and she will reply and correspondence will develop which will direct the path Bella's life is going to take. Her art is imitating life and her life will begin to immitate her art as the story continues. I won't post complete chapters anymore. It won't be necessary. I just felt this one was because of where I'm going. ;)
I'm glad you find my Bella charming. I kind of like that dorky girl. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
Excellent chapter! I loved seeing Bella's point of view.
I wonder if Edward will make Bella feel better...
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Hi Bella_Cullen!
I thought chapter 12 was a way for us to see how Bella's perspective is changing. Her chapter gives us her backstory, which is Stella's and Bella's backstory. lol It's also the chapter that her readers will read and of course they will review and she will reply and there may be some PM's that follow as they discuss what's in there. ;)
Edward's POV is up next chapter. ;) I'll post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
Wow...how does someone write a fanfiction inside a fanfiction, that really isn't fiction to the writer, and the original writer (banner) need to write in a different way that she writes normally (gah...I think I confused myself)?! Well, anyways...briliantly done. I felt as if the character was writing and not you. Very confusing to explain, but easy to enjoy. Loved the whole think, but only one damn problem....we're still stuck in Edward's bedroom smelling the freakin strawberries.....LOL! We want to see what the hell he is thinking and now you've got us really wanting to hear more....lol Can't wait to hear what that poor confused boy is thinking. Maybe the Strawberry Genie came and sprinkled a little strawberry love dust on his pillow, or maybe his drawer will go into vibration mode again, and when he opens it, he'll smell some type of strawberry body lotion (yeah I think it would be in there, lol) and figure that would be a rational explanation. Maybe his keychain did it!!! ROFL. Love the Fifty Flavors reference again (I think that was due to me from Baskin Robbins comment???) and again your entire writing style just makes my day! Can't wait for more!!! Just got our power back, and found your story today. It's going to be a good day!! Send us more soon.
Author's Response: Hi RW!
I'm glad you liked the way I did the fic-in-a-fic. That was really hard for me to write but in the end I felt happy with it. Of course I won't include full chapters from here on out, but that part was important to include. I thought chapter 12 was a way for us to see Bella's backstory and get to know her a little better, because Stella's story is, of course, Bella's. I think it also shows how Bella's perspective is changing. It's also the chapter that her readers will read and of course they will review and she will reply and there may be some PM's that follow as they discuss what's in there. ;)
Edward's POV is up next chapter. It's a heck of a chapter. I want you to remember these words you wrote: "Can't wait to hear what that poor, confused boy is thinking." Remember that line. Because you'll get that poor confused boy and what he's thinking and you have no idea just what he has to contemplate! ;) I'll post in a few days.
Fifty Flavors is a reference to Fifty Shades, a character in Master of the Universe, but it did sort of go in the Baskins-Robbins direction. lol
Glad you like my writing style. A number of raders have said that but I don't know what it really is...it's just the way I express myself. I guess it's thorough and I like to fiddle with language.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
That was fun to read! Looking forward to the next chapter. Loved the reference to MOTU.
Merrily
Kat
Author's Response: Hi Kat!
I thought chapter 12 was a way for us to see how Bella's perspective is changing. we've also got her backstory and why her life has taken the path it has. It's also the chapter that her readers will read and of course they will review and she will reply and there may be some PM's that follow as they discuss what's in there. ;)
I'm glad you like the little MotU references. they're fun to throw in there and it makes me feel closer to Fifty Shades. ;)
Edward's POV is up next chapter. ;) I'll post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
This chapter was a nice re-cap of what has gone on from Bella's POV. I like that this story gives me an idea of what goes on on the "other side of ff", the authors POV. I only read, I don't write, so it is interesting to read from Bella the process she goes through to write FF, and the thoughts that run through her head.
I can't wait to read more
CM
Author's Response: Hi CM!
I thought chapter 12 was a way for us to see how Bella's perspective is changing. It's also the chapter that her readers will read and of course they will review and she will reply and there may be some PM's that follow as they discuss what's in there. ;)
I'm glad you like the little peek into what goes on behind the scenes with these stories as far as the writing aspect goes.
Edward's POV is up next chapter. ;) I'll post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
It'll be interesting to know what certain READERS think of her story. Not hard to find any similarities to a certain neighbour!
Looking forward to Edward's POV :)
Author's Response: Hi Looby!
Thank you for getting why Bella's chapter is here. There will be readers reading and those readers will be reviewing! and there may very well be correspondence through PM's regarding those reviews and the replies they spawn. lol
Edward's POV is up next chapter. ;) I'll post in a few days.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-bannerday
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 12: Post Time
Bella punishing herself with the Asshole-hat - LOL! And then they both go to sleep with the scent of the other in their noses, how sweet is that.
The banner for bellybean's fic is awesome and promises lots of citrus.
Author's Response: Hi mystic!
Bella has certainly put herself in the corner in time-oput, hasn't she? LOL and yes, it appears they at least have gone to bed with each other's scent in their noses...hopefully that will bloom into something more physical down the road! lol
Glad you liked the banner. There will be citrus down the road...we won't just be sticking to strawberries here. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2011 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
That was a rather serious chapter, after all of the laughs. But I think it was needed. I had a feeling something was going to happen for Edward to realize that maybe what he was doing wasn't going to work for him forever.
Kate was awful, and I don't blame him for being pissed about it.
Poor Bella, feeling asshole-ish for snooping around his place. The hat was kind of the last straw, huh?
LOVED his realization that she was in his bed and I can't wait to see where that goes next with the following chapter.
Author's Response: Hi Discordia!
I keep falling farther and farther behind on review replies! Sorry this is so late!
I think the seriousness of chapter 11 was necessary to get to know Edward better. Now you know more about him and you feel more of a connection to him. He's not a heartless womanizer. I think it's safe to say Kate just bitchslapped that out of him.
And Bella...all teary and remorseful...yeah, the hat was the last straw...
Thanks for the review for chapter 11!
Hope you like chapter 12 if you haven't read it and if you have and reviewed...I'll get there...mid-November by the looks of things. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
Nice to know that he is growing up. Lol. Another thing.. Is bella PMS-ing? I mean really? Dear Lord! HaHa! Loved it and Love you.
Kate:D
Author's Response: Hi Kate!
Edward ran into an epiphany wall! And Bella...teary and remorseful after he's done something so nice for her. No she's not PMS-ing, though you weren't the first to suggest it. I suppose she could be...things would be hitting her harder, right? lol
Thanks for the review and thanks for the love!
Hope you like chapter 12 if you haven't yet read it. and if you have and reviewed...I'll get there eventually!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 10: Into the Lair
Sugar Honey and Iced Tea!!!!!! Omg OMg OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sits closer to the screen until the next chapter appears.
TOO GOOD!!!! Loved it and love you!
Kate :D
Author's Response: Hi Kate!
Holy Eiffel Tower I am so far behind on the replies!!!
Thanks for the review of chapter 10. Glad you loved chapter it!
-bannerday
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
Well, that's a helluva ending!!
Author's Response: Hi beth!
I keep falling farther and farther behind on review replies! Sorry this is so late!
Thanks for the review for chapter 11! For some reason I keep thrwing in those little cliffie-esque endings. ;)
Hope you like chapter 12 if you haven't read it and if you have and reviewed...I'll get there...mid-November by the looks of things. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: sigh_for_sigh (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
Your Edward is really charming. It's funny some reviewers found him unsympathetic. I found him very sympathetic the whole way through, even when he was a manwhore. But now i also found him vulnerable. It's a hard thing to do to make the hero vulnerable, but not weak and I think you suceeded. To top it all off, it didn't feel as if this was some complete characterization mishap. It felt real for Edward to react that way to Kate. One of the things I think your story does really well, is retain the "guy" voice, and all it's flaws while still pandering to the reason why every girl reads twific -- searching for a romantic ideal. You are very good at making the unbeleivable, beleivable. Bravo. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Hi sigh_for_sigh!
I keep falling farther and farther behind on review replies! Sorry this is so late!
Thanks for the review for chapter 11! Glad you are liking my Edward. What I've done, I think, is present Edward to my readers as Bella has been presented with him. She sees one thing, one aspect to his personality but she is learning that there is more to him. Of course there is more to him; we've all got layers. His cheesy playboyness is the facade. We're beginning to see what else there is behind the facade, what he has to offer. Bella is seeing it in bits and pieces as well, though she is less informed than my readers. ;)
I'm glad you like the guy "voice" I present as well. They guy-ness is important, it's what makes guys so exotic to us girls...they're just so different sometimes. lol
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Thank you for the compliments.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
A more serious chapter this time, but still very good. It's nice to see that Edward isn't quite so insensitive as he seems, that he actually has some values. And what will he do know that he knows that Bella's been in his bed?
Author's Response: Hi Daybreak!
I keep falling farther and farther behind on review replies! Sorry this is so late!
Every so often I have to throw in some weriousness so we get to know the depth of these characters, I think. You know edward a little better now. next chapter you'll know more about Bella and what goes on in her mind. and then it's back to the silly in chapter 13---I can't stay away for long! lol
Thanks for the review for chapter 11!
Hope you like chapter 12 if you haven't read it and if you have and reviewed...I'll get there...mid-November by the looks of things. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: Jazmine10 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
I've been behind on my reading of this fic. I have to say, it was awesome! And I shouldn't have waited. I LOVE the MOTU references! Oh how I miss fifty! I love this fic. It made me LMAO at work. I'm sure I looked crazy laughing by myself.
Author's Response: Hi Jazmine!
I keep falling farther and farther behind on review replies! Sorry this is so late!
Glad you enjoyed the MotU references. there are just soooo many of us out there who are missing him like crazy. At least I can remind us of him through my silly parodies.
I'm glad you are enjoying the story and getting a good laugh. Not every chapter will be funny...but most will...i can't control myself very well. ;)
Thanks for the review for chapter 11!
Hope you like chapter 12 if you haven't read it and if you have and reviewed...I'll get there...mid-November by the looks of things. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
Hahahaha! Sniffing freaks!
As usual - sublime!
Author's Response: Hi Looby Luscious!
I keep falling farther and farther behind on review replies! Sorry this is so late!
Well, now at least we know that B & E have each other's scents in their noses, if not on each other's minds. lol
Thanks for the review for chapter 11! Glad you liked it!
Hope you like chapter 12 if you haven't read it and if you have and reviewed...I'll get there...mid-November by the looks of things. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
HOLY SHIT you left it there?!? Not nice at all. I am learning that you have a bit of a mean streak.
I am feeling bad for Edward. I was beginning to dislike him, and wanted to give him a good old fashioned bitch slap, but I am now feeling sorry for the womanizer. That Kate was a bitch, I still want to bitchslap her.
Poor Bella was almost in the clear. Damn strawberry shampoo, gets her caught everytime.
Now I need some chocolate chip cookies...and I don't have any chocolate chips in my house. SIGH...
Till next time
CM
Author's Response: Hi CM!
I'm waaaaaay behind in replying once again!
I guess I do have a bit of a mean streak. For some reason I'm just loving leaving my readers haning from cliffs all over the place.
I don't think you need to worry about giving Edward a bitchslap. Kate did that for us. Old Womanizward ran right into an epiphany wall, didn't he?
Bella almost escaped...that version of the Lord's prayer didn't help her much. There's something so innocent about the scent of a strawberry...and Edward has that scent in his flaring nostrils right about now. ;)
Thanks for the review. I always love your reviews. They make me giggle and guffaw like an Emmett.
-bannerday
Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
So, our Dickward had himself a little epiphany? Sounds quite promising. I love this so much and believe it's one of the smartest pieces of fanfiction I've read in a long time...and that's saying something because I've read a lot! Great job. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hi samekraemer!
I keep falling farther and farther behind on review replies! Sorry this is so late!
yeah, Manwhoreward ran smack into an epiphany wall in chapter 11. lol WOW. Thank you for the wonderful compliments. I'm so glad you are enjoying the read and think it's a smart bit of fic. I love the concept; I thought it was so different and can't believe for the thousands and thousands of Twi-fics out there this is the first fic-fic. ;) I just hope I can keep delivering all the way through. I know chapter 12 is going to be a bit different for readers to handle but it's necessary, I think, to where I'm heading in the story. We'll see...
Thanks for the review for chapter 11!
Hope you like chapter 12 if you haven't read it and if you have and reviewed...I'll get there...mid-November by the looks of things. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
I knew Bella couldn't get away w/o Edward finding out! Will she fess up or wait til he says something?
Author's Response: Hi twimomct!
I keep falling farther and farther behind on review replies! Sorry this is so late!
It appears that particular version of The Lord's Prayer didn't help Bella very much! there will be a conversation between Bella and Edward regarding the Snooperella in his bed. ;)
Thanks for the review!
Hope you like chapter 12 if you haven't read it and if you have and reviewed...I'll get there...mid-November by the looks of things. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: amelia30 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
ok edward is back in a rather heavy chapter.when i started the story i thought oh good a funny story not angst.well you proved me wrong and more surprising i liked it.edward`s hurt with kate`s lie and bella`s thoughts for the snooping makes them more than two hilarious characters ,makes them likeable in a more tender way.(it started with bellas thoughts about edward`s music i found it endearing that she search the hole place but she respected his music).and you make me like edward is not difficult,i always like him,vampire,brooding,dominant,your sexy monkey.but to make me like bella it`s huge.i don`t even like cannon bella.so maybe i did not laugh so much in this chapter but you made me want to hug them.(ok i always want to hug edward)great job once more
Author's Response: Hi amelia!
I keep falling farther and farther behind on review replies! Sorry this is so late!
This story will mostly be light with a side dish of silly but it can't all be that way, in my mind at least. I think to make the story believable and to really get to some depth with the characters you need some serious. you appreciate the characters more if you know they have to also go through a struggle. But I'm glad to know that you liked the bit of angst I had to put in there. See, now you appreciate Edward a little more and don't think of him as a lost cause.
I'm glad you thought the bit about Bella respecting Edward's music was endearing. She's respecting the very innermost, creative part of him, even as she's checking out his house to see how he lives on a day-to-day basis. I thought respecting the music gave us some hope for Bella...she's not just a busybody, she's just never come across an Edward Cullen before...he's really larger than life to her, just like Ethan Collins is. LOL and I thought canon Bella was rather boring, but maybe that was because we were getting her view of events and she's self-deprecating and feels herself unworthy to begin with, so whatever personality she might have wasn't really included...she was too busy being overwhelmed with Edward.
Thanks for the review!
Hope you like chapter 12 if you haven't read it and if you have and reviewed...I'll get there...mid-November by the looks of things. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: neyvada (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2011 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
Aaahhh, I can't wait for the next chapter ! The last cliff was awesome, and this one is great too. I wonder how will Edward react. Thank you very much for sharing this with us. It's very well written. I look forward to read you soon.
Author's Response: Hi neyvada!
I keep falling farther and farther behind on review replies! Sorry this is so late!
glad you liked that last cliffie and this one as well. At some point there will indeed be a convo about the Bella-in-the-Bed. ;)
Thanks for the review! Thanks for the compliments!
Hope you like chapter 12 if you haven't read it and if you have and reviewed...I'll get there...mid-November by the looks of things. ;)
-bannerday
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