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Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2011 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I always love your chapters, but this one... wow! I laughed so hard, I mean, seriously Alice? What else could you have told Bella - that you walked in on Edward masturbating one time? I think that could have been more embarrassing for everyone involved (including Bella) - but only just!
And hey, how did you get into my head? My penname isn't FRANfiction, but the second paragraph of her review could have been mine :-)
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I don't know what to say... hmmm... actually the problem is that I think I have too much to say that I can't actually get it all out... all great things of course :)
Sooo... Alice was very verbal about Edwards... exploits. I'm not sure yet what to think about that... she just met Bella like a few minutes ago and she spills her brothers 'manslor' ways... where's the loyalty??? ;)
When is he gonna figure out that Jake doesn't live there? Maybe he will ask some questions while at her house during the black out... I'm just wondering... will he bring the dented candle from his bedroom??? And what possible explanation could he come up with for how that happened... will he yell at the maid? Or will he go on some really funny and crazy tanget of mental banter like he did witht the whole 'she was in my bed' thingy?
And the question that is buring my brain... When will Bella finally burst and spill the deal about snooping around the 'dick-cave'? I know she is gonna spill... she just doesn't have it in her to keep it a secrete much longer... she suffers from major guilt...
I love the story and am eagery awaiting the next update... of course... this is usual right?
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Alice forgot about a Mimbo in her listing of male-whore bashing lol. At the end of the chapter, you make Edward sound like he's one of those strangers who lure kids away with promises of candy and puppies but in his case, it would be more like wine and sex lmao. I'd willingly go with him though. Can't wait for the candlelite dinner :)
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
That was hysterical. Really hysterical. The whole Alice warning Bella that her brother is a bit of a whore, and telling her brother most likely to stay away from Bella. So so funny. I was wondering what in the world Edward was going to say in the classroom. Was her going to apologize or proposition her? Either one was possible considering it Edward the perv...lol. Ah...we all enjoy Edward the perv, and I feel that someday Bella may enjoy him a lot more than we know. It was a little strange how Edward was watching Eric. Jealousy???? When Edward and Bella had the blackout on their street, I was actually so so happy. These two are going to get to talk and damn...even Chicken, I mean Edward, LOL...is hopefully going to enjoy himself with Bella, or maybe enjoy Bella...hmmm. This should be one freakin good conversation over candles and chicken....gah. I love it all!!! I wonder when the conversation will include Jake and if Bella will slip up and tell Edward that she is not dating Jake! Hmmmm......so much to look forward to...with Asshole and Bitch! LOVE IT!!
Reviewer: bellsandarmour (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Love it!
Reviewer: Leilal (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I just have to thank-you for this delightful tale! I read it right away! Mahalo=TY Aloha, Leilani update soon!
Reviewer: allthingseandb (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Lol I am so loving this story! Hope they get to know each other more over their candlelight dinner...lol! More please!
Reviewer: xoerinxo8 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I am sooooooo (x10,000) excited to see an update!! Love this story and I love how you write these characters! Cannot wait to see a new update! Love it!
Reviewer: hot99z (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I don't remember if this is the first time that i have reveiwed for this story or not. i do review at times, anyhow enough about me and more about the story.... you are killing me with these chapters that keep ending with cliffies. I'm loving the story so far and can't wait to see what diner will be like. can't wait to see what happens when edward figures out that jake isn't bella's man, and how that conversation play out on why bella was in edwards room. hmmmm waiting for more. oh and I completely agree with the review in this chapter about prolonging housework, kids, husband.... yeah, im currently reading like 15 different books so new reviews are awesome, cant tell you how many times my husband threatens to throw away my computer, or cell phone(if im away from my computer). However the best part is I'm at work right now and seeing how I work on an ambulance if we don't have a call I don't have anything to do so I can read to my hearts content. Oh and I'll take the hug but not the eiffel tower seeing how most of the french hate americans, and I am a true blue southern style grits they probably wouldnt care to much for me.
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Oh, I'm so loving the story within the story with the reviews and everything! Great job so far! Sorry I don't review as often as I shoud, but I'm so loving it. School normally doesn't give me enough brain power to be able to form reviews that would make sense. But I'm here, lurking most of the time! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
dark and wine and sexy man at the door with candles oh my .........now if one of them were to put on silk pjs I would have to just die from the heat of the thought
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens with the "candle light" dinner. Will Edward find out that she has no boyfriend? Will Bella realize that the "toy" was a joke?
We shall see!!!!
LOVE IT!!!
Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I am totally loving this story.
I am usually one of those "lurkers" who doesn't review, but you are making me see the error of my ways. Hopefully my little review will bring as big of a smile to your face as your story has to mine.
MANSLORE!!!!!!!!!!!! Too funny.
Reviewer: serendipity1 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
The predator's coming to dine…and he's bringing candles and wine.
Loved this line....who am I kidding....loved the entire chapter....it draws me in......can't wait to read the next chapter....keep up the great work.
:)
Reviewer: Kils (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I can't express how much I love this Story. so freakin awesome
Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
AHHHH You're my own personal brand of heroine!!!! It seems that whenever I'm feeling funky up pops your next installment and it makes my day Thank you thank you thank you
twimom1960
Reviewer: wdmmom4 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Great update!! Keep them coming!!!
Reviewer: wsharp30 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I'm pulled in two dieections: Don't listen to Alice, Bella! and Run away from him Bella! Love this FF and looking forward to their dinner.
Reviewer: katlyn_eliz (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I always love seeing that this story has been updated. I wonder if Edward happened to see anything on Bella's laptop when she wasn't in the room. I bet this blackout dinner will be exciting, and I wonder if Edward will bring up the issue about the strawberry smell on his pillow. If so, I bet Bella will be glad for the limited amount of light, so he doesn't see her looking so guilty. This is my first time reviewing your story. Reading it has opened my eyes that I should put in a little time to show my appreciation, because you've spent so much of your time writing such an amazing, entertaining, and witty story. I can't wait till the next chapter, i'm sure the dinner conversation will be quite interesting to say the least. haha
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
So, Alice warned Bella about her womanizing brother... I think she was too late, there's already something there. And why do I think that Bella's bunny slippers will be seen by someone? LOL. And just what might happen at the candlelight dinner? Oh, and did Edward possibly read something on Bella's laptop while she was out of the classroom? I would definitely not put that past him... Could make for some interesting stuff in the future, since he's bound to have recognized himself and Bella in Ethan's and Stella's characters.
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I love the collection of names Alice has for Edward's whoring ways & socialite skank-ho had me rolling! It's been a rough couple of weeks & I definitely needed the laugh!
Can't wait to see what else is in store for them & what Edward does w/ the tidbit of knowledge he gleened from reading Bella's laptop.
Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Love this story! I LOL at many parts of it! Can't wait to see what happens at their candlelit dinner!
thanks for writing!
Reviewer: hayleyhoo (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
I loved this :D we can already see Edward is changing yaya hehe can't wait to read more :D x
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Excellent chapter!
I think Alice might be a tiny problem, should anything happen between Edward and Bella.
They're going to have dinner together....I can't wait to see how that will turn out!
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 14: Puzzling Pieces
Don't worry about the Eiffel Tower - just bring Edward, wine and candles - then leave!!!!
I am trying to guess which of your reviewers will make the connection - I'm guessing the new one. :)
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