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Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
Can't wait for Edward's thoughts on the Jake-break-up and Bella's reaction to his most pressing question - that is if he really dares to ask.
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
Ooh, busted! Poor Bella. Bedroom snooper, candle denter, stress fainter, unwitting cockteaser, feeble liar. She can't seem to catch a break. But it was a nice little evening. They were so cute together. I wonder if this was the most dynamic conversation with a woman Edward's ever had aside from with Esme or Alice. Looking forward to Reading how Bella explains her way out of this one!
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
I'll never look at strawberries and whipped cream the same way again... "Fruit and a dairy product" - LOL...
They both have a way with words that makes me howl with laughter. I wonder why one of them didn't just bang their head against the wall on one occasion or the other ;-) (I mean, they talked an entire evening, and there was probably one sentence tops that came out as intended...)
Reviewer: amelia30 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
oh god i thought in the start that we managed to avoid body harm but no you had to have her causing hurt after the faint episode.but of course this is not clear as well.was edward in pain?(which is unforgivable) or was he turned on?(which is the goal).i said it before you are pure evil,a genius evil but evil nontheless.anyway i hope you will give us edwards version of the event and then i will know.i was wondering if flitting bella will spill the word about her state of virginity then edward will have on his hands a virgin fainter .what is the word about the unmarried girls in old years that used to faint with no apparent reason?depidant or something like that.edward is over his head here.
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
OK...that was a greal blackout...blackout. LOL! These two are so amazing together, and they aren't even together together yet...LOL! Love it! I can feel like I am sitting in that room...watching these two talk, as if I am watching a play, and I am sitting in the audience. It was amazing. The quiet of the darkness, and the complete electrical pulse that was still moving between these two....gah. I have to say...Edward's inner voice was really running wild....does she have her period...is she pregnant...LOL. It was really sweet though to hear how Edward was so upset with Jake, if she was pregnant. God...these two are killing me. So much almost there, and that whole meal....wow oh wow. How do you spell sexual tension....ah...."b.l.a.c.k.o.u.t" LOL! I think this blackout has worked wonders for their new relationship. Well, the double blackout. Edward was so sweet taking care of Bella. I can't wait for Bella's answer now...lol. "Yeah...I was lying to you about Jake because, well, you know you were being a complete and utter asshole, as you know since you have the hat and it fits now...LOL...and I was afraid of the Predator that you are" ROFL. I laugh everytime she calls him the Predator. I keep thinking of that movie with Arnold Schwartzenegger. LOL! Some kind of super creature...lol. Love this damn story and can't wait for these two to open their eyes and see what is right in front of themselves. Ah...I picture a day when these two are riding down the sreet, in Edward's car...wearing their hats and smiling at the day, listening to the radio. Maybe it's not too far away...yes...LOL. Thanks Banner for making my day.
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
Well... Bella got some quality Predator time... he was seriously sweet in this chappie. I wonder how long it will take her to figure out that he is genuine? Well, since he's a recovering sleizoid... it might be a while. Well Bella gave him a nice little bit of exercise with restraint... I can't wait to see what happens next... Im a bit worried about Bella though. She might not survive his line of questioning;-)
I am eagerly looking forward to the next update!
Dijah
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
I was hoping Edward would ask about his bed!
Seems like they both got to know each other a little better & realize the other wasn't so bad.
Cant wait to see what Edward's reaction is to Bella's little confession
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
Loved the blackout dinner. Aww, Edward isn't always a doucheward :) He has great bedside manner so to speak ;) And look at Bella, releasing a little bit of her inner vixen even if she didn't know she was doing it lol.
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
Another great chapter. Although the suggestion of Bella face planting into his lap would have been HILARIOUS, I think your idea worked really well. They seem to be making a little progress, and although the conversation wasn't without some bumps, I think it went well.
I love that Bella was driving him crazy with the strawberries. And that he did bring up the fanfic site. Also, I'm really glad that he asked about Jake. I can't WAIT to see his reaction to her answer.
Reviewer: GG999 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
I loved this chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: serendipity1 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
I loved every single thing about this chapter! Fantastic! Brilliant! I love that I am seeing these two in a different way. I mean Edward and Bella. You can't get much better than that right? Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
I just love Edward's inner musings, LOL! And he's in quite some trouble now, methinks... especially now that he knows Jake is not an issue. And perhaps Bella has gotten something to think about now that she knows Edward has connections in publishing...
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
"mulling over her menses" - cracking!!
Another fab chapter. Now the truth is out about Jake!!! Wonder how Edward will take that? Probably do a little internal cartwheel. :)
Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
I loved the playful banter between them. And I too would have been tempted to write in that face-plant, but I like the way this worked out. You got to see a little of that protective/saviour like side that Edward has. Well did! Looking forward to the next chapter. ~MissJanuary
Reviewer: ToMyMuse (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much
On the floor and in his arms! "sandalwood scented sex candles"--nice alliteration. Can't wait for the next update. I read another fic to kill time while waiting on your update, and while it had it's merits, the contrast with your writing is well, there's no contest. Congrats on all the tomato soup awards! You deserved them, and you had my vote.
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
Great chapter! lol loved that Edward caught her and wouldn't let her down afterwards lol XD
The strawberries was just the icing on the cake! I mean wow, way to get Edward's attention lol
I'm curious to what Edward's going to say about Jake... lol this should be interesting...
Can't wait to see how they progress! :D
Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
SWEET!
Reviewer: Orrington_Rose (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
I adore this story, your characterization is just so lovely. One thing I'm a bit confused about POV this chapter was in thir person omniscent I thought we were doing third person thigh with BPOV and EPOV. I guess I was wrong lol.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 16: Enlightenment
I loved this chapter! They had a wonderful evening....I just hope it finishes that way after this talk about Jake.
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2011 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much
Gahhh!!! Tell me he's gonna catch her and pls pls update soon!!!! Really soon!!!! Can't wait for more !!!!
Reviewer: madiloca (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2011 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 13: Not What One Would Expect
Still laughing at Em's meat packing industry comment!
Reviewer: Amnotkim (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much
Better be his arms!!! :) love it love it love it!!! :)
Reviewer: hockeywife87 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much
OMG can I just say I being a dork myself I love dork Bella! LOVE HER!
Reviewer: Kils (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much
HAVE 2 TELL EVERY1 ABT THIS FANFIC
Reviewer: amelia30 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 15: In the Dark About So Much
oh my god,she is so busted(or not).i really hope that edward is going to grap her because i have became familiar with the twisted way your mind works and i am afraid that you will have her to grap precious edwards dick and cause harm(don`t forget she has already damaged his candle).so ican`t wait for the next chapter to see whether edward saved her or she ended up with head trama or worse caused trama.i don`t think you will be so cruel after all we want edward to trust her with his sensitive areas.
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