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Reviewer: JacksonRobKellan (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It
It's ri-dick-ulous how much I love this story already. I'm hooked.
Just like Mayer Hawthorne 'I'm hooked',
Ana
Reviewer: JacksonRobKellan (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
-maniacally laughing-
I've got to try the baseball thing one day. I'm sure my boyfriend would just die!
Really, if this story continues to go the way it's going there's no way you'll ever see anything less than a 10 by me!
Loving you for this laugh,
Ana
Reviewer: JacksonRobKellan (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
Wow. And, when I say wow, I mean WOW! A good wow. I've only just started this sotry and I'm addicted already.
Your Edward seems like he's going to be a good guy with a side of asshole-y-ness, am I right? Hope I am, those guys are always the most entertaining. Sometimes.
I know how Bella feels. It is so aggrivating to find mistakes in your writing. I wanted to be an English teacher like her once, but my grammar is horrible. All my students would fail...because of me!
Chapter 2 here I come.
hugs and kisses,
Ana
** 10/10 for a great beginning and some laughs :)
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
The dream was great...layers upon layers upon layers. You kill me!
I really enjoyed this chapter. Edward's peace offering was really sweet. And I'm so glad Bella is getting a glimpse of Edward's past. I think it'll help her reconcile the two sides of his personality.
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
Awww, Edward did a good job of apologizing. I'm guessing Alice neglected to tell Edward that Bella's been invited to their picnic? And will Edward figure out her pen name is Belly beans after his visit?
Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
Lots of gigglesnorts and "awwwww" 's this chapter! This story is so great -- you really have the nuances of the characters. The awkwardness is beautiful and real. Can't wait for the party/barbecue. That should be epic!
Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: DaSrO (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
great chapter! got me giggling several times...and, I do have all the Harry Potter movie posters...
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
Loved the update. Things are starting to happen. SQUEE!
I'm still on Breaking Dawn rush. Haven't loved one of the movies like this since the first one. Can't believe we have to wait another flipping year!
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
Ha, he's pretty sure about Bellybeans as a pseudonym after her weird reaction :P
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
Hahahahaha!!!!! This was absolutely the most hilarious first meeting ever! I love that she tried to explain the car issues - that was priceless. And the hat trick???!! Good for her! Just who does Edward think he is any opening her door to yell at her! ...prick (lol)
Still chuckling...
Chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
Hello! Just happened upon the story today. I really like it so far, though Edward seems to be a bit of a hoe-cake lol. Well going to go read some more now before I head off to work.
Talk to you soon!
Chyla
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
He's jealous - that's so funny :-)
And they started over, might be lucky, third time's the charm - all thanks to the Lucky Charms, of course *LOL*
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
Edward can be so sweet! :D I was not expecting that at all! I mean sure I thought he was gonna say something to her to make up for his behavior (that's just Edward) but he went all out and brought/bought her posters for her classroom! How sweet! So now anytime Bella looks at her walls, she's gonna think of Edward :) Perfect!
I love how Alice and Jasper are hanging out more :D They're just about the cutest couple ever! I also like how you threw Ben in there, can't wait till he meets Angela lol
So now Edward has called her bellybeans... does this mean he'll find the fanfiction? >:) Oh goodie! And if Esme is really one of her readers... then ROFL! That's PRICELESS!
Oh I can't wait for the BBQ! XD That's gonna be friggin awesome! Update soon and keep up the outstanding work! ♥
Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
As usual, I love Edward's inner ramblings. And I'm glad to see they're starting over. I wonder if Edward will pick up on the "Bellybean" thing and snoop some more on the internet... And it's beautiful how you mix real-life movies and such into this fic - it's fun with the references.
Author's Response: Hi Daybreak!
I don't know how I did it, but I somehow skipped a page of reviews and I was trying to be so good about replying to them all. So...it's been about 10 days. Thank you for your review of chapter 20. I'm glad you liked Edward's inner ramblings. I love a good E-ramble myself. And he's a smart man...give him some time, he'll contemplate that name thing again. Thank you for loving how I mix real-life, fanfic and the fic-in-a-fic universes. It's kind of fun! ;)
The good news is I just posted chapter 21. So now you can read what happens next! lol
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
Lovely chapter. I'm so glad he sorted things out with her. AND he knows her penname - just not that it's her penname ... yet!! I'm sure when Esme reveals all, he will recognise it instantly!
Author's Response: Hi Looby!
I don't know how I did it, but I somehow skipped a page of reviews and I was trying to be so good about replying to them all. So...it's been about 10 days. Thank you for your review of chapter 20. I'm glad yuou liked that they sorted things out a bit. and yes...he knows her penname...he just doesn't know it. Yet.
The good news is I just posted chapter 21. So now you can read what happens next! lol
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
:-)
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2011 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
I hope that this review makes sense after reading about Bella's dream *fans face, wipes drool, and waits for heart beat to calm* No Words!!! That chick really needs to get laid, JS... its true! Those kind of dreams are too much to process! I hope I don't have such a dream... but only because I sometimes sleep-talk and wouldn't want hubby to hear that... but... mmm, what a nice thought. *shakes head to clear away the steamy-hot-sexy imagery*
Okay... I know that there was more after that... right? *crickets* see everyone is probably stuck like me :-)
Okay, truth time... yeah I liked the rest of the chapter too... I love that Edward did man-up and go see her. I thought that he was in the garage late at night looking for something for her classroom... I like the movie poster idea! Yay, Ben is here just in time to meet Angela!
I can't wait for EPOV to find out what Esme had to tell him! Was he just checking her reaction on the BellyBeans comment or did he really just stumble upon that? Gah... I hate to have to wait!!! *takes deep breaths to calm down*
Anyway... loved it... as usual :-)
I'm off now to contemplate how life would be with Edward, Vampward, Fifty-shades, and Rob oops I mean PRobzz *gigglesnort* mmm... naughty ;-) If I contemplate them in Dom mode... I would just get hot flashes, best to leave that alone... for now anyway ;-)
Thanks a bunch...
Dijah
Author's Response: Hi Dijah!
I don't know how I did it, but I somehow skipped a page of reviews and I was trying to be so good about replying to them all. So...it's been about 10 days. Your review really made me giggle. Sorry I put you through all that exertion reading about the blue Room of Lewd Behavior and the four Doms. lol
The good news is I just posted chapter 21. It's got lots of EPOV, but not the phone-home-to-mama. Not just yet...but Edward did have quite the busy morning before he even got to Fawkes...just you wait. and he'll remember to call Mama C at some point soon...just not yet.
Thank you for reading and reviewing and making me giggle with your contemplations of life with Edward, Vampward, Fifty Shades, R-Patz, P-Robz, Ethan Collins, and Sebastian Kinque. what a perfect world...um...universe?...that would be.
-bannerday
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
I'm so looking forward to the party, hoping Ben will shed some mpre light on Edward's former self. Loved Bella's nightmare and ste shoutout to MoTU, that's really too much hotness to cope with for one girl LOL. All the little hints with the Outsiders and bellybeans .... can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hi mf!
I don't know how I did it, but I somehow skipped a page of reviews and I was trying to be so good about replying to them all. So...it's been about 10 days. Ben will probably shed some light on the inner Edward. And I'm glad to know there are so many MotU fans out there getting a kick out of my shout-outs. lol The good news is I just posted chapter 21. So now you don't have to wait for more...it's here!! lol
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: amelia30 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
another great chapter.i love the way edward interacts with bella(like she is a stange wild animal which can bold anytime) and bella with him,trying to remember that he is a predator but also catching glimpes of the good person under his persona.i can`t wait for the party.i also fear that esme will mess things up.but even if i love them together i also love a good fight between them
Author's Response: Hi amelia!
I don't know how I did it, but I somehow skipped a page of reviews and I was trying to be so good about replying to them all. So...it's been about 10 days since you reviewed chapter 20 of FFSGSG. Glad you loved the way they were beginning to interact. The BBQ should be interesting when we get there...about two chapters away. The good news is I just posted chapter 21. So now you can read what happens next! lol
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
Great chapter!
I'm glad they're going to have a second chance at making this friendship work. Hopefully everything will work out this time. :)
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response: Hi Bella_Cullen884!
I don't know how I did it, but I somehow skipped a page of reviews and I was trying to be so good about replying to them all. So...it's been about 10 days. Thank you for your review of chapter 20. The good news is I just posted chapter 21. So now you can read what happens next! lol
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
Loved this chapter! Assholeward has been transformed into Assward now lol. I'll take this Edward, shit, I'll even take Assholeward. Love Bella and Edward's new new new beginning lol
Author's Response: Hi HC
I loved your "chapter title": "Bella and Edward's New New New Beginning." LOL So, the Assholeward is now an Assward...at some point, maybe he'll be an A+ward.
Thanks for the chapterlove, bb!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
Pushy pushy Alice! And those posters! I loved the reference to "Twilight"... your version I should say. And then that whole MotU reference. OMG!! And I guess you also read UofEM?? Correct?? I loved those little glimpses and I bet you and your Bella are not the first people in the real world and the FF world who have had dreams (nightmares) about the "red room of pain".... Hmmmm???
Can not wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Hi Snowball Sniper!
There is quite a lot of bellybeans in the old bannerday. lol Glad you liked the posters and the Twi-references. And MotU. I just miss that phenomenon so much. This is how I pay homage to that wonderful story that lured so many of us in. And yes...I've read UoEM. I have such fun including all the universes into this universe in my story: the Twi universe, the Written in the Stars universe, the MotU universe, Real Life, Faux Real Life, the fangirl world and what we love about this little obsession of ours. it's really been quite the kick.
Thanks for the review. Glad you are enjoying.
-bannerday
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
I always get gigglesnorts out of this story. I'm hoping Edward will put two and two together...
Author's Response: Hi monica!
Oh you just know he's a smart boy! lol "bellybeans."..I'm sure there's more research on the way. lol
Thank you!
-bannerday
Reviewer: twimom1960 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: Coincidences...and Plan B
I want a blue room of lewd behavior. PLEEEEEEEASE!! If you take plastic wrap and wrap it tightly over your keyboard and screen it is much easier to clean your lap top!!! I have learned this lesson the hard way. It was really great to see your update and I am so glad everything is okay. The dog not so happy as I tried to plastic wrap her too. Great job as always, see you next time
twimom1960
Author's Response: Hi twimom!
What a hilarious review! They are lining up for a chance at the Blue Room of Lewd Behavior...it's like tent city out there. Isn't plastic wrap a wonderful thing? You think so. I think so. Just the dog isn't that into it, but I bet the dog isn't a reader of fanfiction either. So there is that.
Thanks for the giggles.
-bannerday
Reviewer: kty_xii (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2011 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 19: Distractions
OMG!! Ilove this chapter. Especially the end.
I also love love love that he buys her posters for her classroom in the next chapter. He is soooo sweet.(swoon)
as always you are amazing.
kty_xii
Author's Response: Hi kty!
Glad you loved the chapter. and the buying of the poster...either you've got a touch of the all-seeing-
alice in you, or you visited me on ffn. lol
Thanks for the compliments. And thanks for the storylove!
-bannerday
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